Are the comics good?life-changing

Just when the two started to confront each other again, it was Yazi who finally grabbed the conversation, "I, I, I, I want to speak first! Can I speak, Mr. Xing?"

Seeing that the people around him didn't disagree, he naturally nodded. Although Xing Subaru didn't have much hope for Yazi's thoughts, he still listened carefully.

"Hmm~ First of all, Xingjun's request is to make the ending of the new manga more interesting, so the previous story is not a problem, it is better to say that it is very interesting. However, there will be... there will be..."

Not to mention this change into the Krypton gold skin that I don’t know where I got it, it looks like a mature female white-collar girl, it seems that I have changed my words and tone, just the content of the narration at the beginning They really looked decent, even Xiao Bu and the others couldn't help opening their mouths, looking extremely surprised.

Is this still the original Yayazi?

But before people could recover, this little girl revealed her secrets. It seemed that she had to read the manuscript to know what to say later, but everyone laughed at this, and even thought that this was the real thing. The way Yazi should look like.

"The ending seems to be unsatisfactory... Yes, this will happen. In fact, the final villain is too simple to answer, and there is nothing to prepare, so my plan is - add a new big villain, before the director acts. Kill and replace the other party, so that the original John Walker is killed by an unexpected new John Walker, and even the director has always been a puppet controlled by the other party, so maybe there is a better point of view. Star How are you, sir?"

Yazi couldn't help but leaned over and curled up his hands on his bulging chest, raised his big watery eyes and looked up and asked. Before, he looked like a white-collar beauty, but suddenly he changed into a soft and cute girl a feeling of.

However, Xing Subaru was a little surprised by her proposal. After all, the method Yazi said was really one of his more inclined assumptions, "Very useful suggestion, it gave me a lot of inspiration, thank you, Yazi son."

As he spoke, he even touched the other party's little head, and then the other party showed a comfortable smile like a little milk cat, "Hey, hey, Yazi was praised by Xing Jun, and he helped Xing Jun, it's really great Well, I didn’t disappoint my mother~”

"Mom?" Ying Lili leaned over and couldn't help interrogating her. She didn't even say much, just stared at the other party with her eyes, and Yazi who was twisting and turning on Xing Subaru was frightened. It's like pouring beans and pouring out everything.

"Ah, what, no, Yazi didn't ask mom to help... Uh~ It's just that Yazi talked to himself when eating, and mother knew, Yazi didn't tell Xingjun's secret... Woohoo, Xingjun, I'm sorry, Yazi didn't keep the secret well and let her mother know. If it doesn't work, Yazi will imprison her mother before Xingjun publishes a new comic..."

"Ah, it's okay, it's okay, I will modify it anyway, as long as I don't tell strangers." Although I know that this soft girl's blackening is soft, and she can't beat others at all, but if it really happens, just It was too much of a blow to that mother who looked like a big girl, so Xing Subaru hastily interrupted the words of the little boy.

Fortunately, he interrupted in time, and Heihua Yazi's words were kept in a low voice, so it didn't reach other people's ears. Xiazhiqiu Shiyu here agrees with Yazi's suggestion, but she also raised a question, which seems to be the same. Considering this, "But this new big villain, if it suddenly appears at the end, it's not too good. It's more impactful, of course, it's just my idea. Speaking of which, Yayazi, what is the purpose of your villain's design, or what is the purpose of replacing John Walker?"

Chapter 260 How did the exchange meeting turn into a dress-up meeting?

"Of course it's to help Xingjun's comics become more interesting~ As for the character image, um... the big villain, does he still look like the big devil Piccolo?"

Hearing this kind of words, everyone who had expected something because of what she said just now also laughed wryly. Sure enough, only Yazi can say such extremely simple words.

But maybe in the eyes of other people, this kind of statement has little reference value. After all, it only mentioned a general direction, and there is no relevant character setting, let alone the derivation of the influence of the plot. It can be said that it is too taken for granted.

But Xing Subaru felt that Yazi was able to say this kind of suggestion, which still exceeded his original expectations. Although it was discussed with her mother, no matter what, it was still a plan worth including.

So, "Well, there's still a lot to be perfected, but it's still — worth adopting!"

"That's great~!"

