Creating a Sandbox World

At the end of November, this month’s update is still hip (when it doesn’t seem to be up), a total of nearly 200,000 characters have been updated, and the average day is six thousand six...slightly higher than last month.

In terms of the plot, three copies were written, corresponding to the three worlds. The earth line opens the nationwide martial arts. The chapters at the end of the month shake out the setting of the spiritual world. By the way, I have a long-distance look at the traces of the empire and put the prayer candle. This item is reactivated.

When I summarized last month, I said that this month I will start to solve the problem of "break one and throw one". Looking back now, I basically reached this goal. In fact, it can be said that most of the plots in November are Serve for this core purpose.

Through the dungeon, the time of the second, third, and fourth worlds was stopped and no longer jumped. It was like stopping three parallel cars slowly...In order to achieve this goal, the continuity of reading was sacrificed , But only in this way can we make a point in the follow-up plot, stabilize the front, and have the extra energy to open new ones.

And as a price, it is the sense of fragmentation in reading caused by continuously changing maps.

Moreover, due to the short length of the copies and the different styles of each other, this sense of fragmentation is amplified. Among the three copies, the plot structure of the Moon Sea Continent is the most complete, but several mistakes have been made.

The first is the decline in the sense of substitution caused by changing the status of "Shanhai". Initially set the "resurrection" ability, there are two purposes, one is that the follow-up empire line may be needed, and the other is to solve the jerky problem of entering the new world... Try a new method of entry, now looking back, some The gain is not worth the loss.

Second, the plot was not tightened. The sinking effect is not obvious enough in the front, and it seems to be loose, especially the celebration plot gives people the feeling that it deviates from the main line... But in fact, the purpose of writing the celebration plot is to keep the moon clan in the ten chapters. The world is depicted as much as possible.

To stop the world is not just to stop the acceleration, but to write clearly the forms of different worlds, improve the recognition, let people have a relatively certain prototype of the sandbox in their minds, and then rewrite a few characters... To connect with the protagonist, and all of this must be completed within ten chapters, it needs an event to bring... When writing, I refer to the writing of the farming essay, I want to highlight the coolness, but the grafting of different themes seems inappropriate. The problem is The second time you committed it, you must pay attention.

Third, there is still the old problem of changing the map. After entering the Moon Sea Continent, the environment is unfamiliar. The only memory point that Moon Tree has not raised the sense of anticipation has caused the experience to decline.

With reference to the above questions, I tried to modify the copy of the Southern Continent... Originally, Ningli's plot was arranged for the Hongchen experience, and it was a temporary change. The problem was that some settings seemed a little blunt, such as Lin Tuo's psychological teacher. For example, Huaxi went to school... Oh, yes, the story of the meteor shower was originally in this part, but because of the changes, it was put behind.

But the better point of doing this paragraph is that lessons have been learned.

By bringing Huaxi and Hathaway into the dungeon, the sense of fragmentation in changing the map is reduced, and the connection with the earth is strengthened through the update of the "Daily" short film... The existence of the monocular giant also makes the plot stretch... Introspection on the copy of Moon Sea.

In addition, here, I finally decided on the method of cutting into the new scene... After trying four different methods, I found that the most suitable one might be the fifth one: hard cut... (sigh)

In short, introspection still has some effect.

So when we waited for the Tianyuan Continent, Hongchen experienced the dungeon, and the protagonist brought Huaxi into it again, but this dungeon had no enemies, so the plot couldn’t be stretched...I also couldn’t arrange spiritual invasions frequently, which would cause reading fatigue, so after thinking about it, I decided to use "fun" to dilute the slack of the plot.

And based on the interesting plot comes from my personal view of interesting characters, so Tianyuan copy focuses on the characters.

I think it can be interesting to write.

Then there was Yaoyao, and the dog-licking show with Pei Ming... Even though I am not good at writing characters, I still have to try my best to write.

But the data feedback is not good. According to the background data trend, I think the main problem is caused by frequent map changes.

You know, my original plan was to write a longer copy of the experience, about twenty chapters, after all, the best way to solve the problem of changing the map is not to change...

But there is no way. In the end, I chose to cut off half of the plot. In fact, there was a foreshadowing of a sentence before, and the second half of the plot was written "Ask the Dao Conference".

The result was chopped, which resulted in the lack of explosive power at the end of the Tianyuan copy.

Like the Moon Sea dungeon, there was a climax at the end. The Southern Continent dungeon defeated the lord of the spirit world, but the climax of the Tianyuan Continent was originally intended to be at the "Question Conference", so it did not explode.

As for the rest of the plot, because of the lack of space, there is really not much to say. The only idea is to try to avoid this in the future, but I should not use it next month.

All three sandboxes have been successfully stopped, and finally they are not used to run the graph...Next month, that is, December, the tentative plot is that the fifth sandbox will open, and then the role of the earth will gradually increase, the empire Whether people appear or not depends on the specific situation to adjust... In addition, it is necessary to gradually connect several worlds with each other, hoping to successfully pass the year 2020.

That’s it, let’s cook instant noodles, good night everyone.