Chapter 86, Fiction

"Sister, why do you keep these bad reviews? Why don't you delete them?"

"When readers open this book at one click and see all the negative reviews, will they still read your book?"

Big eyes gave Xiao Yi a blinding glance.

Su Yunqing is wrong.

"But what they said is quite reasonable. I am indeed a novice."

"And, wouldn't it be bad to delete other people's comments?"

Shrugging, Xiao Yi is not surprised by Senior Sister's gentle temperament, and then backhandedly deleted some negative comments that had involved personal attacks in the comment area.

The rest of the discussion of the plot is left.

Then he took an apple from the cabinet and handed it to Su Yunqing.

Only then did Senior Sister stick out her little head, pursed her little lips and sipped the fruit in her mouth, her eyes narrowed into slits.

She liked the little brother's intimate behavior very much, which made her feel sweet, just like before.

No, it's even happier than before.

"Xiao Yi, readers say that my kiss scene is too jerky, and they don't feel involved at all."

The faint moonlight slanted in from the window softly and fell on Su Yunqing's peach-like jade face.

"so what?"

Xiao Yi joked.

"They, they asked me to source materials on the spot, so that I can better write the effect they want."

Affectionately glanced at the younger brother with soft eyebrows beside him, Su Yunqing's eyes were full of affection.

"In-situ collection? What is the in-situ collection method?"

Forcefully holding back his laughter, Xiao Yi replied solemnly.

As soon as he finished speaking, a small body threw himself into his arms arrogantly and unreasonably, his small hands straightened his face, and a pair of thin and warm lips were already printed.

"Just, take it like this!"

Ho!

A sneak attack, right?

Senior, you are getting better and better now!

How much knowledge of flirting men did you make up for in this summer month?

However, Xiao Yi is naturally not that passive person, and instantly turned from defense to attack!

Before he could taste the soft and smooth touch, Su Yunqing suddenly pushed his chest and squeezed out a sentence from between his teeth.

"Xiao Yi, wait, wait a moment~"

"What's wrong?"

Xiao Yi let go of her, looking a little curious.

Immediately after seeing the senior sister lying down at the counter again, she picked up her phone and started editing.

About a minute later, Su Yunqing put down her phone and posted it again.

"I, I wrote it down, Xiao Yi, yes, do you want to continue?"

Xiao Yi: ? ? ?

Are you really using me as a tool?

When he couldn't laugh or cry, the two blurred figures overlapped again.

Another two minutes later.

"Xiao Yi, wait, wait a minute!"

isn't it?

again?

After several times, the anger in Xiao Yi's heart was also lifted.

He seriously doubted whether the three-pointed, seven-pointed shy little girl in front of him deliberately teased him like this?

The moon is actually not very bright tonight.

The dim stars, hanging alone in the sky, exude a flickering luster.

After some plundering, Xiao Yi let go of the person in his arms contentedly.

Pinching that tender little face, Xiao Yi teased.

"Is it enough?"

"Would you like some more?"

"Enough! Enough!"

"No, I'm going to faint."

After a few quick breaths, Su Yunqing leaned in her sweetheart's arms.

Heart shy and sweet.

Before she came, she had never imagined that the progress with Xiao Yi would be so rapid. She thought it would still be a protracted battle, but she did not expect the younger brother to have such a big change in his attitude.

This is naturally the result that Su Yunqing dreamed of.

She couldn't even be happy.

Looking at the seductive appearance of Xiafei's cheeks, the jade in his arms, Xiao Yi asked.

"Now the kiss scene can be written, but what if the readers have other requests later?"

"any request?"

With her head tilted, Su Yunqing asked curiously.

"When two people fall in love, they must experience encounter, acquaintance, holding hands, hugging, and kissing~"

"You have already written the previous plot, what about the next step after the kiss?"

"At that time, readers will still think that your writing is too jerky and does not make people feel immersed in the scene, so do you want to collect materials in advance?"

When it comes to doing pornography, even if Su Yunqing has read a lot of romance novels, how can he be the opponent of the old driver Xiao Yi, and he has successfully led him out of the way with a few words.

"It's like oh~"

Blinking her big eyes stupidly, Su Yunqing looked at the corner of her little brother's slightly raised mouth, and then gently retracted into the quilt.

There was a trembling in the little quilt, and then she waved to Xiao Yi: "Xiao Yi, you, you come up~"

With a pretentious hum, Xiao Yi took off his shoes and got on the bed, leaning gently against the head of the bed.

Outside the quilt, Su Yunqing's small hand still insisted on tapping on the phone non-stop.

Call it a good name.

Take material!

It's just that it's unknown who did what they wanted in the name of the material.

The senior also put down the phone.

She has already written more than a thousand words, enough to fill in the details next.

Glancing at Xiao Yi shyly, Su Yunqing's body slowly slid down, and after a while, only a pair of eyes remained.

"Hey, Yaxin said the same thing~"

Zhao Yaxin?

Fellow people!

It seems that there is a chance to chat with her about her experience.

But thinking about her unhappy breakup with him before, Xiao Yi was suddenly bored.

Thinking of this, Xiao Yi instantly lost interest, glanced at the time and realized that it was almost eleven o'clock at night.

"Okay, go to sleep, see you tomorrow."

With a soft voice, Xiao Yi was about to leave the room.

"Good night, Xiao Yi~"

The man on the bed replied softly.

"Good night, senpai."

It was not until the figure of the younger brother had disappeared from the door that Su Yunqing fluttered her feet on the bed with excitement.

yeah!

Su Yunqing, you are the best!

 …

 …

It was twelve o'clock at night.

At this time, Xiao Yi had also fallen asleep.

The stars outside the window were completely hidden behind the clouds at this moment.

The whole world is completely silent, only the occasional frog croaking will sound intermittently.

(End of this chapter)

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