My Girlfriend has a System

Chapter 227: Urgent Party Su Xiaoyi

Su Shi is making a voice with the apprentice.

"Hey, teacher, I started to write you and let me write that the strong one is reborn."

"Oh, is it, how are you feeling?"

"Feeling... Is it a bit big to hang up, can you write something later?"

"Do you control it?"

"Amount... a little difficult."

Su Shi haha ​​smiled: "Xiao Baiwen is not as good as you think!"

"Yes..." Ai Wei admitted with a little embarrassment.

Xiao Baiwen does not look at the writing style is simple, the routine is not complicated, but Su Shi’s past life is almost all writing small white text, how many really written?

A rhythm kills a group of people.

Then one controls the protagonist's strength and kills a group of people.

"And the teacher, although I used what you said, but this is really a problem?" Ai couldn't help but ask.

"What problem?" Su Shidao.

"Look, this protagonist has a single character, direct face, feeling... too monotonous."

"You want to say, there is no feeling, the role is not stereo? Or straightforward, the character has no connotation?"

"Hehehe..." Ai was embarrassed.

Although she saw Su Shi write seven kinds of weapons when she first saw her, she recognized the master of Su Shi.

But now writing the web, the way of the routine makes her very uncomfortable.

However, she feels that it is true. Most of the white texts are really not very connotation. There are even some shoddy white texts, even the logic is ignored, just the pursuit of cool.

But the real little white text is not that simple!

Su Shi thought for a moment and said: "What is the protagonist in your text, you know?"

"Well, acting arrogantly, arrogant in the heart, rich in combat experience, good for yourself, strong outsiders, soft and hard to eat..." Ai Wei said.

This is a very standard fantasy white protagonist.

"Do you think such a character has no connotation?" Su Shi asked.

"The amount... is a bit."

"So, do you think that the fight I wrote is connotative?"

Ai Wei replied without hesitation: "The teacher wrote of course there is!"

Although the fight is also a small white text, but a pre-existing ‘mudge bully and poor poor’ makes the whole article very good.

"But if you look at it carefully, you know, my protagonist, set a lot of overlap with your protagonist."

"amount......"

"Ai Wei, the connotation is made out of the story, not by the protagonist setting." Su Shi chuckled and said: "This way, I will give you a classic example of several characters."

"Ah?" Ai Wei was a little aggressive.

However, Su Shi cleared his throat and coughed twice, with a sense of pride and direct opening.

The voice is swaying, with an unparalleled arrogance.

"Hands picking stars in the sun and the moon, there are no people like me in the world!"

Su Shi’s singing has a systematic bonus. Although singing and reading are different, there are always some points in common.

In a short line, he was read three times.

Ai Wei heard the words, as if he saw a supreme power, his eyes were full of pride, and he was independent in the world.

Conceited... arrogant... even faintly sad.

"Hey, Ai, you said how do you write a certain character when he writes a certain character in a certain environment, is the image not full?" Su Shi smiled, and this awakened Ai.

"Another example......"

Su Shi’s look changed and continued.

"Thousands of robberies, hundreds of times are difficult, Heng Gu hastily, playing between the fingers!"

"Do not die, do not destroy the soul, shock the ancient and the present, no enemy!"

"When the yin and yang are in chaos, I will dye the blue sky with my demon blood! The billions of souls will be soldiers, and the millions of gods will be the lords, and the worshippers will be out, and the gods will be convinced. The town's magic stone dyes the blood of the saints, and the world seals the gods. , dare to resist!"

As soon as the voice fell, Ai Wei seemed to feel a sigh of magic and rushed into the sky.

Even without any description, Ai Wei can feel the image of the ‘people’!

"Another example......"

Su Shi’s expression was positive and correct.

"Moral Bodhisattva is not right, now I know that I am me!"

Although the discourse is extremely short, Ai Wei seems to see a figure that has emerged from the moral industry.

His face is very real, very real, and has a kind of joy.

Image?

Are the images of these people not enough?

Connotation?

Even if no other plots are made, Ai can imagine their image, and even make up a series of details and their past experiences.

This is much more intuitive than any text!

"Do you understand now? The image of the protagonist has nothing to do with the subject matter, but it will only write questions that cannot be written." Su Shi smiled.

"Yes, teacher!" Ai Xin was excited and answered.

Su Shi smiled slightly, and he said nothing wrong.

Perhaps Xiao Baiwen can't feel the positive energy encouragement like other texts, but the characters are shaped, but they are not in the bottom.

Especially the few big men of previous lives...

"To the master."

"what's up?"

"What is the humming voice that has been coming from your room?" Ai finally couldn't help but ask.

Su Shi turned her head and looked at the door that was stunned by Su Xiaoyi, who was angered by anger.

The expression calmed back: "Nothing, my cat is playing at the door."

"When is the teacher raising your cat at home? And can the cats make such a big noise?"

This sentence Ai Wei did not say anything, but the final words: "That teacher, I will continue to code."

"Go."

The voice just hanged, Su Xiaoyi shouted out the voice of shyness.

"Brother...Adult! You give me out!"

This cargo has been knocked for more than two hours, during which time it is more punching and kicking on the door...

Fortunately, Su Shi prepared food and water in advance, otherwise she would definitely be killed by Su Xiaoyi, who was ashamed.

Su Shi just looked at the door and shrugged her shoulders. She put on her headphones and put up the music.

"It’s not my fault anyway. Who makes you so confident that I can learn the words of "sweet words" and let me write what I feel after reading... The feeling after reading is that let me write a big sense of reading. This is really 'big bang'."

Let Su Shi learn to swear by swearing words... This is also a loss to her export.

Anyway, it wasn’t Su Shi who was mistaken. Su Shi casually listened to the music for two hours. During the period, she ate a bunch of seeds and peanuts and watched a movie.

After Su Xiaoyi no longer knocked on the door, Su Shi opened the door.

"Why don't you tell me, are you swearing?" Su Xiaoyi gritted his teeth and suddenly appeared in front of Su Shi.

"Quiet me." Su Shi shrugged: "What is my name? You won't see it yourself."

"you--"

"What are you, do you want me to write a post-reading feeling?"

Su Xiaoyi's two rows of small teeth, Ziz, grinded up and made Su Shi have a dim sum.

This girl won’t bite directly...

"What about the manuscript?"

"Ha?" Su Shiyi.

"I said the manuscript, the sword of the longevity." Su Xiaoyi bit his teeth: "After those who have magazines?"

"The amount... there is."

"Give me over!"

"What are you doing?" Su asked.

Su Xiaoyi's little face red~www.readwn.com~ whispered a few vague words.

"What? I didn't hear it?" Su Shi said.

"I said, I want to see!"

Su Xiaoyi’s eyes seem to be saying.

You ask again, I will kill you!

"and also......"

"what?"

"Hurry up and write..."

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