Although I know that Xing Subaru is trying to coax a child, but seeing that this silly girl's simple idea has been adopted, and the others seem to have confidence, Ying Lili was the second to speak, and even prepared some The setting painting was brought out, but I don’t know why I also got a manga artist’s krypton gold skin. Does it look more convincing?

But I have to say that as a book artist, even if it is just a draft, there is a look full of lust.

"This is the [Spoiler] setting I prepared. The name has not yet been determined, but I tend to call it Sakura Ozawa. The initial setting is an ordinary female high school student with a lively and straightforward personality. Dare to speak and act. In terms of interpersonal relationships It can be said to be a good girlfriend of the protagonist's daughter.

Because of Muku's affairs, she decided to become a policeman, and later entered the [Gang] and became a staff member of the well. Although she knew about Muku's father, she never met directly, because she also regretted it. That day she asked Muku to be together. Only by playing, will the heads-up find Killing Muling.

Until the main story line entered the late stage, after knowing that the heads-up was instructed by John Walker, he made up his mind to find out the opponent and avenge his good girlfriend.And in fact, she still has a hidden identity, that is, she is a relative of Wang Xiangnu, and she also has special abilities.

In my mind, Yingli's ability is that she can directly communicate with the person in her dream, and it can also be shown through some small things in the early stage, and finally after revealing the director's positive purpose, she can quickly catch the other party..."

While Ying Lili was still talking, Shi Yu yawned unceremoniously and interrupted her directly. Just when Huya Tsundere wanted to question the other party's dissatisfaction, the poisonous senior sister was not polite at all evaluation.

"It was interesting at the beginning, but it made me fall asleep after listening to it. Just hearing about the ability settings made me feel a little funny. Sure enough, it was too much for the manga artist to think of a good plot. Well, I don’t think it’s as interesting as what Ya Yazi said. After all, the focus of this plot is reasoning and wits, not some super power battle. Don’t you feel that you have completely digressed?

What's more, the most interesting thing is the name of the spoiler you mentioned at the beginning, Ozawa and Li, it feels like a stripper star somewhere, it's really hard to look at, it's better to call it Golden All right.Anyway, it’s all based on your own settings, and even the name has only been changed a few words, so don’t be ashamed~…… In other people’s works, I mixed my own private goods, Ms. Sakura Ozawamura . "

The more Xia Zhiqiu said, the more the blond and arrogant little tiger teeth blushed, and felt ashamed to the point of burying its head in the ground, after all, all the little thoughts were mercilessly stripped out.

Moreover, the black-bellied and poisonous-tongued senior sister continued to tease, "But I still think that Maria Ozawa may be more fluent in reading, and may become a rare attraction in your setting~"

A lore made Ying Lili's shame completely explode, "What, what, what's wrong with Ozawa Sakura? You...you are not a guy, it's too much to get a pseudonym called Xia Shizi." Don't get distracted...and even if I change my name a little bit, it looks like the off... What kind of actress are you talking about?!

It's obviously the bad thoughts that you, a gloomy guy, are full of!And why should it be called a golden retriever? This is the character I set up! "

The blond-haired Tsundere, whose complexion has completely turned red, seems to know who the other party is talking about. After all, the two of them are not innocent girls anymore. A black-bellied novelist and a book cartoonist are both poisonous.

He couldn't help asking Xing Subaru to cover Yazi's ears, so as not to be spoiled by these two guys who became more and more shameless. After the two people had enough noise, he came forward and commented, "Although things have changed in the future, but The character setting proposed by Tsundere is quite brilliant, maybe if you think about it deeply, you can get a good plot..."

Hearing this, Ying Lili was a little proud and didn't care about Xing Subaru calling her arrogant. After all, she was a little used to it, and it was only in the virtual space, not at school, not to mention that her efforts were recognized, and Although the other party makes her feel dangerous in a certain sense, at least he has a popular masterpiece in comics, and he is even an existence that makes her look forward to. She is quite happy to be recognized by such a person.

Until Xing Subaru said the last sentence, "However, Mari Ozawa...uh, it's Yingli," Shiyu couldn't help laughing, and Ying Lili's face became ugly again, "It's not The spoiler I want is more like a bystander or a savior-like character, so it's a pity, but it also provides me with a lot of reference."

