No Way People Find Cultivation Difficult, Right?

: Conclusion of Volume 1

　　 The first volume is finished, with a total of 17.5W words.

　　 In the control, even a part of it was exceeded. Originally, the first volume was intended to write 150,000 words, and the extra 25,000 words were normal length.

　　Because there are big brothers in the previous book as negative teaching materials, the new book has done enough work.

　　 The first volume of "Ye Ping Xiu Xian" is actually the opening story and introduction. I hope everyone can give a score.

　　 is very systematic. If you have any questions, you can leave a message in the scoring column below.

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　　【Score column】

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　　 Dark night score 8 points for the first volume.

　　 originally wanted to score 7 points for myself, but the main reason was that "everything is difficult at the beginning". I scrapped twelve beginnings, so I gave myself an extra point.

　　The three points deducted are the three points deducted on [Detail], [Rhythm], and [Personal Setting].

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Looking back, there are many problems in the first volume. The simplest one is the question of'information', which has not been revealed. Most of the chapters are used to shape the personality and the opening of the chapter. There is not much foreshadowing. It may be related to the writing style. There are relationships.

　　 I rarely ambush in the first volume. I like to set up a [core point] when writing books. Everything is done around this core point.

　　 I know very well what the core of my first volume is, and it is difficult to unfold other foreshadowings, and that is the case, 175,000 words, the protagonist is still in a sect, without any understanding of the outside world.

　　 But everything in the first volume is to welcome the second volume.

　　 The second volume is to fight with people, it is fun, all kinds of people will appear, funny characters, pretending characters, and the second volume is also a volume for me to spread out the subsequent worldview.

　　 Basically, whether this book can be written long or not depends on the response of the second volume.

　　 I won’t say much more specifically, lest it be spoiled.

　　 So thank you readers who are still supporting this book so far, thank you!

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　　 [2] The book has been revised again and again. The Qi training technique has been changed from 365 times to 36 times to complete it. Looking back, 365 times is really cool, but the problem is that it is about to collapse! So it was revised to 36 times, which is still strong, but not so scary.

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　　 [3] The book will be on the shelves in the early morning of National Day 10.1, so there is a free public period of one month. Please remember to subscribe when you are busy! The readers of the National Day are responsible for enjoying the holiday, and the night is responsible for making the readers have a happy holiday. It is expected that the National Day will burst in seven days. Thank you, the readers!

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　　【Mute Mode】

　　 Because of this book, a group of very low-quality book friends came.

　　 Most of the posts are, I’m super unhappy, Nima! Probably this is the remark.

In the book review area, there are naturally good and bad things. The night understands this, but rational discussion, the character of XX is disgusting, the character of XX is not well portrayed, and the plot of XX is completely unnecessary. Such comments appear, even if it is spraying the dark night. Will not delete posts.

　　 To be honest, it is a good thing to have opinions.

　　 But this kind of book, I don't like to read this book, this book is too cerebral palsy, this book XXXX, this kind of future will be banned.

　　 Turnip and cabbage have their own loves. If you don't like it, you can skip watching it. It's like you let me go to see Duo Mi. I definitely can't accept it. However, Duo Mi's TV series is not for adults.

　　 You can't say that they are not good, because they are not for adults at all.

　　 The book Xiu Xian is for the public to read. It’s a little whiter and lighter. It feels very embarrassing in the dark.

　　 I don’t like to point a cross, change the book to read, and I am not the only one to read the text. I have to spray a sentence to appear to be superior?

　　 The key road is like a long night?

　　 like to spray so much, go to be a fountain!

　　 Therefore, this kind of remarks will only be silent in tears when I see later.

　　 Reasonable discussion, and I completely accept the two sentences when I am unhappy.

　　 Just because it’s not suitable for people who don’t like to watch, spray it. Isn’t that the reason why people who don’t like tofu brain spray tofu brain?

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　　 The following is the thank you list for last week

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　　 I turned 78 pages with 10 names on each page. It would take more than three hours to type them all by hand.

　　 The scariest thing is that when you see this chapter, you have to turn over thirty pages at least.

　　 Therefore, I sincerely thank every reader who has given a reward.

　　 I was crying and there were too many people. In order to express my apology, I will add another chapter tomorrow as compensation!

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　　New week!

　　 ask for a recommendation ticket!

　　 Guiqiu for a small reward!

　　 Don’t tell me that you will definitely next time, because you won’t be sure next time!