I Open an Online Loan in Dongying

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This woman really wants to sleep with her like this forever!

At least at this time, Yuu thought so.

Author's message:

Ps: Regarding Miss Tohsaka in the previous chapter, I actually think... that boy looks okay, he has been single for a long time, and even a fat man feels pretty. (ω*)

Ps: Because of the terrible influence of the pictures in the previous chapter, I made a special compensation, please forgive the other.

Chapter 058 The novel is originally sold as a gift!superior! (The second is for the blade!)

Like dominoes, almost 2 minutes after Yukinoshita woke up, Hihama trotted in nervously, and then Zaimoza walked in by himself.

Yuigahama's expression is a bit interesting, in fact, as long as it is not a completely useless answer such as "OK" after handing in the love letter, "I'm done, well done", then it is all valid.

It's just that Zaimoza is also here, so it's not easy to discuss the love letter or why Yu likes Miura.

"Sa... tell me! I can stand it! Your impressions after reading it!"

There are a lot of chairs in the club classroom, but there is actually only one table, but Cai Muzuo moved the chair and sat on it, which looks very grand.

In fact, Yu knew that he was panicking inside.

Yuigahama took out the impression Yu wrote to her, and read it again.

Zaimoza's superficial request is that someone read his novel.

As a member of the service department, Yukinoshita accepted the request and would give him a reply.

But is this really what Zai Muzao wants?

Just like people who go to Encyclopedia to search for their own symptoms because of a small problem in their body, they don't want to be seriously ill, and they don't recognize other people's judgments. They are searching, just searching for the answer they want.Then feel at ease when you get the answer you want.

In other words, what Zaimoza actually wants is the motivation to support him to continue writing.

That is to say, people who understand him and feel that he is awesome.

What he needs are hardcore fans.

So he knew that the novel written by Zaimuza was really disgusting, but he insisted on reading it, he was looking for something that could impress him and make Zaimuza feel good about himself.

This is what helps.

Of course, this is just one of them, and it is also possible to go to another ending, that is, he has given up writing, but he is still stubborn on the surface, but he needs a reason to give up writing on the surface.

Then it is a bad review!

Does he really want to continue writing, or has he given up on writing, so now he needs the last straw to bend him.

So, please invite Yukinoshita Yukino.This self-destructive woman.

Yuu pulled back the chair a little, and temporarily withdrew from the discussion.

"I'm sorry, I don't understand these things very well." Yukinoshita took out the manuscript carefully clamped with a clip, it can be seen that she did her homework, and there are different stickers on different pages of the manuscript, just like marking .

And he also knew that she was so serious, that's why Yu asked her to speak first.

And Zai Muzao crossed his hands in front of his chest, looking calm and extraordinary.

"Actually, I think..." Yukinoshita originally picked up the manuscript, but put it on his lap again, "It's boring."

"Even reading has become a pain."

"It's boring beyond imagination."

Her voice was nice, even rational, but it was just a few words, but with a strong impact, Zai Muzuo had already covered his chest with one hand, "At least, you can tell me... what the hell is it?" Be bored." Her voice trembled.

"First of all, there is a grammar problem. It's a mess. Why do you always use inverted sentences? And even the inverted sentences are wrong."

puff!

Although he thought that Yukinoshita might hit him hard, the words were too sharp.

"And here, why does the heroine take off? It's completely unreasonable."

"In Japanese, ability does not mean strength. Can you learn the complete Japanese first and then write it?"

"And what does Ngjasjalsjfagjsfaujsafhj mean here? Did you create it yourself?"

Yukinoshita was a rather scary woman, and Saikiza couldn't answer any questions at all.

Because she marked what she had done page by page, and then used it to ask questions.

From the overall feeling subdivided to between the lines.

But one very important point is missing.

That is...she didn't mention the plot at all.

I can't be infected by Zaimoza's plot, and then I can only talk about my impressions from leftovers.

Timuzuo was already lying on the ground.

"It's almost there." Yuu said, and invited Yuigahama who listened and then opened the manuscript to read, but Yuigahama nodded while watching.

She actually looked like she was falling asleep.