Nomenclature of Night
Chapter 9: .07 Modify progress
Revised chapters 280-300 today, and the progress is finally close to one-third.
In today's revision, the main changes are as follows:
The first modification of is that in the original text, Qingchen went to Xiancheng to fight. After the battle, Jiang Xue went to Xiancheng to support and rescue. Some ambiguous descriptions in this part were deleted.
The second modification is to correct the inconsistency of Zard's character.
In the setting, Zard is a neurotic young man, mentally ill, but fairly normal, with self logic.
But then writing and writing, he was completely nerfed.
For me, I still prefer the Zard that is completely neurotic at the back, so I modified the front to be more neurotic.
The third revision of is to continue to correct the contradictions between the plots of Da Yu, Zhong Yu, and Xiao Yu.
The fourth modification is to delete some superfluous and unplayed characters in the He Xiaoxiao chat group, leaving Jingshan, Yueer, Chuangwang, Taboo ACE999, Li Si, Zard, Huan Yu, Liu Dezhu, and a little duck , Qingbao, Lu Ya, He Xiaoxiao, Bingyan, these 13 characters.
In fact, the chat group part, I think it was also a very interesting plot part in the early stage of the book Ye, but in the later stage this group chat disappeared for no reason, which should not be the case.
Therefore, I still hope that it can return to the main line and be a branch line with a beginning and an end.
Well, that's all for today.
See you all tomorrow!
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