"Okay, it's my turn now. You can say it, Mr. Chick~." Shi Yu next to him seemed to have a confident look, but it was true that his chest was very high, at least compared to the decadent face next to him. , the blond defeated dog whose flat chest has been completely sunken is too tall.

For the setting of Kasumi Hill, Xing Subaru is also looking forward to it. After all, he is not like this. The other party will be able to become a popular novelist in the future by relying on originality. So after the other party is about to speak, he also made it. The gesture of please is short of the sentence, "Please start your performance".

Different from Ying Lili's drawing, Kasumi Hill directly released a PPT-like report projection, and at the same time, I don't know where to find a pair of glasses to stay on my face. This is obviously a virtual world, but did they discuss it? Ah, you have to change your clothes when you say it.

Although Shiyu didn't look like a white-collar beauty like Yazi, she still looked like she had the temperament of Teacher Tongxu, especially where did the little pointer come from?

"Okay, after Ya Yazi's pioneering ideas before, compared with the setting of a certain golden retriever dog that was good in the early stage but boring in the later stage, everyone has discovered it. Although Xiaojijun said that there is only a little limitation, there is no such thing as too much. Asking too much, but in fact it is a big pit~..."

Chapter 260 The Swindler Created by Shi Yu

Although Ying Lili really wants to interrupt the annoying guy in front of her, whose setting is boring after all?

At least compared to Ya Yazi, I seem to be more thoughtful in terms of completion and ideas. Of course, it doesn't mean that Ya Yazi is bad, but it can't be called boring!

But just when she couldn't help but want to go back, the matter mentioned later in Xia Zhiqiu made her bear it a little bit, and even looked at Xing Subaru next to her with doubtful eyes.

As for Xing Subaru, he didn't know what to say, why did he hide a big hole, why didn't he know?

Fortunately, Shi Yu wasn't too pedantic, and quickly said, "Actually, we can know from the fact that Mr. Chicken adopted Ya Yazi just now and disliked this golden retriever..."

"Hey, can you talk nicely, are you here to quarrel?!"

Everyone also felt helpless looking at these two happy enemies, but Kasumigaoka Shiwa didn't have to make everyone unhappy, and the molesting was almost withdrawn, "Okay, okay, it's Sakura Ozawa who didn't accept the role. , so it’s all right?”

"Humph~"

After that, Shi Yu raised her glasses on the bridge of her nose, looking like a teacher, "The hidden request of Mr. Chicken is actually this troublemaker, preferably an outsider."

"What do you mean?"

In the face of the blond Tsundere's question, she didn't say much, "Didn't you find out, in fact, the plot of this new comic is a closed loop, it can be said that basically everything that should be closed is closed, if something is inserted into this system Characters, the most likely situation is to become a pawn on the chessboard, not a [spoiler]."

Although Shiyu explained patiently, there are still many people, no, it should be said that most of them don't understand, even Xing Subaru is a little confused, but he is a little surprised, because Xiazhiqiu Shiyu seems to be peeping In his heart, it is true that he will not want to replace or insert any role in the original system.

After all, what he wants is to overthrow, even subvert the final ending.

"In short, if you follow the original main line of Xiaojijun, it will be difficult to be adopted. The reason is very simple. The plot of this new comic is very logical, whether it is because of the genre or itself. Wang Xiangnu and John Walker are equivalent to the two poles of this system. One is to build a dream-like [well], which is the foundation of everything, and the other is the creation of the plot, which is the beginning and even the end of everything.

That is to say, no matter what happens to the chess pieces, as long as the two chess players are behind the scenes, they can guide the plot to the original main line. That's why I said that Mr. Chicken has prepared a big hole, waiting for us to come to jump. "

Xing Subaru smiled helplessly. After all, he really didn't mean anything like that, but obviously everyone was led astray by Kasumi Hill, and even the way Ako looked at him was a bit strange.

"Then what about your setting? Don't say that there are some of them, the most important thing is to look at the plot and the ending, there is no doubt about it."

In the face of Ying Lili's counterattack, Shiyu just smiled indifferently, "Originally, I prepared a lot of other settings, but I just confirmed Xiaoji Jun's idea, so I just want to say that I think Xiaoji should be The one you are most satisfied with."

