Comprehensive comics: Take the senior sister and mess into Ruyue Station

After hanging up his pants, Hakuya wrapped his blouse around his waist, not exposing the wet fat ji to Shiwa Kasumigaoka’s sight.

Then Bai Ye turned around and wanted to sit on the bench to rest for a while, when he found a notebook on the bench.

Seeing this, Bai Ye sat down and picked up the notebook:

“Is this Shiyu yours?”

Haku Ye raised his notebook and asked Shiwa Kasumigaokaoka.

Kasumi Hills Shiyu also slowed down at this time, she felt that Bai Ye’s actions just now were intentional.

Obviously, he could tell her directly to hang her clothes, but he told her when he got there, obviously he wanted to see her embarrassed.

“Hmph, inside is the girl’s diary, Hantai Yejun won’t have the habit of peeking at other people’s diaries, right?”

Kasumi Hills Shiyu clasped his hands to his chest, snorted coldly, and said.

“Well, there really is.”

Bai Ye nodded, and then opened the notebook in his hand.

After taking a closer look, Hakuye found that this was not the girl’s diary that Kasumigaoka Shiwa said at all, but the setting of a light novel.

Bai Ye’s brows furrowed slightly, and his gaze quickly swept over the notebook.

Seeing this, Shiyu Kasumigaoka on the side showed a hint of joy on his face, and said after arriving next to Bai Ye:

“How?”

As if he wanted to get Bai Ye’s praise, Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s eyes were full of expectation.

“Well, the writing is very good, and the character is full, but the plot is too bland and poor.”

Bai Ye was still looking at the notebook, and his tone was flat.

Hearing Bai Ye’s evaluation, Kasumigaoka Shiwa also put away the smile on his face.

It was not because Haku Ye said that her book was bad, but because the evaluation that Haku Ye had just said was the same as that made by her editor, Machida Enko.

They all recognize her character and writing, but they all say that the plot is dull and even a little boring, which is suitable for watching when sleeping.

Being able to say the shortcomings and loopholes of his book so coincidentally, Kasumigaoka Shiwa believes that Hakunooka is definitely accomplished in literature, which makes Kasumigaoka Shiwa’s curiosity about Hakuye even higher.

“So, does the Night Lord have any suggestions?”

Kasumigaoka Shiyu asked, his eyes sincere, and his expression was a little expectant.

She believes that Bai Ye can find the loopholes in her book in such a short time, then she will definitely give key suggestions, maybe she can bring her book back to life and avoid the situation of slashing.

However, this is only an expectation, after all, her editor, Machida Sonoko, does not have any good suggestions for her book, and predicts that Shiwa Kasumigaoka will be beheaded in three volumes.

“Well, Shi Yu, your writing is very good, but the plot is bland, people don’t like to watch this kind of smooth love, Lang love concubine, then it’s better to get married directly, what kind of love?”

“What people want to see is the interweaving of feelings, the entanglement of choices, the choice between left and right.”

“And there is no choice at all in the plot of this book, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is close from beginning to end, so you can consider introducing a third party to trigger the plot to make the plot ups and downs and heart-wrenching.”

What Bai Ye said, Kasumigaoka Shiyu silently remembered in his heart.

But when she heard Bai Ye say that she wanted to add a third party to the book, her heart trembled, and her brows wrinkled slightly.

Shiwa Kasumigaoka wrote herself in this book, and in her heart she was reluctant to write that a third party intervened in this relationship.

Bai Ye glanced at Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, and saw that the other side was embarrassed, so he continued to speak:

“This is just a suggestion, Shiyu, you can listen to it as you wish.”

“Well, I understand.”

Hearing Bai Ye’s words, Kasumigaoka Shiwa nodded.

After returning the notebook to Kasumigaoka Shiyu, Bai Ye looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu, saw that the other party looked at the notebook in his hand, and did not speak, so he took the initiative to speak:

“In other words, I made suggestions, and there is no reward?”

“What reward does the Night Lord want?”

Hearing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu’s eyes narrowed and looked up at the white night.

“I want to think…”

Bai Ye touched his chin, he said that he wanted to reward only so that Shiyu Kasumigaoka didn’t bother with changing the character, this kind of thing could not be forced in the first place, if he insisted on adding the character and modifying the plot, it would become a mess.

Bai Ye glanced Kasumi Hills Shiyu up and down, and for a while he didn’t know what reward to let Kasumi Hills Shiyu give him.

Or, bite? No, no, the words spoken will definitely be treated as perverted!

Or, let Shiwa Kasumigaoka kneel in front of him and shout himself …. No, no, it’s off-track.

Just when Bai Ye was thinking about what reward to let Kasumigaoka Shiyu give him, Kasumigaoka Shiyu rolled his eyes, and a smile appeared at the corner of his mouth.

“Night-kun~”

Shiwa Kasumigaoka whispered Bai Ye’s name, and Bai Ye turned his head when he heard the sound, and just when he was about to ask Shiha Kasumigaoka what was going on, Shiwa Kasumigaoka slammed towards him.

“Hmm!”

For a long time, Kasumigaoka Shiwa got up and looked at the white night with a red face:

“This is the reward of the Night Lord~”

Bai Ye looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu stunned, he didn’t expect Kasumigaoka Shiyu to take such an initiative.

Bai Ye recalled that feeling, it seemed, it felt good.

And Kasumigaoka Shiyu looked at Bai Ye with a smile, seeing that Bai Ye was slow to speak, she tilted her head and stretched out a finger to point at Bai Ye’s lips:

“Thank you Yejun, for helping a lot.”

Hearing Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s words, Bai Ye only felt his heart tremble.

“Shiyu…”

Bai Ye opened his mouth slightly, and just as he wanted to speak, he saw Shiyu Kasumigaoka looking up at the sky.

“Oh, Ye-kun, I like you!”

Inexplicably, Kasumi Hills Shiyu suddenly spoke.

Bai Ye looked at the side face of Kasumigaoka Shiyu, stunned, and then also showed a smile:

“I also like Shiyu.”

Bai Ye doesn’t know what his feelings are for Kasumigaoka Shiyu, but whenever he is with Kasumigaoka Shiyu, he always feels very relaxed, maybe this is the so-called liking.

“Yejun is really happy that he likes me!”

Kasumigaoka Shiyu turned his head to look at Bai Ye and smiled.

With a smile, this scene was frozen in Bai Ye’s eyes.

……

I beg your pardon, chapter XXXV

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