Let me talk about the difference between the revised manuscript first.

Difference 1: Change from sword technique to sword intent, and then from sword intent to sword move. There are 1,460 sword moves in a set of sword technique. The more sword moves you understand, the more the sword technique is The higher the degree of completeness and the higher the state of swordsmanship, there must be a logical problem, but at least it is not bad. After all, this work cannot be measured by other works. It is definitely problematic to compare the ancient system with the Westward Journey system.

Difference 2: Before the modification, the protagonist’s talent has not been revealed, which made it difficult for the plot to advance, and suppressed the refreshing point. By the way, it was a mess. After the modification, after the ninth chapter, the protagonist showed his talent, the brother was shocked, and the boss Knowing that, I decided to carry on the flicker to the end, but would give all the resources to the protagonist, doing his best.

Let’s focus on this paragraph. There are a few of them. A few readers left a message saying that they feel that the sect is pitting the protagonist. There are two problems here. The first is that I didn’t make it well. In fact, I want to write a daily funny , But improper use of words may arouse disgust, but the second aspect is that some people deliberately stab and feel that the protagonist’s future is delayed. But the problem is that the book’s setting is that the protagonist participated in fifty celestial ascension conferences, which is a recruitment conference. , The result is that there is no sect, so what can the protagonist do regardless of his talent? No one wants you, what can you do if you are an individual? It's impossible to become stronger for no reason, right? Give you a pen, can you write? This spray point is unnecessary, so I deleted this post, thinking that I was deliberately looking for trouble.

Taihua Taoist and Su Changyu’s attitude towards the protagonist was that they wanted the protagonist to stay longer, don’t feel like we were **** and left. Later, after knowing that they were geniuses, they did their best to help the protagonist, but some readers have a kind of hope that Tai The Chinese Taoists give the protagonist to other sects, don't delay the protagonist's practice, I feel very puzzled, as long as the protagonist is the protagonist, even if he knows it is a scam, he will not leave, right? Still the same sentence, no one wants it, the sect chooses to help you when you are down, and you run right away when you are bullied? Isn't this a villain?

   In addition, the sect also did not harm the protagonist at all. The main reason was that the sect was poor, and the sect was too poor to eat or wear warmth. Doesn’t it mean that the sect has big fish and meat, and the protagonist suffers from suffering?

   The above are two differences.

   Let's say something else.

   There are some big brother readers in the book review area, because the book was opened before the end of the dark night, all kinds of complaints, this dark night is full of shame.

But the big brother must finish the book next year. The specific reason is not convenient to disclose here. The follow-up content is only about 200,000. There is no eunuch, because the structure is good, but when you write it, there is always an uncomfortable feeling. Maybe It's because it's late.

   So everyone cursed a few words about the night.

   There are some black fans who are deliberately bringing the rhythm, is this unnecessary?

   Am I not the first double-opening author at the starting point?

   Big Brother 1.5 million words, not too much, but at least not too few?

   Want me to be the first double-opening author at the starting point, you come to spray, I shut up.

   But the problem is that nowadays, there are a lot of double-opening authors, three-opening authors, and even eunuchs who keep on new books.

   I have made a guarantee that the senior brother will finish the book at the right time next year. I don’t know the specifics, but it depends on the arrangement.

   Then, a group of NT rhythm dogs appeared.

   I didn’t even read the book, so I sprayed [It's a mentally handicapped little white article again], [It’s the same routine again], [Ranked out for bad money again]

   Fifty percent of the authors are peer authors. When you click on the avatar, you can see the very eye-catching "reading writer". Most of them are eunuchs who have not signed a contract or wrote a three to fifty thousand words.

   slander or something, I am used to the last book.

   New book is coming?

   is also really idle time.

   Whether it is a peer, or some black fan with a deliberate rhythm.

   Stop talking about the mentally handicapped Xiaobaiwen. The starting point is not a few books that dare to claim that it is not Xiaobaiwen, as long as it is cool, it is Xiaobaiwen.

Besides, don’t have any sense of superiority. After reading a few books, I feel like I’m superior and look down upon Xiao Baiwen. It’s like playing LOL. I went to Ionia and felt that the other clothes were wild clothes. What do you do with this thing? The key is coming?

   Without Xiaobaiwen, can online texts be accepted by readers?

   It is understandable that I don’t like to read Xiaobai. After all, they have different reading ideas. Don’t forget what type of book you read when you first read the Internet.

   This is the most disgusting thing. After reading a few books, I feel like I’m superior. I look down on this and look down on that.

   There is still bad money.

   I'm also a little dazed, even if this is not on the shelves, even if it happens to be bad money? I think I'm going to rush, but still bad money?

   and.

   Ask yourself.

   If it can be bad money, who would stand up righteously and say, I don’t like bad money?

   Again.

   I wrote the book word by word. Whose bad money is it?

   is not well written, and no one will spend a penny.

When    writes well, someone will give the money.

   with a bit of logic spray.

   After seeing this kind of illogical black fan in the book review area, I can only delete it, not wanting to keep it for the New Year.

   It's Tuesday.

   ask for some recommendation votes!

   If you can give a reward, thank you very much!

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