The Fire Chaser of the Collapsing World

Mikael raised a question, but he didn't get a response for a long time. He scratched his head in embarrassment.

Seeing the teacher's appearance, she couldn't help thinking: "Although he is a teacher, he doesn't look much older than us... Being left out like this will probably feel very sad and aggrieved..."

Thinking of this, she raised her hand unconsciously.

Seeing someone raise their hands, Mikael's eyes lit up.

"Uh... Well, student Ahua raised his hand, so you can answer the question!"

"Ah!" Probably because he hadn't heard that address for a long time, Hua was stunned for a moment, and then uttered a short syllable. After hesitating for a moment, he still chose to stand up.

It's just that her brows were wrinkled into characters, and her eyes glanced away unnaturally, as if she was suppressing some extremely painful feelings.

And when she shifted her gaze to Mikael, she already took on a complex expression mixed with doubt, scrutiny and sadness.

"Mr. Mikael, I think your story is very good."

After she finished answering concisely, she was about to sit down.

Mikael hurriedly waved his hand to stop her, and asked an extremely deadly question:

"Where's the good?"

Hua's expression changed from astonishment to bewilderment, and finally revealed a strange sense of shame.

"Uh... I like the description of the tower very much, as if there were such a group of people struggling to survive like this... Teacher, I believe that if you write these stories into novels, you will be a great success—— The premise is that the destiny allows the dissemination of knowledge about Houkai..."

The story was acknowledged and the smile was fleeting on Mikael's face.

Unexpectedly, Hua's words did not stop here, but changed the subject and began to complain: "But there is a serious problem with the structure and length of the story: why is the big event like the collapse of Irkune City only It took very little pen and ink to describe, and the pen and ink used is not even as good as arresting... Weierwei has more plots. And the pen and ink used for Luluye's plot later is three times that of the collapse of Irkune City!"

Mikael pursed his lips, intending to refute, but he didn't say anything.

On the contrary, it was Hua's voice that sounded inexplicably in his mind:

[Those memories spanned 5 years or even longer, and many places are like the photo at the end of the story, only a vague outline can be seen.

Even - even their facial features, their voices, even their laughter... everything seems to be covered with a layer of dust, except for the vague outlines, they can no longer be seen clearly.

This is why I can't help but want to tell all these stories...

I am really afraid, if one day even these outlines are lost, how will I find my original self at the end of time...]

Hua looked around in a daze, unable to tell whether this was an auditory hallucination.

She didn't realize the problem at first, she just thought it was because she didn't have a good rest last night, and continued to question:

"There are still some strange things. As far as I know, the number of active Valkyries in the world is around 3000 (what are Valkyries!), even B-level Valkyries have far more power than ordinary people. Besides We are also equipped with warships like Hyperion that are more advanced than the Fire Chaser No. 100, but when we are dealing with a large-scale Honkai, our strength is still a bit stretched. How did the Moth of the Flame fight against the Honkai with a mere [-] troops? where?"

"Uh..." This stopped Mikael, and Hua saw that his expression kept changing, and finally stopped at a sigh.

A sigh of relief and helplessness coexisted.

He suddenly announced a serial number softly: "MSA-209?"

Hua's pupils lost focus in an instant, and her upper and lower lips opened a small slit meaninglessly, then closed in vain, and opened again.

"Excuse me, teacher, what did you just say?"

All the surrounding sounds became distant and diffused in an instant, receding to the outside to form a closed loop around Hua.Her eyes seem to have lost all their color, M-S-A-2-0-9, she is so familiar with each letter and number individually but...

But when they were combined together and entered her mind, it became ??????.

She felt that this string of codes should have a great connection with herself, but she searched through her memory, but couldn't find a trace at all.

But... I obviously can't remember... Why does my heart hurt so much...

Hua slightly stooped his body, propped his left hand on the table, and pressed his right hand to his chest, panting heavily.

At that moment, it was as if something pierced her heart.

But why is it not blood?

Obviously it feels very painful, but why don't the corners of the eyes even feel moist?

She could no longer support the weight of her whole body, and fell to the ground...

etc!Why is it on the ground!What about the desks!

She opened her eyelids a slit, and she could no longer see the bright sunshine, neat classrooms, and strange classmates.

And the ground her body touched also began to change, it was still cold, but not so hard.

Clear and transparent, like the surface of water.

Her consciousness began to dissolve—it melted rather than drifted away, like an iceberg melting into the sea.

