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Chapter 82 I have a father

"It's impossible not to deduct points for essays, but every year there will be full-score essays, which shows that the marking rule is to look for the special in the ordinary, the excellent in the special, and the best in the excellent!"

"So, if we want to write a good college entrance examination essay, then what we have to do is learn to write essays!"

Fang Bai's words may seem like nonsense, but they are actually nonsense.

"How to write a good essay?"

"Let's take a look at some essays with perfect scores for the college entrance examination!"

Fang Bai took his USB flash drive, inserted the multimedia, and found a file.

[Complete college entrance examination essays, four essays about my father]

[-]. [My father is an ordinary farmer, with a medium build, dark skin, thick limbs, chapped skin on his hands and feet, teeth yellowed by smoking, and gray hair. He is an unrecognizable figure among the farmers. type.Such an ordinary farmer is my dearest, most respected and greatest father. Such emotions are insurmountable by anyone! 】

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[-]. [I am a repeat student.After experiencing the failure of the first college entrance examination, I entered the classroom again to prepare for the second college entrance examination. 】

……

[-]. [Dad is not only responsible for his work, but also gets along well with his colleagues... Dad is also a role model for me to learn from in terms of dealing with people and doing things! 】

[-]. [A man of medium build, with a round face, dark brown skin, and a pair of simple, small eyes that are particularly bright - he is my father! 】

Fang Bai was given a few minutes to read each essay.

After waiting for a while, he said, "Do you think their composition is good?"

Huang Xiangyan felt a little dissatisfied: "Teacher, I feel that what they wrote is not as good as what I wrote!"

At this time, Li Shiguang also jumped out: "Yes, teacher, I think that's what they wrote!"

Even most students think that the perfect score for the college entrance examination is a bit sloppy...can you still get a perfect score at this level?
Fang Bai smiled and knocked on the table again to signal for silence.

"It's normal. In fact, the teacher can tell you this. Every essay with a perfect score in the college entrance examination is actually not very good. Except for the occasional few that are particularly outstanding, the others are not good!"

"And you want to ask why!"

"Actually, it's very simple. There is not enough time for the college entrance examination. The Chinese language test is two and a half hours. In addition, we also have to write the previous basic questions, reading comprehension, appreciation of ancient poems, and translation of ancient texts... This already takes up a lot of time!"

"The time left for you to actually write the essay is only about an hour!"

"It is basically impossible to write an excellent essay within this hour, unless the topic you encounter is something you have seen or written before!"

"In other words, how beautiful can a hastily written composition be?"

"Do you know the number one scholar in ancient times?"

"But there are not many number one picks in history, and have any of the articles they wrote when they were top picks in high school handed down?"

"Yes, but very few!"

“And it’s basically not circulated!”

"why?"

"Because of the rush of time, the article I wrote is not worthy of the title of No. [-] Scholar. Unless the article is excellent and excellent enough to become famous all over the world, otherwise the case can only be sealed."

"The college entrance examination tests psychological quality, reaction ability, solid foundation, and cultural skills!"

"So, it is difficult for us to write an excellent essay, but it is easy to write a high-scoring essay!"

Fang Bai's words were straightforward and thought-provoking.

Even Qin Meng, who was sitting at the back of the classroom, fell into deep thought.

Everyone wants quality education and feels that they should be taught in accordance with their aptitude. However, in this environment, the state is teaching in accordance with their aptitude, but it is in universities, and only outstanding people are qualified to enjoy teaching in accordance with their aptitude.The college entrance examination is like a net, which brings all the good enough fish to live in another area, while those who are not good enough can only stay in the small pond.

Some people describe Hengzhong’s method as making an examination machine.

But Fang Bai feels that this is the best choice under the current environment. As long as the fish produced can be picked up by the net and taken to another area to live, they can enjoy a wider world...

It seems that many teachers will say this to students, if you can copy it in the college entrance examination, that counts as your ability.

The college entrance examination is a turning point in the lives of countless students.

Why does Hengzhong require students to practice Hengshui body, and why has Hengzhong’s learning methods never been revealed?
Even writing a composition has a specific formula. How can you compare it with others?

Others specifically hire people to design the composition format and even the composition theme.

Whether it is an English template or a Chinese template, there is a universal composition beginning.

They are here to pursue high scores. To put it very bluntly, they are here to get high scores!

"The school holds an essay competition every year, and many students will participate. Then such articles will be revised over and over again by teachers and students. The articles revised in this way are pleasing to the eye and very comfortable!"

"This kind of composition is called an excellent composition!"

"If you throw this kind of essay into the college entrance examination examination hall, you can certainly get high marks!"

"But think about it, do you have time to revise it?"

"Do you have time to revise your essay during the college entrance examination?"

Fang Bai's questioning one after another made all the students fall into deep thought.

"Clap clap clap!"

Fang Bai tapped the podium a few times with his ruler: "That's why we have to learn how to write compositions!"

"A good composition, like a good novel, must be fascinating, the beginning must attract readers, and it must give readers a bright feeling!"

"For example, why is "Bullfighting Continent" so popular? Because in the beginning, the bull jumps off the cliff three times and is accidentally reincarnated and rebuilds. This attracts readers!"

"And it is impossible for us to write so many words when we write essays. The base of the college entrance examination essay is [-], and the upper limit is [-]. It won't work if you have more, or less!"

"So, similarly, how we write this composition must learn from the routine of writing novels!"

"Start!"

"For example, this title is "My Father"!"

"There are many people who don't know how to write, so they will just write: [I have a father...]"

"Why, is it possible that your father has two more?"

Suddenly, the classroom burst into laughter.

Students always find it a pleasure to listen to Fang Bai's lectures. Sometimes Mr. Fang's lectures are very down-to-earth, and sometimes his lectures are also lively and humorous...

Sometimes, I would scold my mother, and when I talked about injustice, I would get more and more excited as I spoke, and the more I spoke, the more Teacher Fang would be ready to stab someone with a knife...

But these students like this style of Fang Bai very much.

They felt that Fang Bai's class was not dull or boring, but also very interesting.

　Keep adding salt...

　　The protagonist will become more and more awesome in the future!
　　If this is invincible at the beginning, it is better to read the invincible article.

　　The growth of students is what I want to write~
　　Some people say that watching advertisements supports me?

　　Okay, little brother, I’ll wait for you~
　　
　
(End of this chapter)