This Star is a bit Salty

Chapter 349: Only one flaw

After reading the entire poem, all the contestants sighed. The poem is so well written and can definitely be said to be a classic.

It would be great if they could write such poems. It's a pity that this is destined to be impossible, let alone them, even a famous poet like Gu Yuan might not be able to write it, right?

After a long sigh, they became excited again. They were so lucky to be able to witness the birth of this poem on the spot.

Signing up for the competition this time is really a very correct decision.

Not only did Li Han make two shots, the second shot turned out to be such a classic, which they hadn't thought of before.

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This time to participate in the competition, it is more worthwhile than he thought before. There was a "Baitou Yin" before, and now there is another "You Si". The two poems have similarities, and they are both classics. Can they be regarded as sister poems?

Witnessing the birth of the sister poem of "Baitou Yin" on the spot, this can be used to brag in the future, and it definitely makes many people envy and jealous.

"Bai Tou Yin" is to write poems for Zhuo Wenjun, and the description of "You Si" is more delicate than "Bai Tou Yin". The heart and actions of the girl in the poem are richer and more vivid when facing emotional betrayal.

From the perspective of artistic value alone, "You Si" is probably higher than "Baitou Yin".

All the contestants sighed with emotion.

However, there seems to be a problem with this poem. That just doesn't seem to be complete. In other words, it seems that it hasn't been finished yet, and there is something like below.

The last sentence of the poem, "Oriental needs to know Kochi for a while."

The translation means that maybe, tomorrow, when the sun rises from the east, you will know the answer.

After venting her hatred, the girl remembered the sweet time when she was dating her lover, and her heart became more and more conflicted. She didn't know what to do?

She thought to herself, "Maybe I will figure it out when the sun rises from the east tomorrow?"

That's the end of the whole poem.

When the sun rose the next day, did the girl really want to understand? No answer is given later.

This is very itchy!

Does the girl want to understand? What is she going to do? You made it clear! Doesn't it make people feel uncomfortable to end the whole poem in this way?

This is not writing a novel, the answer can be revealed in the next chapter. This is a poem. When the whole poem is over, there is no answer.

It seems that Li Han intends to let them think of the answer for themselves.

Deceptive!

The players couldn't help but feel a little slander.

Of course, although the ending is deceptive, it will not affect the classics of this poem in any way. This is a poem, not a novel, do I have to explain the ending clearly to you?

It ends like this as a poem, and there is nothing wrong with it.

The contestants sighed in their hearts, and Gu Yuan, Tang Zaisheng, Yu Qiu and others were also sighing.

Tang Zaisheng is a little excited. "You Si" is definitely a classic and definitely qualified to be a sister poem of "Baitou Yin".

Today, I asked Li Han to come and write "Baitou Yin" for Wen Jun's former residence. He even harvested a sister poem. This is definitely a huge surprise!

Tang Zaisheng wondered in his heart that after the game is over, he must invite Li Han to inscribe the song "You Si", and show it with "Bai Tou Yin" at that time, the impact will definitely be greater.

As for Li Han's current manuscript, of course Tang Zaisheng also wants it very much. But he knew that Gu Yuan would definitely not compete.

This is a poem competition organized by the Provincial Poetry Association. The original manuscripts are collected by the Provincial Poetry Association. It is indeed more reasonable.

Of course, the premise is that Li Han is willing to contribute the manuscript.

In Tang Zaisheng's view, Li Han should not refuse to donate the manuscript. The Provincial Poetry Association made a lot of money this time.

Gu Yuan naturally knew that their Provincial Poetry Association had made a lot of money this time. He smiled and said: "The whole poem of "You Si" can be divided into three parts: lovesickness, determination, and hesitation. These three parts constitute A trilogy depicting the heart of a girl from passion, broken love, to nostalgia. The levels are clear and intricate, and the emotions are ups and downs and full of charm. Mr. Li Han's shot is really extraordinary."

Yu Qiu also said: "Pulling, destroying, burning, and raising are all in one action, clean and tidy. The image of a **** girl who dares to love and hate, loves and hates, loves like raging fire, and hates like dynamite jumps on paper, and is ready to come out. Li. Mr. Han’s poem is definitely the best of the best."

After hearing this, Li Han repeatedly expressed humility.

At this time, the staff responsible for sharing the situation on the scene are sharing the song "You Si" on the Internet.

online.

The poets and poetry lovers who are following the competition have long been waiting to see.

They believe that Li Han's work is by no means comparable to those of the contestants. After seeing the top ten works of the contestants, they are now very eager to see, how big is the gap between the top ten works and Li Han's works?

Finally, they waited.

"Thinking"!

After just reading a few sentences, they already have the answer.

How big is the gap? I don't know, anyway, I don't know how many orders of magnitude there are.

There is no comparability at all.

Poets and poetry lovers on the Internet are beginning to become excited. Li Han's poems are always amazing, and they are never ordinary.

After reading the whole poem, they also had the same emotion in their hearts as the contestants on the spot.

Then I felt very sorry that I was not there to witness the birth of such a poem with my own eyes.

Then, the end of the poem did not give a clear answer, which made them feel very regretful. They also wanted to know, after the sun rose the next day, did the girl want to understand?

In fact, it is not uncommon for this kind of poem that does not give an answer at the end, and there are many poems like this.

It's just that if there is no answer at the end of the other poems, there is no answer. They don't want to know the answer urgently. Even if they can't know the answer, they won't feel sorry in their hearts.

But this poem is different. If you don't know the answer to this poem, you will feel quite regretful in your heart.

Just because this poem is so well written, the image of the girl who is extremely infatuated and dare to love and hate, love and hate distinct, love as raging, hate as dynamite, is too prominent, and the impression is too deep. Just linger.

If you don't know the answer, it will make people feel very uncomfortable!

Unfortunately, there is no answer.

Ugh! This is the only flaw in this poem.

However, although ~www.ltnovel.com~ has its flaws, the discussion on "You Si" by poets and poetry lovers on the Internet is getting more and more lively.

"You Si" is also spreading more and more widely. Many poets and poetry lovers who have not paid attention to this competition before have also noticed this poem.

"Thinking"? I rub! Whose poem is this? It’s so well written, it's a classic!

Damn it! It turned out to be Li Han's poem, no wonder...Wait, you said that this poem is Li Han, a poem written in the poem competition in Wenjun's former residence at this time? Or is it the topic of the fifth stage of the competition?

Of course I know about the Wenjun Poetry Poetry Contest, but I don't pay attention to it now. I'm ready to wait for the end of the competition to understand it.

Unexpectedly, Li Han actually made a move. Fortunately, fortunately, now the game is not over, I immediately pay attention.

In this way, more and more poets and poetry lovers began to pay attention.

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