I Loaded the Love Game

: "Commentary on Essays" + a little behind the book

The orange that had been smelling for a long time was finally thrown away.

I was very happy to get the first place in "One Emperor and Four Emperors Essay", and decided to buy another orange and continue to smell it.

Thanks to the one hundred book friends who first booked;

Thank you to every book friend, whether you are still reading or have abandoned your book, thank you for your past, present, and future support;

Thanks to the light novel group, thanks to the editors of the starting point nine groups;

Finally, thank you for choosing to stick to me.

This concludes the testimonials.

It’s a bit short, I didn’t think too much about the subject matter, cool points, and routines in the following chat.

At that time, I thought about the simple persona of the three roles.

One: The beautiful young male protagonist who "can talk about love" and "appears to be played between the hands of the heroine, but actually plays with the heroine";

Two: "Rejected, but don't care", "No weakness", "Can see through lies", "I don't care about the world's vision, and pursue what I want." A beautiful girl who never lied;

3. "Unreasonable, possessive, and the protagonist has to surrender superficially", "high status", "cruel", "pure bad woman", "extremely clean, only let the hero touch", "good figure" Queen beauty girl.

The name of the protagonist:

Watanabe Toru is nothing special, even very old-fashioned. Not only is it not like the name of the protagonist in the light novel, but now the Japanese name is "Watanabe Toru", and the most important person is over 30 years old.

He was born in the countryside of Iwate Prefecture, a village that is almost abandoned and there are no young people. The aesthetics of his parents still stayed in the era of Shizuka Kudo.

From the very beginning, I didn't think about spending too much time to give him a name that fits the actor of the light novel.

I firmly believe that after a book is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, the titles of "Kun Watanabe", "Watanabe", and "Toru" will naturally become nice and friendly in the hearts of readers.

(I have already seen someone change their name to "Kamikawa, Toru Watanabe" in the game, although he is a guy to show off his record)

As for the book's failure to gain popularity, the protagonist's name is meaningless no matter how good it sounds.

Of course, the heroine's name can't be that simple, no matter whether the book is good or not, it must be nice and have a story.

Clear wild, beautiful appearance, awe-inspiring, awe-inspiring group of words, awe-inspiring behavior, awe-inspiring eyes, and awe-inspiring personality, even the movement of brushing the long hair on the shoulders is also awe-inspiring;

Kujo Miki, Kujo is the old noble surname, Miki, the beautiful princess (Original: Toru Watanabe: "Miki, my beautiful princess.").

Think about this, open the book immediately, and just think about the plot every day while sitting in front of the computer.

Then, um, two test-water pushes, 100 bookings, miserable.

Next, let’s talk about how this book has been ordered from 100 to the current 1w8, becoming the champion of "One Emperor and Four Emperors Essay".

It’s on the shelves, the first order is 100...cut...think about it...let’s cut...well, I think the heroine is very attractive, a group of unsightly guys, and then Hold on...Forget it, cut it...Wait...

When entangled repeatedly, a book friend rewarded 100 points.

One day later, another book friend gave a reward of 100 points.

Then, in those few days, the editor of Starry Night who was in charge of this book sent a note saying:

"The new book has been on the shelves for a month, and the grades have risen steadily. You can ask me for recommendations."

Is this written specifically to me?

of course not.

But just like Watanabe Toru was overwhelmed by Kujo Miki, studying hard every day, and amusing myself like a clown in my heart, I am also entertaining myself as writing this to me.

People can live in a muddle-headed way, but to be motivated, they must grasp something (suddenly wrote a reasonable sentence, put it in the book another day, let Kiyano Rin use it to teach Watanabe Toru), so I caught "[Tianmingzhizhiyou], [Twilight Smoke], [Thailand Cai Xukun]’s 100 and 500 points rewards; [Yi Conghan]’s reward for "Nine Tiao Miki"; [Tianmingzhizhi] Monthly ticket; "This sentence edited by Xingye" was written for a month.

A month has come, I ordered a hundred books without recommendation, and wrote silently for a month. Everyone can imagine how much the results will increase.

