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"Eh? Is this written by Xiaomeng?" Su Jiameng was wandering very hard, and Lucy's slightly curious words came in her ear, causing her to turn her head and look at the other person, only to see a trace of inquiry on Lucy's face. "what type is it?"

... Su Jiameng twitched her mouth imperceptibly. She didn't expect that the "diary" she wrote could be regarded as true. Before Su Jiameng could deny it, Lucy said again, "It doesn't look like it, but it looks like a small outline... Xiaomeng?"

Su Jiameng lowered her eyes and said softly, "No, it's just a small piece of writing to pass the time idle and boring."

"That's a shame..." Lucy put Su Jiameng's shoulders from behind, and then stretched her neck to look at the virtual screen in front of her, "Although it is very simple, I always feel that if this story is written, It should be great!"

Su Jiameng rolled her eyes secretly and smiled bitterly. If this story is really written, it is estimated that I will become the most sick author in history, right? In this story, no matter how much the role is, no matter what the charm, as long as a character who can show his face, he will always die in the end. Ha ha... Even in the end, the protagonist in this story will die with hatred.

If this is really written, it is estimated that 90% of the certainty will be "the most eunuch, the most failed, and the most dramatic" by readers, right? Of course... these complaints are also based on someone reading this story...

"I am not interested, nor do I have this time." Su Jiameng's gaze fell over the text on the screen and said in a slightly vague tone, "After all, it is someone else’s story. real thinking……"

"Xiaomeng's words are really puzzling...You're just a sixteen-year-old girl mother, don't put on the vicissitudes of sixty-year-old face, okay?" Lucy pulled Su Jiameng's cheek dissatisfiedly and pulled her. The slightly thin cheeks made two blushes.

Su Jiameng helplessly, Lucy mumbled again, "Isn’t it all imaginary? Who would write about your own experience? But if you don’t want to write, it’s okay. After all, it’s all about following your own inner thoughts and making yourself happy. the most important."

Being happy is the most important thing? Su Jiameng heard that Lucy was so obviously partial. Most of the depression in my heart dissipated, and he said with a chuckle, "Of course I know this... Actually it seems to be good. I can tell the story in my mind, and I can share it with many strangers of all kinds and unknowns. I don’t know who the author is and what kind of past..."

"Um... Listening to what Xiaomeng said, you seem to have this intention to write?" Lucy opened her eyes in surprise, and then Mimi smiled, "If this is the case. Xiaomeng would like to show me the manuscript. , As a bookworm with a book age of more than ten years, maybe I can give you very good advice... Xiaomeng, do you think this is good?"

The corners of Su Jiameng's eyes seemed to twitch uncontrollably. Can she say that she has no idea about it? but……

Think about it. In fact, it seems pretty good to write your own previous stories as if? Su Jiameng thinks very far. Although it is very ordinary, it has the charm and influence accumulated by the sun and the moon. If he mixes some news of the Zerg and Mind into it, he may be able to knock those who accidentally see it. A ringing bell?

Even if it doesn't play this role, I can look at these words to comfort myself. At least use words to prove that your second life is real, not Zhuang Zhou Mengdie or Die Meng Zhuang Zhou? After thinking about it, she nodded and said, "I have this plan."

God knows that after graduating from the first life, Su Jiameng has not written a composition with more than 800 words. The second generation often wrote military reports, but the content format has a certain track to follow. It’s not troublesome to write... to write? Can anyone tell her how to write?

Su Jiameng responded vaguely to Lucy's words, while depressed thinking about how to write. For a literary waste who hasn't written an essay for a long time, it is challenging to write a magic horse! It's hard to do it by yourself.

But after all, she was an open-minded person, and she didn't struggle with such a small problem for long, and she was relieved soon. In her opinion. Writing should be similar to telling a story, she only needs to write what she wants.

"Okay, it's settled, I will see the deposited manuscripts in advance in the future!" Lucy swept around, and Su Jiameng didn't even have the strength to sigh. She only answered the other party's first question. Why did Lucy "solve" all subsequent questions?

It’s also thanks to Lucy being so excited about things that don’t have a single stroke... But since she decided to really start to get involved in a field she hadn’t touched before, Su Jiameng would not do unprepared things. One more task.

Time flies quickly, Su Jiameng sinks to sort out his second life, and lists all the things he knows or just heard in a time table, just telling his own story, as long as they are in To a certain extent, it is good to say it "truthfully", so there is no need to prepare the so-called outline and detailed outline...

