The doctor left the order, and all the staff regretted it

Under the complicated eyes of everyone, he got into the car.

Afterwards, the sand buggy started and sped away with a cloud of dust and smoke.

end summary

There could have been another chapter.

It was W who blew up Platinum's car and delayed the protagonist.

And Kelsey chased after the conversation with the protagonist at this time.

At first, the two were eccentric with each other like ex-husbands and wives, accusing each other of their inadequacies in Amiya.

Since both of them had problems with Amiya's education, neither of them could convince the other in the end.

In the end, the doctor still helped Rhodes Island to conduct research, but I needed to go out for a walk to change my mood.

The theme at the end is that parting is for a better goodbye.

--------------------

But thinking about this kind of thing, there is a bit of water when it is released. Since it is over, it cannot be released.

I know that you still want to watch the kind of tangled and sour plot, but the taste of continuing to write later has changed.

After Amiya revealed it, it was doomed that there would be no environment to pave the way for this kind of plot.

It has become a simple knife and hatred.

Next is the concluding summary.

First of all, I would like to thank the 4048 readers who caught up with the previous chapter. Thank you for reading the plot of the Honkai later. It is really touching.

It's been 8 months since I wrote the book, and I'm writing the conclusion for the first time.

First of all, the story line is successfully completed.

The plot is up to now, and the holes dug in front have been filled.

The three-day bounty was also paid off.

If I continue to write, what follows will be nothing more than some other stories, which are completely incompatible with the theme of regret.

The storyline is over though.

But I regret that there are some things that I didn't write.

There are still two places.

1. The first one was at the [-]-character mark, and he declared his position as a single heroine.

Of course, it's not that I regret taking the route of being a single heroine, but that I regret expressing my opinion.

There are two ways to write the ending that is left to the development of the story, and the ending that is set at the beginning.

The writing method of setting the ending before the characters are unfolded limits the character design and the goals of the characters.

And the beginning defines the ending, so it is nothing more than a lot and a single.

Mostly it is to enrich the personality, express the position, and whitewash the motivation.income harem.

Single is to go to the opposite, amplify self-righteousness, increase hatred value, and finally kill with one blow.

When choosing, I referred to the books of the big guys in the group.

At that time, he wrote [-] words more than me, and he walked out of the harem and was sprayed stupid in the book review area.

What the readers said was nothing more than doing this to be worthy of the heroine?

If the hero accepts it, isn't that just licking the dog?

Referring to these book reviews, I chose the single heroine when I expressed my opinion in [-] words.

And since a single heroine has been decided, the only way to go is to draw hatred. This is also the reason why many people feel that the character design is broken.

After all, the development is limited at the beginning, and the protagonist cannot choose the progress of the story after the characters are developed.

What is regrettable is that even if he expressed his opinion, he still did not escape being sprayed, on the contrary, there were more of them.

Think about this kind of thing carefully, as long as you express your opinion, someone will spray you.

They may not have even read the book, just because of a tag will be sprayed.

But I was on guard against this disturbing thing, and successfully aroused Amiya's hatred.

2. The second regrettable thing is that readers unsubscribe because they say they won’t blow themselves up on Amiya.

Then I blew Amiya up too early.

This is also a series of reasons that lead to the mentality split behind.

(Because I wrote it according to what the readers said, not only did I not receive good reviews, but it also brought a large wave of unsubscribes. At that time, many people said that they could return after reading it.)

This incident made me feel uncomfortable and unworthy.

Because what I originally wanted to write was to let Amiya gradually know the harm to the protagonist under the influence of Qinliu's memory (that is, the war between the two).

Knowing that this incident has caused harm to the protagonist, Amiya can foresee that when it is exposed, the protagonist will definitely blacken, hate her, and even leave Rhodes Island.

So Amiya was anxious and panicked.

Start mobilizing other people and find ways to please the protagonist.

And the others panicked, and while complaining to each other, they couldn't expose their liking for the protagonist because of Frost Star's lessons learned from the past.

So they all tried to find a way, let alone like it first, and then change their image in the protagonist's heart.

But the protagonist doesn't think these people like him, so everything they do is regarded as a relationship between friends.

While the two were showing dog food, the others had to bear the pain to get close to the protagonist.

They felt bitter in their hearts, that was because they were fooled by Amiya, but they couldn't say it.

And I have to watch the doctor and Qin Liu together every day, and I feel regretful in my heart.

Until a straightforward operator couldn't help but tell the doctor the truth.

