God Descends the Second Element

Chapter 31: I found the treasure

   "The three of you, come with me to the office."

   Iida Ayano casually ordered two adult men in their thirties, and after a little hesitation, he nominated Wang Hao.

   The other newcomer cartoonists who failed the selection all looked disappointed. The two more mature cartoonists were nominated. They can agree, but the other one is obviously a high school student!

   This **** world, sure enough, still needs beauty...

Although    thought so in his heart, everyone did not express their thoughts, so they had to leave with a sigh.

   Wang Hao and two other cartoonists followed Tian Ayano's footsteps and walked into an office on the second floor. The other two obviously didn't adapt to this environment, and their faces showed respect.

   Wang Hao sat on the office chair casually, this calm attitude made Ayano Iida a little appreciated.

   Since the other party holds such a confident attitude, either he is full of confidence in his own manuscript, or he is just a big-headed ghost who has not left the society.

   Judging from Wang Hao's temperament, she is more inclined to the former, hoping this kid can bring her a little surprise.

   "Show me your manuscript."

   When it comes to business affairs, Iida Ayano's randomness just disappeared completely, replaced by an aura peculiar to a strong woman in the workplace.

   "Hay!"

   The other two cartoonists, both in their thirties, respectfully agreed, took out their own manuscript from the briefcase, bent over and handed it over.

   This scene made Wang Hao a little speechless, but he didn't say anything, and took out the manuscript from his bag, placed it at the bottom, and sat in a chair casually.

   Iida Ayano only frowned slightly when she saw this, and then began to take the original manuscript in her hand and watch it carefully.

   People who can be the editor-in-chief often have a pair of bright eyes and a more long-term vision, and they can even see the future potential from the beginning of the comic.

  The basic requirement of being editor-in-chief at Shueisha is that a long-term perspective is essential.

Iida Ayano was very careful when reviewing the manuscript, but every time she turned a page, the manga artist under review got a drop of cold sweat on his forehead. After Iida Ayano reviewed his five-page manuscript, she threw it away. At the desk, his most worried thing happened.

   "Please take your manuscript, there is nothing for you here."

   "Can you tell me the reason?"

   The cartoonist held the manuscript unwillingly, and did not leave in a hurry. After such a long effort was denied by one sentence, how could it be possible to leave so discouraged? How can it be repaired! !

   "That's what you want." Iida Ayano smiled slightly, this smile was particularly piercing in his eyes, and then Iida Ayano's evaluation was heard in his ears, "You should be a newcomer, right?

   From the most basic point of view, it is unqualified, and I have no idea what you want to express.

   Also, the development of the plot has deviated from the theme from the third page, and the fifth page is obviously different. With these, your comics have failed. "

   Iida Ayano's short words made the manga artist feel ashamed, and spit out a thank you with difficulty, and left the office hunchedly.

   His departure made another cartoonist nervous, waiting for the result with anxiety.

   After a long time, Iida Ayano put down another manuscript and tapped the table with his left hand lightly.

  "Your storyboarding technique is also not right, it is a little better than the previous one.

   From the perspective of the protagonist’s character shaping, why did he change his personality three times in just one word?

   Maybe you want to produce a different kind of protagonist, but it is because of this that you fail, because you don't have that strong control.

  The hierarchy of the story is confusing, and why the heroine died on page three, resurrected on page seventeen, and died again on page twenty-five. This is not a ghostly thriller comic! "

   "Thank you."

   The cartoonist who said these words seemed to be collapsed, and finally realized the feeling of leaving the person just now, and also left the office with failure.

   The departure of the two did not affect Wang Hao in the slightest, but the beautiful editor-in-chief looked tough, but he kindly reminded the shortcomings of the two newcomer cartoonists.

   But these problems won't happen to Dragon Ball at all. This phenomenon-level comic has attracted the expectation of countless people from the beginning, and it is precisely because of this that there will be great ups and downs in the future.

   [A long, long time ago, in a deep mountain thousands of kilometers away from the city, this unbelievable story began...]

The opening of   Dragon Ball caught the attention of Ayano Iida. What he saw was a young man with a tail rolling on a wooden wheel, carrying a big saw blade, and greeting the surrounding animals.

  The painting style looks very unique, but it doesn't make people feel uncomfortable.

   turned to the second page with curiosity. The young man with a long tail threw a wooden wheel larger than his body into the sky and kicked it suddenly, which made people feel admirable.

The teenager was out hunting and caught a big weird fish with his tail in the creek under the cliff. On the way home, he was hit by a car. The hero and the heroine met ~www.readwn.com~ something bad happened. battle……

  The more I look down, the more surprised Iida Ayano is. The idea of ​​this manga is like a wild horse, combining a strong technological style and retro meaning, as if entering a whole new world.

   [It is said that you can collect seven dragon **** and chant a spell...]

  〔The dragon will appear and can help people realize any wish, but only one wish can be realized at a time! 〕

  'S sudden increase in mythology did not break the original style, but added a lot of charm to this comic.

After slowly and carefully savoring Dragon Ball, Iida Ayano couldn’t believe that this was the work of a rookie manga artist. Whether it was in the filming technique or other aspects, she couldn’t find anything that could be changed .

   What is the responsibility of the manga editor? It is to find out the shortcomings of the cartoonist's work, and point it out to modify.

  The content of the story is very interesting. This young man named Monkey King gives people a lively and mischievous feeling. The cartoonist's idea is even more imaginative, and he perfectly controls the combination of several elements.

   From her point of view, this is definitely a comic with unlimited potential. As long as the following plot does not affect it, it will definitely catch on.

   The most important thing is that this manga fits Shueisha's requirements too well, plus the recent difficulties...

   Iida Ayano solemnly packed up the manuscript, and took a deep look at Wang Hao. If he hadn't seen it with his own eyes, who would have thought that this sixteen or seventeen-year-old sunshine boy would have such great talents.

   Before she knew it, Wang Hao's position in her heart suddenly improved, this time she found a treasure!

  Ps: Thank you Minasan! Because of Mina Sang’s support for the book, this book has a chance to sign, the author is incapable of repaying, so he can only update as much as possible (≧▽≦)

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