Be a Cartoonist In the Fairy World

"Old thief! I won't call you an old thief anymore, okay? Please continue to get out of the battleship!"

"I have never discovered that I have such a great interest in this kind of warfare. Am I destined to become the **** of war in the world?"

"Ahhhh, there is no warship to see me dying! Please follow-up!"

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"Haha, naive." Du Ziyuan looked at these comments and smiled slightly. I knew that these dead nerds changed their wives faster than they changed their clothes. They were still asking him to pay back his wife's head a second, so I begged him to draw a new ship's wife this second. I really want to make a mockery of "I will always like XXX".

But Jianniang didn't plan to continue painting, at least in the short term. After all, there are only 5 more advanced warships in the organ city, and the others are mass-produced or not so high in combat effectiveness, that is, they cannot become SSRs. According to Du Ziyuan's plan, only the SSR-class ship mother would do it himself. As for the rest, leave it to the students.

"Xiao Cui, go and help me call all those students over." Du Ziyuan said to Wen Cuilong who was practicing.

"Yes."

After a while, Wen Cuilong brought all 30 students to his door. Except for 5 personal biography, the other 25 people are full of curiosity about Du Ziyuan's home. After all, this is a "sacred place" that countless people want to get close to but can't reach. Usually only the five most favored people can come and eat with the teacher. They are very excited to be here today.

Du Ziyuan said to them: "One month is almost the same, have you finished all your paintings?"

"Report to the teacher, it's all done." The five direct disciples replied neatly.

"Well, let me review it, Jiang Yi, you come first."

"Yes, teacher." Jiang Yi took the lead in handing over his cartoon.

The subject he drew was "dining", and the restriction was "not focusing on food."

This is more demanding. Du Ziyuan took a look and found that the story they drew was a story of a little chef's struggle, a bit of a workplace style. Food is only secondary. The focus is on how the protagonist adapts and survives in the "battlefield" of the kitchen.

The creativity is not bad, but the story is written a bit badly, with many logical bugs and forcibly creating conflicts.

This is also impossible. After all, Du Ziyuan originally picked some people who are good at painting, and he didn't think about writing stories at all. Isn't it easy to find a good novel in this world?

However, you still have to score, just listen to Du Ziyuan: "Painting: 7 points, painting style 6 points, 5 points for shooting, 8 points for creativity, 1 point for plot, full score of 50 points, your group's score is 27 points. "

"27 points!" Jiang Yi's face was a little stiff, and he was only halfway through. Is the teacher's grading standard too strict, or their level is too bad?

"Thank you teacher." He backed away holding the drawing, and the students who were in the group with him were also a little frustrated. Especially for the few people who are responsible for writing stories, this one-point plot is really too eye-catching. It is clear that the stories they wrote are rubbish.

There is a saying that a person who writes a story seriously will never find out how bad his story is. In their opinion, this story is already very good, even if it does not get a full score, 6 points should always be available. But in fact, Du Ziyuan's evaluation shattered their illusions.

"Don't bother you too much," Du Ziyuan said. "Drawing and writing stories are two different things. Some people can really do it with both hands, but it's not that you can't become a cartoonist if you are a fan. In fact, as long as you are both If you can do well in any aspect, you are a qualified cartoonist."

"Thank you teacher." Being encouraged by Du Ziyuan, the students' nervousness was relieved a lot.

Think about it, isn’t it just that the story is not well written? Wouldn't it be enough to find a partner to write a novel? Just like their master sister Ning Hanlu, isn't it that they collaborated with Young Master Zuiyu (Nie Xue) to become a super best-selling cartoonist? Now I went to Penglai Jianzong to discuss the issue of an exclusive magazine. It was simply a winner in life.

"Xiao Ting'er, it's up to you next." Du Ziyuan said to Yun Ting.

"Okay, teacher." Yun Ting didn't call his uncle in such a scene, and obediently handed in her manuscript.

The subject matter she picked was "Detective", and there were no restrictions. This is a new subject, and it is a bit too difficult to impose restrictions.

Du Ziyuan took a look at the works in this group, and the painter was on par with Jiang Yi's group, but the shots were much better. It seems that their group has a talent with a good sense of picture. Looking at the story again, it turns out that there is still no way to escape the frame of "Big Detective". It is nothing more than that several suspects are motivated, and then gradually find evidence and use the method of elimination to find the true culprit.

Du Ziyuan hopes that the students can work **** the technique, but obviously they did not achieve this: "Painting: 7 points, 6 points for style, 7 points for splitting, 5 points for creativity, 3 points for plot, your group’s The score is 28 points."

"Thank you, teacher." Although I felt that the score was a bit low, but with Jiang Yi's 27 points in front, Yun Ting was not much disappointed.

When the second group is over, everyone basically sees that Du Ziyuan's scoring standard is probably within this range. Gu Xiaowei, who was the third one, was not so nervous anymore.

Her theme is "music", and the restriction is "not to focus on singing, writing songs, or playing." This is a bit embarrassing, after all, what can you do if you don't paint these? Most people really can't think of it.

However, Gu Xiaowei's group is more spiritual. They actually drew a conservatory, and then directly began to tell the stories of the students in the academy. Because these students have dreams of music, they are very talented in certain fields~www.readwn.com~ So the theme of music is satisfied, but the focus is still on the friendship and love between the students.

"Very good." Finally seeing a group that made him more satisfied, Du Ziyuan was not stingy and directly praised. This made the 6 members of Gu Xiaowei's group very happy.

"Painting: 6 points, 5 points for style, 5 points for splitting, 8 points for creativity, 7 points for plot, your group's score is 31 points."

However, the actual score is not as high as expected. Although they got good scores on the plot, there was a problem with the style and the storyboard. There are a few obvious discontinuities that make people look fascinating.

"Thank you teacher." Although the score is not high, it is tentatively ranked first after all, and Gu Xiaowei is not much lost.

Next it was her brother's turn to see the sand.

His theme is "killer" and the restriction is "cannot die."

The themes given by Du Ziyuan are all weird, with a deliberate feeling of making things difficult. But in fact, it is not a blind offer, because each theme actually corresponds to a work he has prepared.