Be a Cartoonist In the Fairy World

Furumisa's team drew a comic cartoon, the protagonist is a killer who can never kill. Every time his mission fails for one reason or another, a lot of jokes are made.

As far as the story goes, this is the best Du Ziyuan has seen in the four groups. After all, it is a funny comic, and it does not need to be polished logically. Sometimes it is unreasonable and adds a funny element.

However, like his younger sister, Gu Jiansha still lacks in painting and storyboarding. Is it because they separated their siblings? Du Ziyuan always felt that they shouldn't have only this strength.

"Painting: 6 points, 4 points for painting style, 6 points for splitting, 7 points for creativity, 8 points for plot, your group's score is 31 points."

The siblings had the same score, which also made Gu Jiansha a sigh of relief.

Xia'an was the last one. Her is a "virtual game", and the restriction is "you cannot use "Glory"."

To be honest, this group is the hardest. After all, virtual games only appeared in the fairy world, and Du Ziyuan forbade them to draw "Glory", so they had to create a new game by themselves, which was not small. And also consider the plot, which is even more difficult.

Xia An ran and handed the drawing to Du Ziyuan. Du Ziyuan's expression changed after seeing the first page.

The games designed by Xia An and his group are based on military warfare, that is, the two sides act as soldiers and generals in virtual games, and then conquer, annex, and conquer cities. On the whole, the creativity is somewhat lacking, because this is equivalent to directly forcing a real war story into the background of the game.

They did not express the difference between game wars and real wars. For example, in war games, there may be resource points that regularly produce minerals, but their comics do not have this setting.

But what surprised Du Ziyuan was not the story of their group, but the painting. To be honest, Du Ziyuan really didn't expect Xia An to be the strongest painter among the 5 personal biography, and it was too strong.

"Painting: 8 points, 7 points for painting style, 9 points for shooting, 4 points for creativity, and 5 points for plot. Your group scored 33 points. Congratulations, you won the first place."

When Du Ziyuan announced the final result, the six members of Xia An's team couldn't help cheering.

"Oh! Win!"

"I heard you right? Are we first?"

"Haha! This month is worth it!"

...

In contrast, the other groups are somewhat lost. Especially Jiang Yi and the others were actually at the bottom this time. This made Jiang Yi, who had always regarded himself as a big brother and was absolutely confident in his own strength, a little unacceptable.

He walked over to Du Ziyuan and said, "Teacher, can you show me their paintings?"

"Take it." Du Ziyuan handed him the drawing of Xia An's group.

Yun Ting and the others also followed suit, wanting to see what the first-place painting was like.

A stack of drawings was divided page by page, and almost every 24 people could get one or two. Du Ziyuan’s score is very clear, and the story of the Xia An group is actually relatively poor. What is really powerful is the 9-point shot and 8-point painter. These are the places where talent is the most tested.

When seeing Xia An and their works, the dissatisfaction on Jiang Yi's face gradually subsided, and the Gu family brothers and sisters also showed solemn colors. The gap is so obvious, it is so obvious that you can clearly feel it by just looking at one page. The most optimistic one is probably Yunting. She is really purely appreciating the comics. When she saw the works of Xia An Group, she praised without hesitation: "Wow! The painting is so beautiful! It's better than me." Is much stronger."

Xia An said modestly: "This is the result of everyone's hard work."

Du Ziyuan just smiled and didn't comment on this. Although it is a group of 6 people this time, the 5 personal biography are obviously the core of each group. The style of the work is basically determined by them, and the other 5 people are more in the position of assistants.

Du Ziyuan knocked on the table and signaled everyone to pay attention: "Okay, the evaluation is over. I am not satisfied with your performance this time, but at least it is not too disappointed. I believe you have seen it too. Among the 30, those who can really write stories are only a few, and they are not particularly good. Although this problem can be solved by finding a partner in the future, but at least you have to have a certain ability to distinguish between good and bad stories, or you will be a bad one. It's not fun if the writer is pitted."

"Painting skills, what you need to practice right now is still painting skills. It is best to be able to form your own unique style of painting. Don't blindly imitate me. My style of painting is always changing. You can't finish learning it. Use it. It won’t go smoothly. It’s best to find that style in paintings again and again. As for the storyboard, I suggest you to watch some excellent Ling Ying and Ling TV dramas. Be careful to avoid bad movies and see how others are right. The use of the lens, when and from what angle is the best, there is quite a lot of knowledge in it."

"Okay, I won't say much nonsense, let's announce the reward for the first place now."

The members of Xia An's team immediately became excited, and the others also looked at Du Ziyuan curiously. Isn’t it said that the first prize is a serialization opportunity on "Xinyue Comics"? Is there anything else.

Just listen to Du Ziyuan: "Because your ability to tell stories is really bad, so I decided to provide you with an original story. The comics will be released in the name of our cooperation. I am the original and you are painting."

"What!" Everyone thought their ears had misheard. Teacher Shanfeng is willing to co-sign with them! ? This reward is too big!

You know ~www.readwn.com~ Even if Du Ziyuan does nothing, just put his pen name on a comic, it can bring unimaginable attention, and these attentions are converted into sales. The data It is also quite scary.

What's more, Du Ziyuan also provided them with the original story to make up for their biggest weakness. They make a lot of money at this cheap price! Even if the merits are divided because of the joint signature, they can still distinguish 100% of the 1 merit and 50% of the 100 merit.

The remaining 24 students, including Jiang Yi, all cast envious eyes on the Xia An team.

Du Ziyuan smiled when he saw it, "Don’t be envious. Now I give you a task. If you complete it well, I will also give you the same reward. It would be better to say that I have given you these 5 rewards a long time ago. When you’re ready, it’s up to you when you can get it."

"Really!?" The students immediately became agitated. The welfare of the disciple of Dangshanfeng is really too great!

Du Ziyuan then looked at Xia An's team: "So, since the theme you picked is'Games', then the original plan I want to give you next is..."

"Sword Art Online."