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Kasumigaoka Shiyu didn't answer, and walked into the classroom with graceful steps.

"Well, it doesn't look like a good name."

Shrugging, Yi Chen followed and walked into the classroom.

Chapter 18 Developed

At 6 o'clock in the evening, Kasumigaoka's house.

After dinner, Kasumigaoka Shiyu returned to her bedroom, turned on the computer and was about to start writing the second volume of the novel.

Before writing a few lines, there was a knock on the door.

"Shi Yu, come out, Mr. Yi Chen is here!"

"kindness?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu stopped and turned around curiously.

Why did Yi Chen come here at this time?

After leaving the room, he followed his mother to the living room, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu saw Yi Chen, sitting on the sofa with his father, and his father was really holding a pot in his hand, which looked like tea.

Seeing Xiazhiqiu Shiyu coming out, Yi Chen said with a smile: "Good evening, excuse me."

"good evening."

Walking over and sitting down on the side sofa, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu asked, "Why are you here?"

Pointing to the things in Mr. Xia Zhiqiu's hand, Yi Chen said: "The family sent some things over, these are for uncle."

Because when I called my family before, I said that the couple next door took good care of me, so when my parents sent me something this time, I bought something else along the way.

Mr. Xiazhiqiu sniffed the opened jar, and said with a happy face: "It cost you money, Mr. Yichen. This Dahongpao is a good thing. It is rare to buy good ones here in Japan, and the price is still very expensive." expensive."

"It's nothing. My dad knows several friends who specialize in the tea business. You can get these at a cost price. Since you like drinking tea, uncle, I'll ask my dad to send you some other varieties later."

Japan has always imported Chinese tea, but relatively high-end tea is very expensive. Even if Mr. Kasumigaoka has a good income, he usually doesn't buy too much.

But now that I know Yi Chen, Mr. Xia Zhiqiu can finally enjoy it.

After looking at the tea leaves in his father's hands, and at the sweeping robot that his mother was working on, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked around again, and said to Yi Chen, "Is there none for me?"

"Well, no."

Yi Chen nodded, "I forgot to tell my parents that there is a classmate living next door to me."

"...Did you do it on purpose?"

Although he didn't need gifts or anything, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was still a little depressed after being told by Yi Chen.

Spreading his hands together, Yi Chen said helplessly: "It's not intentional, the main reason is that if I talk too much, my mother will definitely start gossip, just in case I don't want to say anything. If you care, how about Shall I treat you to dinner later?"

"Forget it, I'll just say it casually."

If she really asked for a gift or something, she couldn't do it.

Yi Chen didn't stay at Xia Zhiqiu's house for a long time, after delivering the things, he went back soon.

After Yi Chen left, Mr. Xia Zhiqiu took a cup of freshly brewed Da Hong Pao, and ran to the dining table to drink tea and play with his mobile phone.

Mrs. Xiazhiqiu pulled Xiazhiqiu Shiyu to sit on the sofa, and asked curiously: "How are you and Mr. Yichen doing?"

"What progress?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's eyes were darkened, and he said innocently: "You don't think I'm dating him, do you?"

"if not?"

Mrs. Xia Zhiqiu asked back, "If you are not in a relationship, it means that he has a crush on you? Otherwise, why did you send these things from your family? Although it is a little early to fall in love at this age, but the child Yi Chen It looks pretty good, if it's him, mom won't care!"

"Stop talking, there really isn't one." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said helplessly, "That guy is pretty good, but he doesn't seem to have any feelings for girls, whether it's me or other girls in the class, he doesn't care much. difference."

"real or fake?"

"I've known him for more than a month, can I not see it?"

"Ah!"

Next door, Yi Chen, who returned to the room and was about to continue working, couldn't help but sneezed.

"Do you have a cold?"

..............

Another week passed, and it was the end of April.

On Saturday afternoon, after Yichen woke up in the morning, he had been busy in the room until now, and he simply ordered a hamburger takeaway at noon.

Busy until 4 pm, Yi Chen looked at the game interface in front of him and let out a big breath.

"Finally, the α version of the game is completed, and you can play it smoothly."

After two months, Yi Chen finally produced the advanced version of the game Slaying the Spire from scratch.

Although it is said that only two of the four available characters in the game have been made, and some relics in the game have not been installed, it is indeed possible to experience the complete process.

