Zongman: Bringing my seniors to Kisaragi Station

Bai Ye frowned slightly, and his eyes quickly scanned the notebook.

Seeing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu on the side showed a gleam of joy on his face, and said after reaching Bai Ye's side:

"How about it?"

Seemingly wanting to be praised by Bai Ye, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's eyes were full of anticipation.

"Well, the writing is good and the characters are full, but the plot is too bland and poor."

Bai Ye was still looking at the notebook with a flat tone.

Hearing Bai Ye's evaluation, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu also put away the smile on his face.

It wasn't because Bai Ye said that her book was not good, but because the evaluation Bai Ye just said was the same as the evaluation made by her editor Machida Sonoko.

They all recognized her character design and writing style, but they all said that the plot was flat, even a bit boring, suitable for watching while sleeping.

Being able to mention the shortcomings and loopholes of his book by such a coincidence, Kasumi Hills Shiyu believes that Bai Ye is definitely accomplished in literature, which makes Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's curiosity about Bai Ye even higher.

"So, Ye Jun, do you have any suggestions?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu asked with sincere eyes and a look of anticipation.

She believed that Bai Ye could find the loopholes in her book in such a short period of time, so she would definitely give key suggestions, and maybe she could bring her book back to life and avoid the situation of cutting it in half.

But this is just an expectation, after all, her editor Machida Sonoko has no good suggestions for her book, and even predicted that the three volumes of Kasumigaoka Shiwa's book will be cut in half.

"Well, Shi Yu, your writing is very good, but the plot is flat. People don't like to see this kind of love that goes smoothly, and loves concubines. It's better to get married directly. What kind of love is there?"

"What people want to see is the interweaving of emotions, the entanglement of choices, the choice between left and right."

"And there is no choice in the plot of this book. From the beginning to the end, the relationship between the hero and the heroine is close, so you can consider introducing a third party to trigger the plot, so that the plot becomes turbulent and heart-wrenching."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu silently remembered what Bai Ye said.

But when Bai Ye said that she would add a third party to the book, her heart trembled and her brows frowned slightly.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu wrote this book by substituting herself. In the bottom of her heart, she is unwilling to write that a third party intervenes in this relationship.

Bai Ye glanced at Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, and saw that the other party was distressed, so he continued to speak:

"This is just a suggestion, Shiyu, you can just listen to it as appropriate."

"Yes, I know."

Hearing Bai Ye's words, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu nodded.

After returning the notebook to Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, Bai Ye looked at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, saw that the other party was looking at the notebook in his hand, and did not speak for a long time, so he took the initiative to say:

"By the way, I made a suggestion, but there is no reward?"

"What reward does Ye Jun want?"

Hearing this, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu narrowed his eyes and looked up at Bai Ye.

"let me see...."

Bai Ye rubbed his chin, he said that the reward was just to let Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu not focus on changing the character design, this kind of thing can't be forced, if you insist on adding characters and modifying the plot, it will become a mess.

Bai Ye glanced up and down Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, and for a moment he didn't know what reward Xiazhiqiu Shiyu should give him.

Or, bite?No, no, if you say it, you will definitely be regarded as a pervert!

Or let Xiazhiqiu Shiyu kneel in front of him and call himself...no no no, he went astray.

Just when Bai Ye was thinking about what reward Xiazhiqiu Shiyu should give him, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu rolled his eyes and smiled.

"Yejun~"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu softly called Bai Ye's name, Baiye turned his head when he heard the sound, and just when he was about to ask Xiazhiqiu Shiyu what's the matter, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu suddenly attacked him.

"Well!"

After a long time, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu got up, and looked at Bai Ye with a blushing face:

"This is Ye Jun's reward~"

Bai Ye stared blankly at Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, he did not expect Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu to be so active.

Bai Ye recalled that feeling, it seemed that it felt good.

As for Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, she looked at Bai Ye with a smile on her face. Seeing that Bai Ye had been silent for a long time, she tilted her head, and stretched out a finger to touch Bai Ye's lips:

"Thank you, Ye Jun, for helping me a lot."

Hearing Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's words, Bai Ye only felt his heart tremble.

"Shi Yu..."

Bai Ye opened his mouth lightly, and just as he was about to speak, he saw Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looking up at the sky.

"Hey, Ye Jun, I like you!"

Inexplicably, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu suddenly spoke.