Then the protagonist enters the process of blackening again.

----------

The above are the contents of the IF line.

But speaking out, I feel much better.

And because I listened to the readers' request to speed up, I wrote a lot less what I wanted to write. In the end, not only did I not get good reviews, but the readers even said I don't want to read it!

At that time, I was very uncomfortable and unwilling, but these problems were also prevented.

Until later, readers asked to express their opinions and forced the progress of the plot. This reminded me of the two previous incidents.

At that time, the mentality was directly split, and the outline that had not been adjusted was directly thrown out.

After calming down for two days, I found that I couldn't stop here, because the hole for the doctor's outlying island had already been dug.

So I emptied the book review area later, and barely finished writing the plot of the doctor's departure from the island, which can be regarded as successfully filling in the pit that was originally planned.

Then there were fewer and fewer updates, but I spent more and more time writing.

And it was very painful to write, because I always had an idea, that is, what I wanted to write, but I didn't write it.

Until now, after writing the doctor's outlying island, I can still drink water and dog food later.And rubbing the main line of Chapter 9, and even Hong Didi who travels through time and space.

But this unreconciled thought has always been in my heart. Every time I write, I always think about what will happen if I write according to the original development.

Although subscriptions have been increasing, as long as you write 200 words, you can get more than [-] yuan.

But writing down like this, there is only pain, and it has nothing to do with the theme, without the sour feeling that I imagined at the beginning.

Therefore, I chose to end it here in "Parting is for a Better Encounter".

-----------

The next step is a technical summary, which can be regarded as a reminder to myself.

The first book was written blindly.Purely following the trend of oranges, the protagonist has no motivation, no goal, no fun, neither cruel nor sweet.No one was watching either.

But when you write, you get insights. A story should have motivation and goals, as well as resistance.So I decided to use this to write a good story.

The second book, the love type, has been prepared for more than half a month.

Because I am not very good at writing, I added a useless system by referring to other people's books, which is a big failure.

Another failure is that at the beginning, it used the classic tsundere heroine of Japanese manga to spread hatred, and persuaded many people to leave.

In the middle, in order to write this book well, I bought a love course worth thousands of dollars. (Writing a book not only does not make money but also loses money)

It is also the first time that I learned about emotional pull through a three-dimensional lecturer.

Later, I also slowly learned how to write sweet essays, as well as the details and handling from secret love to liking, as well as confession.

The overall progress of this book is relatively smooth.The reader atmosphere is also very harmonious, which is a great encouragement for newcomers who pay for their own money.

But under the calm, there is a problem buried deep.

That is, this book originally followed Chen's route, but later readers asked for the harem, so they went to the harem.

Since going to the harem, it involves emotional issues.

The protagonist likes Chen, so if he wants Shi Huaiya to win the bid, he must be rejected by Chen.

But because of the protagonist's deep liking for Chen, coupled with Shi Huaiya's hard pursuit.

So the protagonist's heart is divided, but when this division is unified, it is when Shi Huaiya takes the lead.

And the biggest problem with this book is this sense of fragmentation.

Many readers complained wildly about this, saying that the protagonist has the demeanor of An Yilu.

Some people ridiculed that it was written like this, there is no need to write it, and I don’t want to read it.It is impossible to make money from this.

At that time, the mentality was a little cracked, but not completely cracked.

Because of the original plot, I designed a split and unified development.

What really cracked me up was when I let out the latter part.

Readers have said that I can correct my mistakes, and I can still read this article.

If they keep spraying, I can still write.

But suddenly there was another boast, and it cracked me apart.

And readers also think that there will be such a plot later, all because they posted and sprayed me in the last chapter.

From that moment on, I felt like I couldn't write anymore.

Inexplicably stuck.

Then the rhythm of writing the book broke.

Stuck until now.

But I have already compiled the ending, and the outline will be fully released during this period.

This is quite a pity.

The third book is this one.

Greatest growth for me.

It is a thorough understanding of the influence of postings and comments on the author.

And the private chat function that the hedgehog cat has to say.

There will always be people who hate you and won't let you delete it. If you delete it, they will go to private chat and spray you, saying that you are glass-hearted.

Isn't this kind of person a glass heart?

Later, he didn't bother to explain, what he said was right, so he directly silenced him.

Then this month, there was a fan-worthy speech, and I had to like it, and it was too late to see each other.

After opening this, you will know how many people there are. They don’t even read the book, but just come to take the rhythm.

Summary of experience.