"Ah, I'm exhausted, I'm exhausted..."

After closing the game program on the computer, Yi Chen stood up and moved his body, then took a change of clothes and went to the bathroom to take a shower.

After taking a shower and drying his hair, it's almost time, Yi Chen plans to go out for dinner, and then buy some snacks that he has eaten at home.

As soon as he stepped out of the house, the phone in his pocket rang.

"Xiazhiqiu Shiyu?"

Looking at the incoming call alert on the phone, Yi Chen turned his head to look at the closed door of Xiazhiqiu's house next door, and connected the phone, "Hello? Xiazhiqiu?"

"Yi Chen-jun, I have a question for you."

"En? What's the problem?" Yi Chen said while closing the door, "Are you outside now?"

"Yes, I just came out of the library."

Walking out of the Immortal River Library through the automatic door, Kasumigaoka Shiyu said in a low tone, "Am I not suitable for writing novels?"

"Uh..." Yi Chen never expected that Xiazhiqiu Shiyu would make such a call to himself.

It looks like you were hit?I just came out of the library, should I go to the editor to read the manuscript?

The second volume was written in a week. At this speed, it is estimated that many things have not been considered.After all, the other party is not like playing games by yourself, it is completely as efficient as cheating.

After thinking for a while, Yi Chen said: "I don't care if it's suitable or not. How about this, I just want to go out, so I'll come directly to meet you and give you advice."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu responded, and told Yichen her current location.

After hanging up the phone, Yi Chen scratched his hair helplessly: "Really, the young people nowadays can't bear even a little blow, they still lack of exercise."

Half an hour later, Yi Chen saw Xiazhiqiu Shiyu waiting on the side of the road, and took her to a barbecue shop that he found on the way, and asked for a private room.

After ordering a lot of things, Yi Chen looked at the girl who was obviously in a bad mood and asked, "Then, how did you get hit by the editor, and it makes me happy to say it?"

Hearing Yi Chen's words, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu raised his head and glared at Yi Chen, but he still told what happened in the library before.

Chapter 19 Yi Chen's Sudden Inspiration Suggestion

"I finished the second volume of the novel, so I took it to the library today and showed it to my editor."

Gently turning the cup in his hand, Kasumigaoka Shiyu said in a depressed mood, "But after reading it, it was directly rejected by the editor and asked me to go back and rewrite it."

Rejected?

Yi Chen quietly looked at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, stretched out his hand to her and said: "Where is the manuscript of the second volume? Bring me to have a look. Although I haven't written a novel, I have read some. The first volume of your novel I also read one volume, so I should be able to give you some opinions from the reader’s point of view.”

Nodding, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu did not refuse, and put a stack of printed manuscripts from her satchel into Yi Chen's hand.

"I originally wanted to throw it away, but after thinking about it, I finally put it away. I plan to study it after I go back."

Speaking of this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu glanced at Yi Chen somewhat hesitantly, but still didn't say the following words.

Yi Chen was flipping through the manuscript of Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, so he didn't see it.

At this moment, there was a knock on the door of the private room, and the waiter brought in a large pile of ingredients that had been ordered.

After the things were set up and the grill was heated, Yi Chen put a lot of meat on it and said, "Eat first, I'll read your manuscript. When you're in a bad mood, eat something delicious to make yourself happier." , I've always done that."

"OK, thank you."

The grilled meat on the grill was sizzling, and the aroma from it made Kasumigaoka Shiwa, who hadn't eaten all afternoon, feel hungry for a short time.

Although there is so much meat in front of his eyes, eating it may make him gain weight, but just like Yi Chen said, now he wants to vent his emotions even more.

Regarding weight, eat less in the next few days, and it will be almost the same!

Soon, the meat was cooked, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu picked up a piece of meat and put half of it on the plate in front of Yi Chen.

"Yi Chen-jun, you can eat too."

"Well, right away." Yi Chen nodded, but his movements remained unchanged, holding the manuscript in his hand, and turning down a page.

After watching for another 5 minutes, Yi Chen finally stopped.

After eating a piece of roasted pork belly, Yi Chen looked at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu on the opposite side and said: "Although I only read a little bit, just from the beginning of the second volume, I can somewhat see why the editor rejected your manuscript."

"Really? Tell me, let me see that it's different from what the editor said."

Because I read the first volume of my novel before, Yi Chen said many of the same things as the editor, so this time Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was also curious about what kind of evaluation Yi Chen would give.