Bai Ye looked at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's side face, was stunned, and then smiled:

"I like Shiwa too."

Bai Ye doesn't know what kind of feelings he has for Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, but whenever he is with Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, he always feels very relaxed, maybe this is the so-called liking.

"Ye Jun can like me, I'm really happy!"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu turned to look at Bai Ye and smiled.

With a charming smile, this scene was fixed in Bai Ye's eyes.

......

Please forgive me, Chapter 35.

Chapter 39 The reason why Bai Ye can't see ghosts all the time

The afternoon class ended soon, and Bai Ye picked up his bag and prepared to leave as soon as school was over.

Because Kirisu Mafuyu has to deal with swimming pool affairs, Bai Ye doesn't have to go to the office to find her after school today.

Instead, Yulia Erkudo was found by Matsuki Kirisu as the victim.

Bai Ye originally wanted to ask Ermu Tang Yulia to take him to find the spiritual master, but now it seems that it is impossible.

After getting the address from Ermutang Yulia, Bai Ye went alone.

After leaving school, Bai Ye waited for the bus at the intersection.

Ermutang Yulia said that the spiritual master was located in a commercial street at Yigu Station. Although Bai Ye didn't know why he chose to be in a commercial street, it always felt a little unreliable, but he still planned to go and have a look.

I don't know why, Bai Ye encountered more ghosts today, and I couldn't see any of them before, as if there were more ghosts suddenly.

Not only in the alleys by the side of the road, but even some people would follow a little ghost behind them, which made Bai Ye a little puzzled.

These little ghosts didn't show a strong attack power. On the contrary, they were afraid of him. They avoided Bai Ye and did not cause any harm to themselves, so Bai Ye didn't bother to talk to these little ghosts.

While Bai Ye was waiting for the bus, a voice suddenly entered Bai Ye's ears:

"Oh! It's you! Classmate Bai Ye!"

Bai Ye heard the sound and looked around, only to find two girls wearing Toyosaki school uniforms walking towards him.

Taking a closer look, it was Baihe Chuanhua who had just called out his name.

Seeing Lily Chuanhua waving to him with a smile, Bai Ye was a little surprised, this girl is much older, and the spiritual power around her is almost like the sun in Bai Ye's eyes.

"It's classmate Bai. I didn't expect you to remember me."

Bai Ye also opened his mouth to say hello. He originally wanted to meet him later, but he didn't expect to meet him here, and the other party still remembered him.

"Hey, my memory is better."

Baihe Chuanhua scratched his head with a smile and said, as if thinking of something, Baihe Chuanhua looked at a black-haired girl beside him, and introduced:

"This is Yotsuya Miko, a good friend of mine."

"...Hi, I'm Yotsuya Miko."

Yotsuya Miko squinted at Bai Ye, and was stunned for a while before introducing herself.

"My name is Bai Ye."

Bai Ye nodded slightly and said.

"Student Bai Ye, is this planning to go home?"

Seeing that Bai Ye was waiting for the bus, Baihe Chuanhua asked curiously.

"No, after school, I want to go shopping."

Bai Ye shook his head and said.

"Hey, Miko and I are the same, that, if you don't mind, let's go together?"

Baihe Chuanhua saw that Bai Ye was also planning to play, and after hesitating for a while, he invited.

Hearing this, Bai Ye was stunned for a moment, then shook his head and said:

"Let's forget it, I'm going to Yigu, you guys should not be on the way with me."

When Baihe Chuanhua heard that Bai Ye was going to Yigu, his eyes lit up, and a smile appeared on his face:

"What a coincidence, Jianzi and I are also going to Yigu! Let's go together, there is a dessert shop there that has a new product, and I treat classmate Bai Ye to eat, as a reward for classmate Bai Ye for helping me last time."

Seeing what Baihe Chuanhua said, Bai Ye couldn't refuse:

"Ok."

"Hey hey, the bus is here, get on it!"

Seeing that Bai Ye agreed, Baihe Chuanhua smiled, and said hurriedly when he saw the bus coming.

Soon, the three got on the bus and headed towards Yigu.

Sitting in the car, Bai Ye looked at the receding scenery outside the window.

Beside him was Miko Yotsuya, whom he had just met, while Yuri Chuanhua was sitting alone in the back row of the two.

"Hey, hey, do you want to eat PP Daifuku? It's soft and delicious."