Because it was telling the story of "self", Su Jiameng decided to describe it in the first person. Although she hasn't seen much, she also knows that first-person pronouns are unpopular. Because it is easy to write as self-good yy╮(╯▽╰)╭

For example, it is the first-person palace fighting drama. In order to show that she is beautiful, the heroine can fascinate all the men. Naturally, the description of appearance, eyes, movements, psychological changes and clothing is indispensable, but the writing is too beautiful, there is always a Kind of slightly disgusting narcissism.

Not to mention this, there is another fatal flaw in the first person, that is, the psychological description of others cannot be very accurate.

But in the writing, psychological activity is a very important factor. As the protagonist of the first-person field of vision, how can you "have the ability to peek into the psychological activities of others" and write that others want to be magical at this moment? Super easy to fine-tune...

Although the first person has such shortcomings, Su Jiameng decided to write just to vent and confide in her feelings and past. She does not have the consciousness to worry about what readers think. And because it’s her own story, Su Jiameng always rushes to use the third person to describe other people’s psychological activities slightly, watching the super-level twist...

The beginning of the chapter is naturally written from the beginning of "I". The initial panic and the later fear gradually transition to helplessness to accept reality, confusion and panic about the future...

The first chapter basically writes about the psychological changes of "oneself", from the initial resistance to unfamiliar environment and characters, to the gradual acceptance at the end, and then at the end of the chapter, through the dialogue of "parents", the figure of the Zerg and the background of this era are drawn out... …

"Tsk tusk tusk, is Xiaomeng's typing fast..." Lucy teased her with fun, Su Jiameng could still show a magical expression besides rolling her eyes? If her hand speed is not fast, how to drive the mech? This is a little redundant, Lucy Maiden, "However, Xiaomeng really decided to write in the first person? In terms of the identity of a reader, probably the proportion of abandoned articles will be very large..."

"That's great..." Su Jiameng said lightly, sorting out the first chapter a bit, and then saving it, "If I choose the third person, I always feel something is wrong... I just need to follow my own wishes. "

"That's true!" Lucy replied with a right fist and a left palm. "But doesn't Xiao Meng think the first chapter is very procrastinating?"

"It's okay..." Su Jiameng thought about it carefully. The scene of her first crossing is vivid, and she was in this mood at the time. The parents thought their newly-born daughter had a physical problem and was sent to the hospital for a long time. The two took turns to guard her...

In fact, Su Jiameng felt guilty in her heart at the time. She was not sure whether she was reincarnated and forgot to drink Mengpo Tang and forgot her memory, or if she had occupied this body and killed her parents’ biological children...because of this idea, she had always Some trembling.

She can't imagine how this pair of parents who love their children will behave after her secrets are exposed... Actually, it is very likely to be angry or even call her a monster, right? After all, their real children shouldn't have so many memories...

Living tremblingly, while eager for the care and love of her parents, this is something that Su Jiameng of the first life never enjoyed... This situation continued until her father died in battle, and when someone was gone, she wanted to regret it. It's too late.

Adults think that a three-year-old child will not have too many memories and complicated feelings, but Su Jiameng is not an ordinary child, she deeply remembers how her father died. His father was lost at the age of three, his mother was lost at the age of six, and the only remaining grandparents at the age of nine died one after another...

The death of her father taught Su Jiameng to truly understand this cruel and dangerous world. The death of her mother inspired her to use her hands to fight for peace in her heart, protect everything she wants to protect, and trust her happiness and relatives on others, like Waiting for the rescue of the Alliance fighters like a waste, it is really embarrassing, stupid and pitiful.

The death of her grandparents was probably the biggest blow to her. It also let her completely fade from the influence of the first Su Jiameng, making her deeply remember that she was just Su Jiameng, the descendant of the four Alliance warriors in the family!

She grew up with blood. The content is too bloody. There are Zerg, enemies, friends, family, comrades... Others are reborn from the ashes, but she and the survivors of that era are wading all the way with blood. Coming, the price of growth is too great, and no one can bear it. Even if it collapses, he can only hold on with his teeth...

"This is the story I want to write. Just write what I think is enough..." So there is no need to change the original intention to cater to other people's tastes, just follow the original heart. Lucy could not say anything against Su Jiameng's insistence.

"Uh...so, what is the main line of Xiaomeng's book? What is it about?"

"A hard-working female protagonist goes through a series of hard-working things, all the people around her die, and then she kills herself..."

Lucy: "..."

ps:

In fact, if Xiaomeng’s things are really written, it is estimated that it will attract a lot of scolding...too bad...R

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