Pointing at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's manuscript, Yi Chen said: "In the opening chapter, you added two new characters at once. If I guess right, it should be the second male and the second female, right? Did you write that?" The plot where the young heroine and heroine get to know these two new characters also depicts a part of the male lead’s affection for the heroine, and the female lead’s affection for the male lead. According to this logic, you should want to write polyamorous love?”

"That's right, that's exactly what I wanted to write."

Looking at Yi Chen, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu asked in surprise, "You guessed so accurately, have you read many romance novels?"

"No, I haven't read it much. The main reason is that your description is almost the same, and you can make a good guess."

Yi Chen said with a smile, "Actually, this is pretty good. With this kind of development, you can write a lot of plots that make your stomach hurt. But also, as a light novel, this is a bit clichéd and obvious. It's just a pure polyamorous love novel. Moreover, your character as the second female lead is a bit too similar to the heroine, so it's better to make some differences."

It's really similar to what Ms. Machida said...

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's eyes widened, and she looked straight at Yi Chen.

He clapped his hands on the table, took out a small notebook and a pen from his bag, and said with piercing eyes, "Do you have any good suggestions? Please help me!"

"That... eat first..."

"Eat after talking! I invite this meal!"

"As for?"

Seeing Kasumigaoka Shiyu's extremely serious expression, Yi Chen sighed, took out his mobile phone and searched the names of some light novels on the market, and suddenly thought of a Japanese TV series that he had seen in his previous life that didn't exist in this world.

So Yi Chen said, "Well, light novels, it's not good to keep people's stomach hurting all the time. In fact, you can tilt it a little bit towards romantic comedy. For example, I just make a suggestion, you can make the character of the second male lead Change it, didn’t you write that the male lead has a crush on the heroine? Revise it, it can be written that the male lead simply wants to be friends with the heroine, and he likes the male lead or something.”

"Pfft! Cough cough cough! What did you say?!"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at Yi Chen incredulously, "You mean, let the second male like the male lead?"

Yi Chen smiled and nodded: "Look, after you knew this, weren't you shocked? And I just proposed such a setting. If you carefully write the plot, this is definitely a very interesting point. Of course , the male lead cannot be bent, and at the same time, the relationship between him and the second male must be made friends, so that after knowing that the second male is crooked, the reaction of the male lead will be more fun. By the way, let the original thought that he The heroine who has settled down with the heroine knows that her rival in love is actually a man. Of course, you can’t write too clearly about the setting of the second male lead, and you have to leave some suspense for people to guess.”

Listening to Yi Chen's words, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu slowly fell into thinking, and gradually felt that this is indeed very interesting, at least it is much more interesting than the second volume I am writing now!

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's inspiration was gradually opened, and he said excitedly: "Then, because the female lead likes the male lead, but after knowing that the male lead likes the male lead, she will try her best to straighten the male lead! And look for the male lead and the female lead At the same time, it can also promote the emotional development between the hero and heroine!"

Seeing Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's burst of inspiration, Yi Chen smiled and picked up a piece of beef tongue and put it into his mouth.

"It seems that I don't need to say more later. Of course, this is just a suggestion from me. There are also shortcomings in writing this way, that is, many scenes will be given to the male lead and the female lead. You have to consider and The content between the male and female protagonists is skewed."

After recording a series of words, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's mood completely recovered, and said happily: "I know, I will weigh this aspect! This is really a very good direction!"

Looking at Yi Chen, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu suddenly thought of the content of the conversation between his mother and himself before, and couldn't help asking tentatively: "Mr. Yi Chen, you know these things so well, maybe you like them... .”

The hand holding the roasted meat shook, and the meat fell directly back onto the plate.

The expression on Yi Chen's face was almost unstoppable.

Deep breath, deep breath...

Yi Chen looked at Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, and said with a serious expression: "I solemnly declare that I, Yi Chen, am male and I like female!"

Chapter 20 Mother's Loss and Feelings

Although Yi Chen made a solemn statement, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was still a little dubious after hearing it.

Seeing Yi Chen's handsome appearance, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu said in a low voice: "Then how does this explain your understanding of this kind of plot? If it weren't for being in this environment, it would be impossible to understand so much, right? And I heard that, Long and handsome people tend to bend more easily."

"You are misunderstanding, misunderstanding!"