My Girlfriend has a System

"Pro, one, kiss one..."

It’s never a big deal to get up, it’s not their business anyway.

But it is the matter of Su Shi and Su Xiaoyi!

"What should I do next? What should I do? The **** Su Shi, also use his full strength for his sister..." Su Xiaoyi suddenly panic, how could she go to pro-Soviet?

But the shouts of people around...

Inevitably, she could not help but complain.

Well, it really is Su Shi’s fault.

Although let Su said to be full of power... is himself.

Su Shi also sighed, and she was still a little childish.

Just do it, why bother.

But it doesn't matter, if you don't kiss anything, this is just a joke between teenagers and girls. Su Shi said two good words, such as just thinking about the Ouyang long legs...

Keke, said to Ouyang Yan, 'This is just a joke, don't be serious' words. Anyway, everyone knows that this kind of ‘pro-mouth’ promise is just a joke of nature. If you open it, there is no problem.

Of course, the people are disappointed, but what about it, what is Guan Suzhen?

So Su Shi wanted to speak: "Xiaoyi, I-"

Su Xiaoyi’s face suddenly turned red, then turned and ran.

Slim legs and a few steps down to the entrance of the martial arts, to change the shoes at the fastest speed, suddenly no shadow.

Su Xiaoyi, escaped...

"Hey, the little brother is a pity, the sister paper is young, but people can be pretty!"

"After all, I am young and a little shy."

"Man, don't lie, chase, you might even have a good encounter!"

The onlookers said a lot of things.

Su Shi is stiff there, his mouth is like a goldfish, one by one.

"I haven't finished talking yet..."

......

When Su Shi came home, Su Xiaoyi had already gone home, and kept herself in the room, not coming out.

Cousin Su Qianxin seems to go out to buy food, and she is working hard toward the image of a housewife.

Su Qianxin goes shopping every day, and buys a lot, and basically the ingredients will be consumed in less than twenty-four hours.

Although Su Shi has not eaten a dish she has made so far...

Waste!

Su Shi’s heart hurts a bit.

He suddenly felt that it was a wrong decision to promise his cousin to cook.

It’s a waste of money to buy food, which can make Su Shi feel bad for a long time, which definitely affects the review.

"Forget it, first write the instructions for the writing of Maple." Su Shi took a deep breath and sat in front of the computer.

Xiao Baiwen’s writing is actually a highlight, one is small and the other is white.

Small is cool, white is fast, of course, it is a little cool.

A ‘cool’ character gives an overview of all the white essays, just like a ‘handsome’ word, which is a summary of Su Shi’s life.

Well, Su Shi thinks so.

Of course, such a simple writing is definitely not good. This is no different from the outline. You have to fill the water and let the outline be full before you can become a text.

So Su Shi struggled to write a book, centered around the word 'shuang', and wrote more than two thousand words.

Although there is more water, but who made this time no money?

Don't make money, what is the water?

After writing, Su Shi sent the maple tree.

The editors have long waited for them to wear them. If they didn't have their own ‘subscription’ (the fee for the manuscript), they all wanted to go to the Susie home with a knife to remind them to go!

The author may not understand the writing skills of Xiao Baiwen, because the authors are now Wen Qingwen, who continue to write Wen Qingwen and can support themselves.

But the editor can't!

As an editor, you will not finish the main points, how to review? How do you know English?

"I sent a small white writing technique!" After receiving the documents, Maple Tree shouted.

Awkwardly, the editors are all around.

"Where is it?"

"How to write, why do the authors under my hands feel the same, and completely flutter the streets?"

“Is there any successful method here?”

They were surrounded by maple trees and their eyes were full of curiosity and excitement.

Even the purple night editor who did not deal with Su Shi also came together.

No way, this is the rice bowl for their meal.

In the end, I was the chief editor of the blue date and coughed: "Maple, put the course of the author area first, and then send it to us by mail."

"Okay, editor-in-chief." Maple quickly ran up, and he added a title to Su Shi’s lecture.

- "Bad words, dear fingers, on the writing skills of Xiao Baiwen"

Then I sent a copy to each editor before I saw it.

Su Shi started the article:

"The so-called Xiaobaiwen is actually the abbreviation of Shuangwen. It is the skill of how to make readers cool, and it is the skill of business literature. Instead of following the mainstream Wenqing writing..."

"The essence of Shuangwen is to look forward to, face and slap."

"The feeling of expectation, for example, in the fight I broke, first pressure and then rise, after the protagonist was remarried, the readers will suppress an anger, and hope to see the protagonist retaliate all this gas, when it is three years After that, everyone knows that the protagonist can beat his fiancee, which is a good expectation..."

"But please be sure to pay attention to it, that is, the suppression can not be too much. For example, I once saw a book that tried to learn me, called Dou Tian Tian, ​​the author wrote the protagonist was also pressed ~www.readwn.com~ family did not Destroy the door, the fiancee is slain, the protagonist is chased..."

"He is a stupid fork, the reader is brought into your protagonist, you let the reader experience this experience once, people do not want to kill you to blame!"

"So the suppression can't be too much, let the readers look forward to the face behind, and can't pressure the reader to abandon the book..."

"Then we will talk about the face..."

Su Shi’s writing is very white, and this small white writing technique is also true, but it is really easy to understand.

"It turns out!"

"This is Xiao Baiwen. It is no wonder that the author of my hand has failed to write Xiao Baiwen."

"What he said is justified. I said that after he made it clear, I found out that most of the previous fires and texts did not have any over-repressed plots."

"Indeed, our group of editors actually lost to an author... No wonder he can keep the hot list first!"

There are a lot of editors reading books. They naturally understand Su Shi’s explanations, and they have deep experience.

But the problem is...

The eyes of everyone are very weird. Su Shi’s example of his own novels is already a bit arrogant, and he still takes the fight against Tianzhu as a counterexample...

This is a naked face!

Maple’s mouth is pumping: “I’m so big, don’t you feel uncomfortable in one day?”

They thought it was right. In a distant rental house, the author of "Brawling Scorpio" fell directly into the world.

"Bastard! I remember you!"

......

In fact, not far from Susie, there is an angry little girl who is falling on the pillow.

"Damn Susie! He definitely wants me to kiss him!"