Then Shiyu waved the pointer and let the PPT flip quickly. It can be seen that she hasn't really talked nonsense, she has indeed prepared several sets of different plans. After all, Xing Subaru's eyes have undergone obvious changes. Out of his field of vision.

Among them, I also saw the setting similar to what Yazi and Ying Lili just said, but this novelist is really good at handling it, like the person who replaced John Walker, not only the person in [Cang], but also the opening of holes, etc. Criminals are counted.And in the same situation where there is one more person in the protagonist group, Shiyu did not set additional superpowers, but just likes to write people to death, and the role of death is divided into different situations, some are reminders, and some are deceitful. The dead ones, as well as the backstabbing ones.

But in the end, when he saw the PPT page that the other party stopped, even he was slightly surprised, and Shi Yu's voice also sounded, "This is the setting I wrote from the perspective of a criminal at the beginning, but it was a bit biased at the time. Yes, but it should be pretty good to use here. As for the name, I don’t have time to name every person in the set, so I will use Petty Sin instead.

To put it simply, it is a story of a scammer who deceives everyone. As for the inspiration, it is also the original main line of Xiaoji Jun who actually wanted to deceive readers.In the first appearance, the petty crime was arrested as John Walker. Of course he was fake, but because he always appeared at the scene of the crime, as an important suspect, he was temporarily imprisoned here in [Cang], so naturally the protagonist couldn’t help it Say a few words with the other party, and then quickly see the essence of the other party, but it is an insignificant person.

But soon the protagonist realizes that he is wrong, because the other party can enter the well, which proves that he is actually a serial murderer. However, when Qiuren tries to kill the other party, he finally finds the murderous factor in the home of the small crime , found that he had been a soldier on the battlefield.

After such a few flips, when the petty crime is not good or bad, but he directly killed the director, and now he became a real criminal, but this time the protagonist does not believe that the other party is really a sinner, the reason is that In the subconscious space before, what he saw was that Xiao Zui was the only person who wanted to protect Jia Ailiu, so the protagonist once again entered the killing intent space where the other party killed the director.

On the other side, Wang Xiangnv also wants to expose the true face of the director in order to thank her, and is going to tell everything through Jing Zhongjing.However, the members of [Cang] opened the [Box] at the director's dying request, and when Qiuren and the others found out the truth, Wang Xiangnv came out and ran away..."

I have to say that Shiwa's setting is more detailed than that of Ying Lili, and she can add it from time to time while talking, and the adaptation of the plot is also very interesting, especially in the highlight moment of Qiuren at the end, the director's frontal eyes are exposed but not Preventing the backhand from taking effect, coupled with the appearance of Wang Xiangnv's rampage.

After dealing with the time rhythm and the plot a little bit like this, Xing Subaru felt a sense of urgency and pressure, and it seemed to be really better.

But this is still not what surprised Xing Subaru the most, because when Shi Yu saw the final ending, he said that everything was arranged by a petty crime, whether it was the chief's back-hand, or Wang Xiangnv was mysteriously organized after she came out. Taken away, after Petty Sin left, wearing a John Walker top hat, hinted at saying it.

It turned out that his goal was the elephant girl from the beginning, no matter whether the other party was a system or a real person, he just wanted to get rid of this super-era existence, so it showed that the other party was actually cheating from beginning to end.

I have to say that under the narration of Xia Zhiqiu, Xing Subaru even has a sense of picture and some kind of excitement. Of course, what the other party said is not perfect, such as how to take away the runaway Asuki Kiji, and the mysterious The organization suddenly appeared, but it has to be said that the flaws are not concealed, and there is even a feeling that people look forward to the second season.

Chapter 260 The rich lady is actually hiding by my side?

Indeed, although Ying Lili doesn't want to admit it, compared to her own imagination, Kasumigaoka's so-called scammers seem to be much more interesting than she thought, whether it is the setting, the impression of the main line, or even the final ending. Seeing the slightly smug smile on this guy's face, and deliberately turning his back on her, she was furious, and soon thought of a loophole, and asked directly.

"Wait a minute, what does the mysterious organization mean? Doesn't it mean that there is only one spoiler? And when the elephant girl ran away, everyone who approached would be pulled into a dream, so how could she be taken away?"

