Embers Ad Infinitum

During the New Year this month, there are not so many updates, but everyone is very tolerant and laughs. There should be no need to ask for leave in March, and there will be two changes every day.

The content of February is mainly about the end of the Weed City and the opening of the Redstone Collection. I was quite satisfied with what I wrote in the previous part. Looking at your feedback, it seems to be okay.

I think the best thing here is the characterization of An Ruxiang. There is not much plot, and only a few pens and inks are used to outline this person, and there is thickness and arc.

After brazenly complimenting myself, I still have to say that this is the dragon set selected in the dragon set building. Of course, there is a certain difference from the original setting. After all, I read the description and then add a story to it, which is not consistent with this story. The part is deleted.

The story of Yecao City and the expansion of the Baichen branch and Shang Jianyao's mental state are no longer confined to dialogue, and the "brain twitch" begins to affect the turning point of important things.

This also initially plumped their character image.

How do you say the unfolding of the Redstone Collection? I am quite happy to write it myself, because this is one of the key points of the book I have said: different regions on the dusty soil, due to different living conditions, different beliefs, and partial dating of civilizations, produce various seemingly absurd folk customs.

You may not think of it. So far, the most self-satisfying part of this plot is that the reasoning from anthropology and sociology of Hongshiji folklore is the sacred part that faith brings distrust.

The part that is intact, but also the deficiencies:

The first is similar to the writing of travel notes. When new to a region, there is no previous situation, it is difficult to quickly stand up contradictions and tighten the tension of the plot, which results in a slow rhythm. I am also very anxious, but there is no way. I can only unfold the story in the most reasonable and gentle way I think, and strive to make each chapter have its own taste. I hope that when I change to a new region in the future, I can think of a better way to make the story quickly enter the state.

The second is to shape the characters in the group, explain the plot, and analyze and reason. There are a lot of dialogues between the four-person group. When the plot is slow, it seems a bit cumbersome. Moreover, there is no corresponding character plot to take over, so the effect is not So good, this is a problem that needs to be solved urgently in the future.

The third is actually a derivation of the first question, a question of a sense of substitution and expectation. When the tension is not tight, the whole sense of expectation is insufficient, resulting in a heavier travel sense. This is not what I want. The initial idea is to adjust the sense of substitution and see if I can find a new way. After all, it is a subject and style that I have not written before. I have no experience and can only explore it slowly.

Also, let’s say that the wasteland of this book is different from the common wasteland. I put it in the post-wasteland era when the order has been initially established. This will be a bit different from what many friends expected.

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Finally, it’s March. Please ensure that the monthly pass will give me the motivation of the code, and I will update it seriously~ (I can get a lottery at the end of the month if I have a monthly pass, the more the better, hehe)

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