The Journey of the Dimensional Warrior

"Is Kasumi Hill student Calvin?" Dansheng Gu Morixia looked at Kasumi Hill Shiyu whose body was frozen and asked, although it was a question sentence, he used an affirmative tone.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's face started to turn red, and at this time Kato Megumi said in a relieved voice: "If you don't mind, can you show us? Maybe we can give you some good suggestions!"

"That's right, I'll try my best to help." Dansheng Gu Senxia said, patting his chest.

"That's right, as readers, we may really be able to ask you some questions that you, as creators, have subconsciously ignored in your writing!" Xiao Bieli echoed.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu hesitated for a while, and finally handed the book to the three of them.

Although the book is very thick, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu didn't write much at all, only three or four pages, so the three of them passed it on quickly.

After reading it, the three of them were silent for a while, which made Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who was paying close attention to them, a little nervous.

Just when Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu couldn't help asking questions, Xiao Bieli first said: "The beginning of the card text is a bit rare! Could it be that it is difficult to develop the appearance of the heroine? Or is it difficult to set the character of the heroine?"

"That's right, Kasumigaoka's novel just happened to be stuck on the heroine's appearance, obviously there is something wrong with the setting of the heroine." Dansheng Gu Morixia also analyzed, "By the way, Kasumigaoka, you Why Calvin?"

"The beginning of this novel is a very common beginning in youth love novels, and the character of the male protagonist also stands out. Since Kasumi Hill-san is going to write a romantic light novel, then the next step is the appearance of the female protagonist. But , where are you stuck, Mr. Katou Megumi?" Kato Megumi also followed up and asked.

"I want to write the heroine well." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu replied after thinking for a while.

"That's right, at the beginning of yours, there is no bright spot, and the character of the male protagonist is also relatively routine. It is nothing more than sunny, cheerful, helpful, etc., so if you want to have a bright spot in the novel, then it is true. We should start with the heroine." Xiao Bieli said while flipping through the novel.

"Xiao Jun is right, Xiazhiqiu student, although you described the hero in a more detailed way at the beginning, the hero is basically a person with ordinary looks, gentle and gentle personality, and indecisiveness, but this kind of personality is too common. Yes, most of the male protagonists in light novels have this kind of character." Tansheng Gu Morixia nodded in agreement.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, who wanted to refute, didn't know how to speak, so she could only nod silently.

Although she is writing a novel for the first time, it is not that she has never read novels before, so she naturally knows that the character of the heroine in her writing is very routine, so the character of the heroine is needed to highlight the unique characteristics of the article.

Xiao Bieli pondered for a while, touched his chin, and said, "If it is written like this, then this novel will be very ordinary, but you are in this place, Cave, obviously because you want to make the heroine stand out. This situation is actually very simple.”

"Easy?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's face remained unchanged when he heard the words, but his eyes flashed with disbelief.

But she didn't question it. Since the other party said so, there must be something to say next.

"If you want the whole article to be brilliant, your heroine's character must show a contradictory point with the hero's character. It is best to be different from the hero's character, so that contradictions can be shown in daily life, and it can also be used for future appearances. laying the groundwork for the female character." Xiao Bieli said lightly, clicking on the notebook on the table.

"Contradictions and opposites!?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's eyes brightened slightly, and a pair of clear eyes stared at Xiao Bieli closely. The thoughts in her mind suddenly became clear, but after that, her thoughts were still blank, which made her frustrated.

"Xiao Jun seems to be very reasonable." Kato Megumi, who had been sitting beside them listening to their conversation just now, said.

"Actually, you can set your character as the heroine's character. You should know your own character best. That way, it is easy to describe and plot." Xiao Bieli suggested again after thinking for a while.

"Set it as your own character?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's quiet face showed shock for the first time.

She never thought of setting the heroine in the book as her own character.

Most of the authors, whether it is the character of the male protagonist or the female protagonist, set and draw up by themselves, and basically set the character according to the outline and plot.

But this is the first time she has heard that the author's own personality is set into it.

However, upon hearing this statement, she simulated the plot of "Love Metronome" in her mind, and substituted her own personality into it. Afterwards, her clear eyes gradually lit up. Naturally, she knew her own personality best.

After hearing Xiao Bieli's suggestion, she suddenly discovered that her personality was the most suitable one.

"Looks like the problem has been solved." Megumi Kato said looking at Kasumigaoka Shiwa with a happy face.

"Yes, yes, but thanks to Mr. Xiao, we didn't help at all!" Dansheng Gu Senxia said.

"Where is it? If you didn't talk about it, wouldn't this problem be so easy to solve?" Xiao Bieli asked back.

"Thank you!" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu felt countless inspirations emerge from her mind at this time, she hurriedly thanked a few people, and then lay down on the table and began to write quickly.

Looking at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu who was full of energy, Xiao Bieli and the three of them did not disturb her, but continued to chat in a low voice.

"Do you have any pre-arrangements this afternoon?" Dansheng Gu Senxia looked at the two and asked.

"No, I thought I would go to the supermarket to buy some snacks, daily necessities, and school utensils, and then go home and lie down. What's the matter? Are there any arrangements?" Xiao Bieli replied after thinking carefully.

Kato Megumi also nodded to indicate that he had nothing to do.

"Hey, is Xiao Jun going to the supermarket? Then let's go together. I just happen to have some things to buy!" Dan Sheng Gu Morixia seemed to be planning to go shopping, "What about you, Kato? Do you want to go with us?"

"Okay, it happens that there are no vegetables and fruits at home, so I should go buy some." Kato Hui agreed.

"Kasumigaoka, are you going with us too?" Danshengya Morixia, who received Kato Megumi's affirmative answer, turned to ask Kasumigaoka Shiwa who was still writing.

"I'll forget it this time. After school in the afternoon, I have to go home quickly to catch up on the article. I haven't moved a pen for several days. Now I have inspiration and I have to seize it." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu didn't look up, and was still talking Written, it seems that the way of thinking is very smooth.

"Okay then, let's go together next time!" Tanshenggu Morixia nodded understandingly.

"Definitely!" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu agreed.

"Then let's exchange phone numbers, emails and other contact information with each other, so that we can contact each other conveniently." Dan Shenggu Morixia suggested.

"No problem." The proposal was unanimously approved, and the four exchanged contact information.

"Okay, students, the lunch break is over, and we are going to have the first class of your high school next, good luck! The first class is physical education, and other teachers are busy sorting out the physical examination data. This afternoon But the class teacher is leading the class! Everyone go to the playground for me, boys run [-] meters long, girls run [-] meters, let's start!"

I don't know how long it has passed, but the head teacher Huang Quanchuan Aiho appeared in the classroom at some point, but the news she brought made the students in Class [-] mourn. Do you want to be so ruthless at the beginning of school?

Chapter Sixteen

Before school was over, the students who were still very energetic in the morning were already lying down on the playground. Only a few of them could stand there, but even those who were standing still bent over and supported their knees violently. Panting, only Xiao Bieli stood there without blushing, as if nothing had happened.

"Xiao Jun, aren't you tired?" Dan Shenggu Senxia panted violently with his hands on his knees, and asked Xiao Bieli who was standing beside him without any adverse reactions.

You must know that they ran intermittently for a total of three kilometers in the afternoon just now, and there are more boys, five kilometers. Although Mr. Huang Quanchuan is under the banner of exercising well, maybe the ability will improve, but is it useful? Only God knows.