Facing the blonde's arrogant questioning, Shi Yu also pondered for a while, "There are indeed some logical deficiencies, after all, I wrote it based on my feelings, and I also slightly modified it according to the tendency of Mr. Chicken, As a result, although the drama has increased, it is difficult to stand up to scrutiny on some things.

But if you want to justify yourself, it’s not too difficult. For example, petty crimes are actually the staff of the government’s intelligence agency, and the mysterious organization is a special secret agency for the government to deal with supernatural events. This is also the way they have a certain ability to fight against the supernatural. how? "

Hearing this, Ying Lili couldn't help being speechless. After all, even if the other party temporarily filled in the loopholes, it seemed so interesting. If Xing Subaru wanted to say these things, she could still accept it. After all, the other party is a popular cartoonist. But when did this third-rate novelist have such a skill?

This Aojiao pouted her small mouth, thinking in her heart that there was a sense of urgency to be left behind.

"It's very good. Late at night, it gave me a lot of inspiration." Although I was very confident before, Shiyu couldn't help showing an uncontrollable smile when I heard Xing Subaru's praise, "After all, Xing Subaru was a classmate before. Gave me a lot of good advice and materials, and I still have a lot~ a lot~ I want to ask Xiaoji-kun for advice~"

After Shiyu, Xiaoniao Youliuhua, who has always been a favorite of the group and has no sense of presence, asked to speak first. Although everyone knew what this idiot with secondary illness was going to say, they didn't exclude her, but they didn't know Is it because I saw that the previous people have cross-dressed, or this guy himself likes to do such things.

This time, not only the costumes of the characters, but even the scene were changed, and the other party shouted, "Explode, reality! Crush, spirit! Banishment this world!" There is really a feeling of seeing a beautiful girl transform. feel it.

It’s just that to make this kind of situation, I feel that it needs a lot of krypton gold. Xing Subaru seems to have seen the idea of ​​​​realizing his secondary school in the virtual world. Speaking of it, it should be her sister Shihua who used the spoon to teach this idiot who spends money recklessly.

But speaking of it, even in reality, the costumes and decorations in Xiaoniaoyou Liuhua's room, as well as all kinds of weird items, may not be so cheap... So there is a rich woman hidden beside me? !

As for Liuhua's gorgeous performance, it has to be said that everyone has no energy to pursue the weird setting that the other party said, but Xing Subaru still understands a little bit, it is nothing more than a sentence, "The True Eye of the Evil King is the strongest." Compared with Ying Lili, Liuhua said that it is a battle between superpowers, and also recklessly draws out all kinds of other worlds, hidden magicians, church churches and so on. Every character has a superpower.

Although Xing Subaru has given up getting any useful reference from this self-proclaimed idiot, I have to say that the other party's speech is quite touching, provided that he can understand the strange words that keep coming out of her mouth, otherwise Like Yazi, with two big eyes open but question marks all over his head.

Therefore, after Xiaoniao had a great time lobbying, everyone also gave a lot of applause. After all, no matter what else, the special effects that keep popping up are still very good-looking. As for what she said, everyone ignored it tacitly. up.

And this little guy raised his head even more proudly, as if he was extremely satisfied, and everyone seemed to relax a little.

So after the "intermission", it was Xiao Bu's turn to step up, and Xing Subaru was no longer surprised when he saw that the other party had turned into the detective Bu, maybe it was what they had discussed in advance, but Xiao Bu Buried's costumes were chosen to best suit the content of this exchange meeting.

"What everyone said was very good just now. To be honest, Xiao Bu was afraid to come up with his own settings, but after all, everyone said it. If Xiao Bu didn't say it, it would be too unfair, so—— See above, there are many deficiencies, please forgive me."

At this moment, Ying Lili and Shiwa, who had been quarreling with each other below, whispered openly, "Miss~"

"Well, what about the real lady~"

"As expected of a young lady, it feels like a really big lady, both in words and in tone..."

Afterwards, Xing Subaru couldn't help teasing and chatting together, making Xiao Bu, who was still nervous above him, suddenly angry, "Mmm, she is not a big lady, her family is also very ordinary, really , they are all making jokes like this, so I ignore you guys~"

Of course, she said so, but Xiao Bu could guess that everyone was trying to relieve her tension, so after booing for a while, Xiao Bu quickly adjusted her mood and began to talk officially.