Then she began to fall at a very high speed—the body felt like falling, but the direction was completely opposite, falling from the center of the earth to the earth, then into the ocean, into the clouds, and finally to the endless pale desert on the moon... Then, she began to fall from the moon to the earth again. Earth.

Until she fell into the ocean... no, water again.

That's right, it was indeed water, and she felt as if her whole body was wrapped in some kind of liquid.

"Just now...was that a dream?"

"What a strange dream, people I know and people I don't know... It seems like the future..."

"How long have I been dreaming..."

"Wait! Mikael... Mikael is..."

With one last glance, she saw the silver-haired man walking slowly towards him stepping on the water.

The low and deep voice has gone through many vicissitudes, passing through viscous liquid and bubbling bubbles into Hua's ears, it is already a dilapidated echo:

"Life is like a dream, how about joy...Hua..."

"It's time to wake up..."

"A new era has arrived..."

Volume [-] Summary + Answers to Some Questions

Jinqun fencing (patting the bed: papa!): 455900388

Finally, the code is over!

I just want to say one thing: Volume [-] ***finally*** coded!

Do you know how I spent this *** month!

It’s really funny to say, when I first wrote this book, I didn’t think much about it at all. With a very vague outline of thousands of words, I started coding.

Even the beginning is written very casually.

Just like what I said in the extra chapter through Ah Hua's mouth, the content of the second Honkai is full of calculations, and at most, I only wrote six chapters.

At that time, what I thought was, hurry up to the third Honkai, because there are many characters in the third Honkai, Mei, Kevin, Su and Hua have all experienced the third Honkai-so don’t look at Ahua So young, her qualifications are really not small...

Uh... I've said too much, let's talk about the specific content.

First, as I said just now, the second Honkai actually has a lot to write about, but because I really wanted to get Kevin, Hua and others on the stage quickly at the beginning, so I compressed it into such a short six chapters , and there is also a general content describing the moth that chases the fire, which I think is a failure.

The second is the part about Weiwei. In the actual plot, Weiwei was arrested after the second collapse, so the time is probably right, and the location, according to the description of the copy, happened to be cheating on Twilight Street when she was wanted. , heard the news and ran away, no problem.

Putting this paragraph in the plot actually acts as a buffer, because I found that the second Honkai was written too fast, so I tried to slow down the rhythm, and Wei Wei’s paragraph is used to slow down, and the length is eight chapters , longer than the second Honkai... Forget it, I don't even want to complain about myself.

Then, I also tried a new style in this section... High EQ is called humor, and low EQ is called neurotic writing... It doesn't seem to have any effect, but I think coming to this section occasionally can somewhat dilute the heavy atmosphere. .

I don't want to make the writing too heavy, but I really don't know how to write about the content of pre-civilization without being heavy.If it's the kind of brainless pretense and slap in the face, then I don't think it's not necessarily an insult to those Yingjie who are chasing fire.

And if the pre-civilization has won a complete and thorough victory, I believe that many readers will not be able to accept it, because how can a Bengsan fan do not have Milk Gouqiao, Cooking Woman and Bulangya?

Of course, if readers are interested, they should be able to understand what I buried at the end of Wei Wei, whether it is Wei Wei or Pa Duo, letting them appear on the stage and dissociate from the flame-chasing moth is actually doing it for Mikay. Prepare for your future escape from the Flamemoth.

This is unavoidable, and it's not Ultraman. Anyway, I can't see my face after transforming. I can't hide it...

So once there is a problem, there must be a period of time when Mikael needs to leave the flame moth.

Then Patuo is very important, ahem, I understand everything.

The following Sakura was an accident, purely accidental, I didn’t check the information carefully before, in fact, Sakura appeared very late, only a little earlier than the dusk street trio, because she assassinated Dr. Mei before the seventh collapse, Later, she was subdued by Kevin. When Mei was talking to her, she had no idea what Honkai was, and asked if there would be a second Honkai?And the description of her in the copywriting is also a girl.

Yu Jieyin really lied to me...

But there is no way, I have written everything, so I can only try my best to make it happen. First, the age is lowered, and then everyone is on the stage, so I simply dragged it to the protagonist group.

Of course, if you think about it carefully (I also hinted at it), her mission is too obvious, too obvious to be normal, so Sakura is just a cover-up thrown by Vasago (is there too much spoiler?).

This part of Luluye... probably no one knows why the buildings on Luluye Island are all green crystals, and there is a tall tower (doge) in the middle, right?

