[Wenwen: Woooooo... Reba, I love you so much! 】

【Wenwen: It would be great if the patron's father could let me go. I'm going to have breakfast. 】

Watching the news.

Reba sighed.

It's really not easy to make some money now.

Looking at Chen Wenwen's appearance, she should have started revising the manuscript as soon as she woke up, and she has just finished revising it at noon.

"¨‖Okay, let's get ready to eat."

At this moment.

Lu Ning also took out the ribs that had been stewed for a long time.

"okay."

Reba put away her phone, and went to the dining table with her stir-fried vegetables.

...

After lunch.

Reba pulled Lu Ning to the study.

"Lu Ning, print it for me first."

"I'm going to find a voice recorder!"

Over half a day.

Reba found her recording pen, which seemed to be in the bedroom.

When she practiced her lines, she needed to record her voice first, and then listen to it herself.

This way (obtained) it is easier to control the emotion of the lines.

Although, sometimes this operation can also be done with a mobile phone.

but...

As soon as she picked up the phone, she couldn't help but want to fish.

After saying this.

She ran out the door in a flash.

After all, after reading the script earlier, she would be able to play games with Lu Ning again!

Lu Ning couldn't help shaking his head when he saw the girl's agitated appearance.

Silently walked to the computer and started to print the script.

The script was not long, so he glanced at it while printing it.

It's okay not to look...

From this point of view, Lu Ning was poisoned.

Just read two or three pages.

Outside the door, Reba ran back.

"How about this script, isn't it good?"

Reba asked with a smile.

You must know that the investor spent a total of 300 million to buy this script!

"This script is very problematic."

Lu Ning frowned, then handed the printed script to Reba.

"what?"

"What's the problem... Jen"

Reba's face was full of doubts.

Chapter 110 This script is too poisonous! (seeking subscription)

Could there be any problems with this 300 million script?

Reba looked down blankly.

Although the script has been changed, it is only a matter of a few lines, and no important plot has been changed.

How could something go wrong?

She turned over carefully again, and then asked:

"Lu Ning, what's wrong with this script?"

After receiving the script, Lu Ning took a pen and circled the script.

"First of all, it's the plot."

"There was an explosion and the police arrived at the scene and arrested five suspects."

"But they didn't conduct a body search immediately."

"This is too..."

Words to the mouth.

He chose silence.

This script seems to be written by Reba's little girlfriend?

Should I save face for her?

Reba followed Lu Ning's thoughts and thought about it, and soon understood.

"This is really unreasonable!"

"Lu Ning, you are so right. Is there anything else?"

Reba couldn't help agreeing.

"Of course there is."

"Under normal circumstances, the chemical materials that can cause an explosion of this scale are strictly controlled."

"Your script is not a fictional world, but a real background. The police only need to check 120 times to see if the five suspects have purchased or had contact with these chemical materials, and they can easily find the real culprit. "

"That's exactly what happened."

"If such a case really happens, the police will definitely trace the source of the explosives as soon as possible."

Lu Ning glanced at the script again.

Circled another very obvious loophole that he discovered.

In this script, there are several loopholes like this.

If let him time travel to this play as the protagonist.

That...

The real culprit of this case will definitely not survive one episode!

No!He can put the prisoner on the ground on the spot!

Full of loopholes, logic confusion!

It is obviously a realistic background, but what the characters do does not conform to the actual facts.

If he really asked him to comment, this script is really too...

"You're right..."

"Won't you find the real culprit if you check it casually?"

"Where is the need to find all kinds of clues..."

After hearing Lu Ning's words.

Everyone in Reba was stunned.

High IQ is different!

In a few words, he directly pointed out two very (cjeg) fatal loopholes in this script.

Before, she thought the script was well written and interesting.

Now it seems...

"Then what do you think of the script?"

Reba asked curiously.

After all, Lu Ning knows so much, and he wants to hear his opinion.

Lu Ning hesitated for a moment.

Then he asked, "Do you want to hear the truth?"

"if not?"

Reba was stunned.

Why do you want to listen to lies?

She didn't quite understand what Lu Ning meant.

but,

Before she could react.

Lu Ning spat out two words.

"Bad show."

"what?"

Say this.

Reba was stunned again...

Although Lu Ning found out several problems just now, this script is still considered good in the market.

After all, there are so many investors and producers who want to buy this script.

"This kind of suspenseful case-solving script."

"The most important thing is to be logical and respect reality."

"The TV series produced in that way will be more interesting and immersive."

"This script didn't do it at all. On the contrary, it's full of loopholes. It's okay to be happy to see it."

"But if it's serious, it's a typical bad drama."

talking room.

Lu Ning remembered a reward he got from the system before.

It was also a script, and it happened to be of the suspenseful type.

But it is a little different from ordinary suspenseful crime-solving scripts.

In that script, in addition to suspense and case-solving factors, it also added...

A time loop concept!

Although somewhat disrespectful of reality.

But the logic is rigorous and the plot is exceptionally exciting.

If it is taken out and made into a TV series, it should still be very good.

But at that time, he was busy leading the team to delve into a certain scientific research project, so he didn't have time to do a side job, make a TV series or something.

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