The characters she set up are also quite simple, similar to Ying Lili, who are all girls as spoilers, but the difference is that the people set by Xiaobu have dual personalities. In short, one of them is a kind girl, and the other is actually It is a serial murderer, and because of this relationship, when the other party was arrested at the beginning, because he could not enter the well, he was ruled out as a criminal.

And this kind of dual personality, in the setting of Xiao Bu, can be after Wang Xiangnv ran away, one personality is sleeping, and the other personality can act independently. Or, everyone couldn't tell the difference at first.

So at the end of the main story, the life of the elephant girl is decided by this girl with a dual personality.

Of course, Xiaobu is not a novelist or cartoonist after all, so there are many loopholes and loopholes in the content, and even the purpose of the characters seems too simple or incomprehensible, but no matter what, the setting of Xiaobu’s thoughts is still advisable Especially in Shi Yu's mouth, it was said that he was so taller than a certain golden retriever that he didn't know where to go, which made the two of them quarrel again.

However, the exchange meeting had almost come to an end, and all the girls except Xing Subaru were also staring at him, obviously asking him to make some evaluations and comparisons, but here the other party gave a trick.

"Well, the final choice, I will know when I draw the Name in a few days, and I will invite you to be the first readers." Although the girls are also a little dissatisfied, they cannot be unacceptable, or this is more Well, after all, there is no basis for words, and when they are all drawn, it is obvious who is better and who is worse, or whose plan is more preferable in Subaru's mind, isn't it obvious?

And Xing Subaru didn't pay any more attention to this. After all, after sorting out his thoughts a little bit and making a rough decision, he can almost start to enter "Alien Invasion". "Are.

Chapter 260 The Choice of Life Intervention from the Beginning

It's gone again, there is really nothing left... Fan value.

Xing Subaru always wondered if Dameng God did it on purpose, as long as he saved some property, he would use all kinds of temptations to spend it, but there was no way, after all, the other party didn't force it, after all, Xing Subaru couldn't help but think To chop hands ah.

But I have to say, the cost is worth it, at least Xing Subaru has more room for manipulation, so it can be regarded as the initial investment.

Before the official plot begins, he can first intervene in a person's life. Although there are conditions and time constraints, the consumption package recommended by Damengshen is still very tempting, otherwise he won't be able to resist up.

It's just that, the plan I wanted to carry out at the beginning may have to undergo a drastic change.

Moreover, I can only choose one person, and in only three days, all the fan points I have accumulated for three days are all wiped out. It really makes Xing Subaru love that Sanwu Wenjing goddess and can't help but want to play tricks, not just Just rubbing the little face, at least to the extent of lifting the skirt.

There are no more than three candidates for such a choice, as the basis of all causes - Asuka Ikiji, which is equivalent to the behind-the-scenes man who shaped the whole story - Hayase Ura Takuhiko, and the bright hero of the manga plot - Naruhiko Aki people.

It's just that Xing Subaru is very entangled, and even a little headache, what he wants to enter this world is a better plot, that is to say, he is actually more like the bad guy on the side of the squinting director, after all, he is now It is fully capable of solving all problems at the source from the very beginning, such as directly interfering with Asuka Iki's life, through [six eyes] ultra-precision and [lust] the witch factor's ability to control blood, to carry out cell-level Using surgery to modify Fang's body, it might be possible to erase her supernatural abilities.

However, if you do this, Xing Subaru's goal of quickly gaining fans will probably be ruined. After all, he has done experiments before, not by going to the comic world, but simply by drawing comics by himself. The resources in that world, like "Edward Scissorhands", even if they are drawn, they cannot get fan value.

So from the source, he stopped the way of drawing from memory to earn a lot of fan points, otherwise he wouldn't have to come to the world of comics.

Of course, Xing Subaru will not complain about Da Meng God or anything, after all, to be honest, Da Meng God can choose him, and even give himself so much care, he is already very grateful, although I don't know why the other party attaches so much importance to fan value , especially in this aspect is very strict, but since the other party has done so much for him, it is only natural that he should respond.