Nomenclature of Night
Chapter 9: .04 Modify the progress
There are major changes to the plot line today, and the changed chapters are chapters 201-230.
In this part of the content, Li Changqing appeared, Qingzhun appeared, and revisited the plot they first met.
Talk directly about the changes:
The first change is that Yangyang replaced part of the role of Zheng Yi, a silver-haired girl in No. 18 city. Because of the reason why she didn't find Qingchen's identity in the previous changes, she participated in the student parade, and she spread the Internationale.
In the original text, she herself was brought to the inner world.
Yangyang did not go to Prison No. 18 to plead for Guo Huchan. It was Li Shutong who let Guo Huchan go because of the sense of justice in spades.
In this part, some of the content that readers think is a little embarrassing to use too much force has been deleted, but most of them are still retained. I think this plot is still necessary.
The second revision is to delete a large discussion of the taxation of the world in the original text.
The third is to determine Li Yinuo's father as Li's frontline commander, Li Yunmu.
The fourth change of is that it is written in the original text that the world cannot confirm the current identity of the shadow, because the three shadow candidates of the previous generation disappeared together at the end, and it is not known who will be the winner.
The change here is that the three shadow candidates are Qingye, Qingqu, and Qingzhun.
So there was no fight in the end, Qingye and Qingqu became the shadow candidates and became Qingzhun's people.
The fifth change is more critical.
In the original text, Li Changqing and Qingchen met 'online dating' under the promotion of Yi, and Qingchen was put on Yi's ID Fangxin arsonist.
But in fact, as Li Changqing, she will not be idle at all to have online dating, and her character will not do such a thing.
So the second run has now become an "interview bodyguard", and Yi's manipulation in his resume caught Li Changqing's attention.
Later, Li Changqing watched Qingchen's boxing match and was recommended by Li Yinuo to become a lecturer in the martial arts hall.
This time, Qingchen and Li Changqing will get to know each other and get along more naturally. Of course, I will also have a lot of new content to fill, and I will spend most of my time today on this.
I think this change is still very necessary. It deletes the rotten stalk of Fangxin arsonist, and makes the plot more logical to the characters.
It won't look so embarrassing.
There is one more thing that should be changed, but it has not been changed: I praised the first sequence in 206. This book is very good, and everyone should read it. This sentence is not deleted.
Okay, that's all for today.
See you all tomorrow!
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