Rebirth of the God-level Xueba

Chapter 218: Simple composition

Tu Xian stayed in Xibao Middle School for as long as possible, but in May, he could not ask for a holiday anymore, so he had to go back in shock.

He was upset because he felt that the opportunity was wasted. In a month in Xibao Middle School, Tu Xian completed one and a half essays and also rubbed a second author in Yang Rui’s new paper.

Now that they are gone, the second author will mostly learn from Yao Yue and Wei Zhen.

Tu Xian is very greedy about this. How can I say it is a foreign journal. Even if it is named as a second author, it is still useful when evaluating the title. Maybe the usefulness is not small.

But he has been away from school long enough, that is, a national unit like the school allowed him to take one month's sick leave, and he didn't need to take out the sick leave certificate immediately, but it won't work for a long time.

After Tu Xian was about to go back, he would find a doctor who knew him well to give an explanation of his illness and reimburse the cost of the car by the way.

He has published a paper, enough for the school.

Tu Xian's departure from Xibao Middle School did not affect Yang Rui's work, because Yang Rui had already moved his work center to the college entrance examination.

There are two months left, and the actual review time is more than one month. Not to mention Yang Rui, the students in the Ruixue group have reached the final sprint stage.

Of course, sprinting does not use all the strength.

On the contrary, sprints are more efficient and require a limited amount of time to complete unlimited work. If people are exhausted, it is not good news for the exam.

Yang Rui handed over the experiment he was doing to Wei Zhenxue, and still let Yao Yue and Lv Zhi be the experiment assistants. He went back to the classroom by himself and gave an English composition class to the students in Hongrui's class.

Not only the Hongrui class, but the students from other classes also moved their benches to listen to Yang Rui's lectures.

Starting this year, the score of English in the college entrance examination has increased from 50 points to 100 points. This is a huge increase and a huge crisis.

For the students in the township middle schools, the bad news is almost the same.

Apart from anything else, just as it was before West Castle Middle School, where is there a serious English teacher.

Even in Xi County, there is no English teacher from a subject.

In such an environment, students who can learn dumb English are already among the best.

The composition question is naturally the most difficult part of the English test paper. The English teacher invited by Yang Rui couldn't speak well, so Yang Rui personally went into battle.

Standing in the middle of the podium, Yang Rui asked calmly: "What kind of English composition do you think is the best?"

"The words are beautiful and the language is smooth." Xu Jing replied with the description in the textbook.

Wang Guohua said carelessly: "The grammar is good."

"There is something to say." Li Xuegong raised his head slightly.

Yang Rui smiled and said, "A good English essay is like this, a good English essay is not."

"why?"

"Because you can't write it. Do you think, given the current situation in China, how many students can write beautiful, unobstructed, grammatically good English composition?"

The students shook their heads.

Yang Rui knows that there are actually such students. Even in China in the 1980s, there are still many students who have received good English education, but the number is too small to be comparable to the tens of thousands of English N-level, TOEFL IELTS students in later generations.

Yang Rui didn’t need to talk about this issue in depth. He used his familiar facial expressions and movements on the podium and said, “What kind of form should the English composition we are pursuing now be? I think the simplest one is enough. Speaking clearly, expressing the meaning clearly is the first level, and not making mistakes is the second level. Moreover, the first level must be subordinate to the second level. Do you understand what it means?"

"First of all, there is no error."

"Yes, when you encounter the sentence you want and you don't know how to answer it, use the simplest one."

"This way the score will be lower."

"If you make a mistake, you must deduct points. You will deduct one copy for one mistake. How many mistakes can be deducted for one of your compositions? The text is beautiful, the grammar is smooth, and there are not many points. It's full, don't even think about it." Yang Rui's tone gradually became severe, and then said: "If you don't understand, then remember a slogan, simple is beautiful, say it all..."

"Simple is beautiful……"

Yang Rui quickly ended the lecture and indoctrination, and the students began to practice writing.

In fact, since a few months ago, he began to prepare students for English composition. At that time, his main measure was to recite.

The recitation of New Concept English is the first step, and the recitation of some special example sentences is the second step.

Through these methods, more than half of the students in Hongrui's class can reach the pass mark in English, and most of the remaining students do not recite carefully.

Even in the face of the college entrance examination, continuous recitation is tiresome. It is normal for some students to be unable to persevere, or to choose other breakthrough points.

After all, there are only a few people who can review each of the seven subjects in the college entrance examination.

However, in May, the basic review is useless.

Yang Rui looked at their in-class essays from student to student, and then corrected them in class.

This time, regardless of whether the students’ language is beautiful or not, he just finds out the mistakes and marks them with red pen, and how many points they will deduct.

Most students will be deducted more than 10 points, that is to say, they will make more than ten mistakes in writing an English composition with hundreds of words.

This is better than Yang Rui imagined.

The students in other classes are also taken care of by teachers, but the native English teacher at West Castle Middle School is slower in correcting essays.

Yang Rui walked slowly to Liu Shan's side.

As a student ~www.readwn.com~ Liu Shan studies very hard, and she is also very talented.

However, she somewhat meant to pursue better, and made no fewer mistakes than other students.

Yang Rui had to explain specifically: "Any sentence that is miswritten will not be judged as a good sentence. The result of your doing this can only be a reduction of points, not a bonus."

"However, if it is all simple sentences, points will also be deducted."

"Two points are deducted, maybe 3 points, but you can lose 7 points because of this, or are you earning?"

"You teach us to recite New Concept English, can't you use it?"

"If you want to use it, I suggest you use the original sentence." Yang Rui did not say the basics, but directly said the method, and said: "Modifying the sentence inside will change your sense of language. Therefore, the correct method is that you are sure. If this sentence is correct, you can use it, otherwise, you don’t need it."

"How many points can I get for my composition by doing this?"

"It's about 10 points more than before." This is not a small improvement. For the college entrance examination, 10 points will be two completely different schools.

Liu Shan nodded slightly and continued to write the composition.

Yang Rui patrolled for two classes before finishing the composition for all the students, and returned to the room. He also spread out the workbook and wrote the English composition.

Writing too many academic papers will change the language sense of normal composition, and Yang Rui doesn't want to deduct points for this.

Teacher Jing Yulan is still waiting for him in Beijing.

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