back to being a teacher

Chapter 83 Let’s talk after get off work

"Because I don't know how to write, there must be many beginnings of such compositions. I have a father, my father looks very old, what about my father..."

"What is aesthetic fatigue is that every time I read an essay, it always has the same beginning and the same contents. Think about it, if you are a marking teacher, out of a thousand essays you read, there are [-]. It’s all like this, will you give me high marks?”

Fang Bai asked softly.

The students below all shook their heads.

"So, we have to learn how to write essays, learn how to write essays, and learn how to write essays that are different from others. We don't expect you to be able to write well, but at least you have something new!"

"To give you an example, if I were to write this essay, "My Father"!"

"How would I write it?"

Fang Bai opened his USB drive again and clicked on a file.

[My father has told me since I was a child that men take charge of the outside world and women take charge of the house. However, he is responsible for all the big and small things at home, while my mother works hard outside to make money. I remember that every day after school, everyone else It was my mother who came to pick me up, but it was my father who came to pick me up...]

[At noon on the day of hoeing, the sweat dripped down to the soil.Who knows dishes on the menu, A Journey. ——Whenever I think of this poem, I think of my father, the man who would pick up a grain of rice and eat it...]

……

Fang Bai wrote a dozen or so beginnings in this document.

Every beginning is different.

But each beginning feels quite novel, and there is a desire to continue reading.

"Do you understand?"

Fang Bai looked at the students below with a smile.

This smile made the students below immediately feel that Teacher Fang was different again.

What kind of species is this man?
I'm afraid it's a little different from us, right?

A math teacher can be a voice actor, make up stories, sing, and shoot videos. How can he teach people how to write essays now? !

gan...

They felt more and more that Teacher Fang was unfathomable.

I thought I already knew the basics, but now I realize that Teacher Fang’s depth is beyond my reach!
"So, next I will teach you how to write a scoring essay!"

"Wanting to score is actually very simple. There are many universal formulas. Let's learn the first one first, which is also the simplest one. This formula can be used at the beginning of any composition on any subject!"

Fang Bai opened a folder with several files in it.

He clicked on the first one.

“Starting with a quote is the simplest way to start a composition!”

"For example, the one from "Compassion for the Peasants"!"

"Having a good beginning will attract the marking teacher to be interested in reading. If the marking teacher is interested, he can guarantee a passing score of 42 points!"

"So, how do you start?"

Fang Bai pulled down the first file.

[I saw such a sentence on the Internet recently...I suddenly remembered...]

[Time cannot speak, but it became the best answer. It took me a long time to understand...]

【My teacher once told me...】

[I accidentally saw a sentence in a book...]

……

"There are many people who don't know how to write the beginning. From the first sentence at the beginning, we have to be different from others. No matter what the subject, we can use these words as the first sentence, and then put what you want to write next! "

"It's best to memorize more verses, inspirational, sad, and nostalgic... all of them. The beginning of the quotation is the most extra point. If you can't memorize the verses, copy some sentences that are moaning without illness!"

"For example, the older you grow, the more lonely you become, and the older you grow, the more uneasy you become!"

"If you really can't remember it, just copy the lyrics, whether it's Jay Chou's, Lin Junjie's, whatever lyrics you think are meaningful, you can write them down!"

"For example, the song "Listen to Dad" that Zhou Jiegun recently released!"

"How to write it? Damn it, you still want to ask me how to write it?"

Fang Bai looked at the students below with a look of admiration.

"For example, there is a song that has been echoing in my ears recently. There is this sentence in the lyrics: Why should you listen to your father? When you grow up, you will understand this sentence... until I sat in the college entrance examination room. Go on, I seem to finally understand this sentence..."

Fang Bai wrote casually. "Then you can continue writing along the way!"

"Remember, in composition, as long as you don't go off topic, go off topic, or write nonsense, it doesn't matter how you write it. Of course you can include lyrics, and even what your dad said and what your mom said can be included!"

Fang Bai heard someone exclaim, "Can you still write lyrics? ', he replied.

"And the so-called true feelings, what is true feelings? To put it bluntly, you can write whatever comes to your mind, but you must be careful to make it smooth and avoid meaningless water characters!"

……

In this class, Fang Bai focused on the composition for the whole class.

From the beginning to the end, and then analyze the meaning of the topic materials word by word. By the end, the whole class of students suddenly felt that they were full of confidence in writing essays.

"Next, you should submit an essay to me every week, or you can give it to Teacher Qin. As for the topic of the essay, let your Teacher Qin assign it to you..."

This sentence directly made Qin Meng glare at Fang Bai with dissatisfaction.

Fang Bai pretended not to see...

As the get out of class bell rang.

The students in the classroom seemed to be waking up from a dream. This class was not a lot of experience, but everyone had a little understanding of writing compositions.

According to what Teacher Fang said, writing essays is actually not as difficult as I thought.

The beginning and end are written according to the formula given by Teacher Fang, and you can write a few hundred words. The rest can be made up as you like...

Damn it, isn’t this only [-] words long?

Even Zhao Yiliang and Zhou Ming, who were sitting at the back of the classroom, felt that they could do it.

"A Liang, are you okay?"

Zhou Ming looked at Zhao Yiliang seriously.

"I think I can do it!"

Zhao Yiliang nodded solemnly.

"I think I can do it too!"

Zhou Ming also nodded affirmatively.

"Damn it, then we two brothers are not allowed to take off?!"

Zhao Yiliang raised his eyebrows.

"Wuhu!"

"take off!"

Then the two brothers suddenly became happy and excited.

come back to the office.

Qin Meng, who took a notebook of notes, looked at Fang Bai who was drinking water.

She licked her lips.

Reminds me of Fang Bai in high school.

He is still so good.

"What are you looking at me for?"

Fang Bai looked at Qin Meng in surprise.

Qin Meng was fascinated by Fang Bai at this time.

"what……"

Qin Meng quickly turned his head aside.

"Aren't you thinking about something unhealthy again?!"

"Teacher Qin, you are at school now!"

"Let's talk about those things after get off work!"

Fang Bai said righteously and seriously.

(End of this chapter)