The Apprentice is Too Diligent and the Master is a Bit Lazy
: After this testimonial, the new book is open!
After this testimonial, the new book is open!
When knocking down the finale, there was too much reluctance in my heart.
There are many characters in this book, all of which I typed out with my hands, as if they were living in that world, and I couldn’t bear to end them.
But the story is here, and it's time to end.
At the beginning, the book has two main lines, the thief line and the daily line.
I originally planned to write the two lines at the same time, but the author is too young and lacks the pen ability to control it.
In the Penglaijian story, the line of thief ends hastily.
After the end of this line, it came to the line of Mistress Da Ma. When it was completely deciphered, the story of the book was over.
In the process of writing, I made several fatal mistakes.
means that the characterization is too thin.
Especially the fairy boy, I used a lot of strokes to write about this person, but the protagonist easily killed him in seconds.
The second villain is unprepared and appears abruptly.
There is another fatal disadvantage:
Readers said that they like to watch daily life. Later, I prefer to write daily life, and write too much daily life, which leads to the slow progress of the plot. After reading too much daily life, it is easy to be aesthetically fatigued, and follow-up reading is not strong.
After all, I just don’t have a good grasp of this degree.
The next book must be learned.
Fortunately, the completion of the book is still acceptable, the holes that should be filled have been filled in, and the writing has been finished.
Try to write better the next book.
Thank you brothers for your support!
End scattered flowers!
Please support the new book. The new book has been opened, and the name is "I Am a Fairy: A Little Dragon Girl in the Beginning".
Click the author's name "Tengu eats the moon" to see it.
(End of this chapter)
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