"Naturally I want to take pictures, I just want to make them better!"Bai Yuluo said.

She likes the role of the Empress very much, and she likes the feeling of pleasure in her fighting against the world and killing everyone for her brother.

However, as Lin Beifan said, the plot is enjoyable, but it is in the mode of a commercial film.

Filming After finishing it, people were not impressed at all.

This was her first movie, and she hoped to achieve some results.

Either the box office exploded, or the reputation exploded.

If there was nothing, it was better not to film.

At this time, Bai Yuluo's beautiful eyes looked over with a look of expectation:"Lord Landlord, since you can see the shortcomings of this script in a short period of time. Could you please help me modify it?

Lin Beifan was confused:"You want me to modify it?" I am a newbie, how can I understand this?"

Ma Chunlan also felt very puzzled.

Shouldn't the revision of the script be left to professionals?

How to leave it to a fledgling kid?

"No, you understand! Bai

Yuluo's eyes were full of meaning:"When you came to take on the role of the Sword God in White, you felt that the role of the Sword God in White was too heavy, so you directly changed his role. Am I right?" Lin

Beifan smiled dryly:"This... was discovered by you!""

"However, the role of the sword god in white is indispensable. He wants to teach the heroine martial arts!"

"Therefore, in order to make up for this shortcoming, you created a perfect training system, and also changed the character of the White Sword God into the sword demon Dugu Qiubai, making this character's image more prominent and becoming a classic!

Ma Chunhua couldn't sit still:"Is there such a thing?"

Bai Yuluo nodded:"Director Guan can testify!" Ma

Chunhua turned around, pointed at Lin Beifan, and laughed and said,"You kid can do it!" He actually changed the script without authorization. Lao Guan was very demanding, but you were able to convince him. It seems you have two skills! Otherwise, why don't you try to change it? We will use it if it is corrected, and it does not matter if it is not corrected!"

"Therefore, my landlord, please give me some advice!"Bai Yuluo pushed the script in front of Lin Beifan.

Lin Beifan was stunned by the looks of the two women.

"Okay, then I'll give it a try! Lin

Beifan coughed and said:"First of all, the main story line cannot be changed, and the plot cannot be significantly changed, so we focus on strengthening the heroine's character!" It can be said that as long as the character design is successful and others remember this character, the movie will be successful!"

"That makes perfect sense!"The two women nodded.

"Secondly, I think the heroine is not ruthless enough, so I need to change her to be more ruthless!"

"Not ruthless enough?"

Bai Yuluo blinked:"For her brother, for the sake of practicing to become stronger, she practiced risking her life, snatching resources whenever she saw them, and killing anyone who stood in her way. There was a bloody journey with enemies all over the world. Isn't this... ruthless enough? Lin

Beifan said:"This is just an ordinary revenge character. Other revenge dramas are similar and cannot highlight the ruthlessness of the empress!" I want to change this to……"

"Although the Empress worked hard to practice, as a mortal, practice was still very difficult. At this time, she came up with an idea. Her own physique was not good, but other people's were. Why not use other people's cultivation physiques for her own use?"

"As long as you transform other people's cultivation physique into your own, you can quickly become stronger!"

"So, with her eternally astonishing talents, she created the terrifying Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique!"

"This magic power continues to grow stronger by devouring the origins of various special physiques, and will eventually evolve into the legendary terrifying chaotic body!"

"So, she relied on this magic power to devour the physique of the Prodigy King along the way!"

"No matter who the other person is, no matter what status and background he has, as long as he has good physique, he will be devoured by the Empress!"

"In the end, the empress' enemies are everywhere, and everyone will find her and kill her!"

Bai Yuluo and the two girls took a breath of cold air:"Hey~~your settings are cruel enough! Ma

Chunhua looked at Bai Yuluo:"I think it's okay!""

"Yes, yes, but isn't this too cruel? The audience may not be able to accept killing innocent people for their own selfish desires, and may become disgusted with this character!"Bai Yuluo frowned.

Lin Beifan said calmly:"So, we must continue to strengthen the heroine's feelings for her brother. She became like this because of her brother! In this way, the audience will feel much less disgusted!"

"When the story sublimates in the end, the audience's ideas will change 180 degrees and they will feel sorry for the heroine!"

Looking at Lin Beifan's calm look, Bai Yuluo became a little more confident and urged.

"You go on talking first!"

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