No matter what, in short, it is in line with "steady rise."

With this idea in mind, I went to the editor of Starry Night.

I remember that I was in a frustrated mood. After all, the first order was 100. Maybe the editor said that it was for those books that first ordered 500 or 1,000.

Unexpectedly, the editor of Xingye went to read my book, and then immediately agreed to arrange a recommendation for me-at that time, the grades were sparse, colorful, black and black, in short, it was just two words: ugly.

Not only that, from that time on, the editor of Starry Night began to guide me in writing books.

"You have a good book. Follow-up characters will be brilliant, so you can get up. Remember to keep a close eye on the character set, write the heroine, and pull a lot of it."

"Daily love can also have a main line, it is not easy to collapse, you can write a big push."

"The heroine must have a "contrast", pull and pull a big push. "

I said: "There is a contrast, except for the Missy character, everything else is different."

"You know what a fart, I said the heroine herself."

I said: "What?"

"Let’s put it this way, like "Youth Love Story", have you seen it?"

"Ah, I've seen it."

"Xuexia is sick, the actor and another woman are going to see her."

"Danko, Yuihama Yui."

"I know. Xuexia is sick. The male protagonist and a woman went to see her. The female said they wanted to go in, but Xuexia didn't let in. The actor went up and said a few words. Xuexia opened the door-this is "Comparison" ". Also, before and after meeting the male protagonist, Yukoshita's "contrast" with herself, understand? "

"understand."

Not only that.

The book later developed into a chapter by chapter. Before writing, I will talk to the editor Xingye about what I want to write.

"You can try to add these, pull and pull a bunch."

Me: "Oh oh oh."

Two days later, one late night.

"I think of a plot, you see if you can use it."

"Screenshot. (Pink curious eyes

Me: "Let me think about it." (In the end, it was useless. Instead, I was depressed by the plot. I suspected that he was depressed. He was here to depress others, hahaha.)

Not only the editor of Starry Night, when the book's 4 and 5 thousand were booked (for light novels, it is not worth mentioning), the editor-in-chief of the nine groups, Mung Dou, took the initiative to add me.

At that time, I didn't know what the editor-in-chief was, and thought that other editors would pull me to write a book under his name.

If the editor of the starry night is a matter of life, specific to each article, then the editor-in-chief of Mung Bean is Gaowu Jianling. From the overall framework of the book, I will guide me.

The book can win the essay championship, it is inseparable from the 100 bookmates who supported me at the beginning, the guidance of the nine groups of editors from the starting point, and the editor's willingness to order 100 books.

"Love Game" has 1 million words, experienced a trough, and ushered in the "One Emperor and Four Emperors" essay champion.

I met many book friends during the period.

Some are gone, some are still there, some quarreled with me, and some sent me the singing screen of the young lady from the book friend group in the middle of the night (so nice).

The book has also entered the middle and late stages, and I don’t know how long the story will last.

But please rest assured that you will finish the book, and the follow-up has already been thought out, absolutely the harem.

In addition, there will be no episodes of too much stomachache.

Personally, I don't want to write a story with too much stomach pain. Most book friends read books to relax. In addition to expressing feelings, they can avoid stomach pain as much as possible.

For example, in "Family Travel", three people are on the boat. I deliberately asked Kujo Miki to say that Rin Kiyano was a "losing dog", just to ease the atmosphere and make the book feel relaxed and happy as much as possible. Same goes for Watanabe. To see the cloud is like Ying Lili (there is also a hint that Toru Watanabe likes "losing dogs" most).

That's it, I will write my testimonial later, if you are interested.

Thanks again to the one hundred bookmates who made the first order, and to every book friend who supported me (especially the administrators of [Spring and Autumn Rain 1994] who helped to manage this book), and thanks to the editor-in-chief of Mung Bean and the editor in charge of Starry Night, and thank you for choosing Hold on to yourself.

Finally, I offer a prayer to the **** Kiyano who exists in the distant world, and hope that she will bless the book to go well:

She is most especially her, above everything else is her, my god, Kiyano Rin.

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