This paragraph really pissed me off.

In the detailed outline I wrote, at the beginning, the length of this paragraph was set to be twelve chapters at most, and it turned out to be 23 chapters after writing...

The motivation for writing this paragraph, especially the one in Sanjie District, actually came from a chat between me and a classmate majoring in Chinese language.At that time, we happened to talk about the issue of the sense of substitution in historical texts. We talked for a long time, and finally concluded that if we want to have a strong sense of substitution, we need to start with character creation and era shaping.

I feel that I have failed in character creation, and I am not good at it. I don’t know how to describe it.So I want to try to shape the era, and it seems to be a failure at the moment, because my pace was too fast at the beginning, and I didn't bring you a sense of the end of the world. Now I want to make up for it, but the effect is not very good. I The writing power is not enough at all...

Of course, I was reminded by readers that there is still a problem of being too forceful in this paragraph. It is a bit deliberate that Mikael, a Herrscher, can fight such a "ups and downs" against a king-level Honkai Beast Yasha...

I really want to explain that there are many ways to make it round, but it’s not necessary, force is force, no matter how round it is, it can’t change the reality that I’m not good at weaving plots.

The only time I wrote a detailed outline for a small plot before was the 30-word duel in front of the imperial court at the end of the first volume of the original Shindojin (it’s not finished here), but that time it was a bit true... the first [-] words were suppressed for the final pleasure. Thirty thousand words, the result is that almost no readers can read that paragraph, and the book is naturally doge...

In the initial setting, the Honkai Beast should be Da Zi Zai Tian. The reason is very simple. Si even directly questioned whether Ellie had undergone super-change surgery, because Ellie did not show any side effects of Dazizaitian), because I began to realize that Ellie has become soy sauce outside of the emotional drama role...

But in the end I chose Yasha. For the time being, I still can't imagine how strong the last-level Honkai Beast is, because the other last-level Vishnu is a metamorphosis.

And there is no information about Da Zi Zai Tian at all... Ellie's fighting style can't be used as a reference, I can only create it myself...

And Yasha, well, actually Yasha’s ability is also inferred from Sakura, although I don’t think Yasha’s ability is this, because no one knew that she had this ability before Sakura used this knife on Kevin.

But there is no way, I have to write, if Yasha’s ability is only freezing, it will be indistinguishable from the ice pig, anyway, that’s what I think...

Of course, I personally feel that the shaping of Yasha is also a failure. I originally wanted to reflect its assassin's temperament, but it seems that it has not achieved the effect at all.

In a word:

Not enough pen power!

Not enough pen power!

Not enough pen power!

Now let's talk about character creation.I saw a comment before, saying that I have too little interaction with Ellie, not much with snakes...

indeed.

Why this is so is also very simple-insufficient writing power!

I dare not describe Ai Li too much, for fear of embarrassing OOC due to a bad handling.

But in fact, the doctor is not so easy to describe, so I am really afraid of describing characters, very afraid!

The only exception is Pa Duo and Hua. Pa Duo is because she is a very simple character.

And Hua because...uh...our personalities are a bit alike?

Hua before experiencing the collapse, like me, belonged to that kind of life. He obviously experienced a mediocre, ordinary life, but when he looked closely, there were very few things he could have.

Always in a state of confusion, with a sense of justice and conscience, but protests against questionable orders only stay in words, and they can always be well obeyed in execution.

So if I try to figure out Hua's psychology, it's a little easier for me.

The one who failed the most in shaping must be the protagonist!

Generally, the author will substitute his own character into the protagonist, so you will find that the character of the protagonist is too awkward...

No... So, isn't it similar to Hua...

But sometimes the protagonist will be a little more bewildered, and the upper and lower limits of morality will continue to fluctuate with the stimulation he receives, so he was able to propose a super-change plan with all his heart before, and it didn't take long to persuade Mebius not to be against him. Innocent ordinary people do it.

In short, it is very non-existent.

The questions in the first volume have been covered a lot, and it would be a bit too much to say more, so let’s briefly talk about the second volume.

Please don’t think that there is a second volume titled "Volume of Anti-Entropy" in the inter-chapter and think that you are going to jump to the modern civilization. The description will be more.Anti-entropy...the First Herrscher...knows everything...

Well, spoilers are over.

Is someone getting impatient?

Well, finally, finally, it's time for the main event.

It is the issue of emotional drama that everyone is very concerned about (I actually dare to say it!).