Be a Cartoonist In the Fairy World

Compared to Cai Ziyuan, Du Ziyuan is obviously more strict.

"The modus operandi is a bit simple, but considering the 24 hours of creative time, it is not bad to be able to come up with such a technique, but..." Du Ziyuan turned a pen in his hand and said, "We didn't have this time. Set a theme for you. You can draw whatever you want. In other words, even the creativity you have a long time ago can be used. It depends on how you integrate it within 24 hours. This comic reveals a little bit. It’s just that your past accumulation seems to be somewhat lacking."

"The rhythm is the same as Director Cai said. It is very good. The plot points are quite tight. It is an excellent comic. However, the last reversal is a bit reluctant to be honest. I think it would be better if you add some foreshadowings in the front. Finally, in terms of painting...To be honest, as a manga artist who is halfway through, this is pretty good, but if you compare with other players, this point of yours will become the biggest disadvantage. , I hope you can understand."

After listening, Si Xingwei's expression was a bit heavy. After all, Du Ziyuan was talking about it. His shortcomings were not hidden in front of Du Ziyuan, and he could see it at a glance. If it is normal, he would be very happy to be so directed, but now it is a game, Du Ziyuan's comments still have a great influence on his score.

In the final scoring session, Si Xingwei's audience score was 615 points, and his instructor scored 100 points, with a total score of 715.

Among the instructors, Cai Ziyuan gave 100 points, but Du Ziyuan didn't.

Master Cai Ziyuan looked at Du Ziyuan: "I think it's okay."

Du Ziyuan shook his head: "I don't think it will work."

Hearing his answer like this, Cai Zishi had no choice but to shrug his shoulders towards the camera: "Teacher Shanfeng is really strict."

Next, it was the Yan Lingtian team's turn to play. And their debut character is actually the trump card-Xia An!

No one thought that she would be the first one to come out, and how she looked at her would also be the last big axis! ?

Songzi looked at Yan Lingtian suspiciously: "What tricks are you playing?"

Yan Lingtian smiled and said: "That was what she requested. She said that anyway, the scores are added up. There is no priority in her work, and the scores will not change much."

"So confident?" Matsuko opened her mouth and didn't say much. Du Ziyuan's apprentice is indeed qualified to say this.

"Then, let us enjoy Xia An's work now."

Following Tang Junhao's announcement, a beautiful cover appeared on the big screen. The overall picture is brighter, with a hundred-layered Buddha floating in the painting. A man and a woman in front of the Buddha are standing with their backs in black and white battle robes. The swords in their hands are staggered into an "X".

Sword Art Online!

This is the name of Xia An's work.

"Oh?" Du Ziyuan was slightly surprised. Although I mentioned to the students that I asked them to take out the five works in this competition, I didn't expect Xia An to move so fast.

Xia An drew a brand new version of "Sword Art Online" by Sagong Lingling. Although the basic settings are the same, many plots have changed.

Du Ziyuan picked up his Lingguangyu and flipped through it, and found that she only took out one sentence. After all, there is only one day. Even if she and the 4 students under her rush to work, it is quite good to be able to draw 1 story and 30 pages and still guarantee the quality. Si Xingwei, who appeared earlier, painted worse than her and only took out 18 pages.

The audience and the tutors began to read the work quietly.

The story takes place in an overhead parallel world, which is not much different from Huntianxing, except that the first holographic online game has changed from "Glory" to "Sword Art Online".

Unlike "Glory" produced by Xianjie, "Sword Art Online" is made entirely by mortals, so the scale is much smaller.

On the first day of the public beta, about 300,000 logged-in players.

However, no one thought that the genius who developed this game was also a lunatic. He locked everyone's consciousness in the game and asked players to guide this game, otherwise he would never be offline. And if you die in the game, the real player will also die. Even in reality, the game helmet is forcibly removed.

300,000 people were locked up in "Sword Art Online".

The original slogan "If you are a man, you can go up to a hundred floors."

And it was against this background that, as the actor who had participated in the closed beta, Kirito resolutely embarked on the road to conquer the 100th floor.

With his rich experience, he quickly upgraded and walked in front of all players.

He has better equipment, stronger skills, and occupies more easter eggs, but the more powerful he becomes, the more empty he feels in his heart.

Humans can't completely survive alone from society, so he concealed his edge, put on a humble fashion, and tried to join the team of other players.

Kirito chose the "blood alliance" in the first echelon of players. To join the blood alliance, you must participate in the entry assessment.

He was assigned to a team of 5 people, and a girl with flax hair on the same team caught his attention because the two had a relationship before.

At that time, she was still a novice, and she was met by Kirito by chance, so she kindly taught her some tricks. But I didn't expect that by the time of goodbye, she was already strong enough to be eligible to join the strongest player team.

The goal of the team is an elite monster, and a combined strategy of 5 masters should be more than enough. However, Kirito discovered that something was wrong, and he quietly removed some hidden dangers in the dark, avoiding the situation of elite monsters calling their parents. Otherwise, what they will face is not just an elite monster, but two big bosses.

In the team ~www.readwn.com~ only the flax-haired girl was vaguely aware of this, and the other teammates thought that he was not working hard to go to other places to be lazy.

This also made Kirito successfully entered the blood alliance, but the interpersonal relationship was not very good, and the only one willing to associate with him was the girl.

He also finally learned her name, Asuna, a very strange name, but because it was a screen name, there was nothing wrong with it.

Kirito was already satisfied with the ability to make a friend, and his feelings for Asuna were gradually changing.

Until that time, the blood alliance was ready to attack the defensive lord.

The comic came to an abrupt end. The space is limited to play, and it's already in a hurry to fit so much content in 30 pages, and the guarding BOSS naturally has no points.

"It's really passed down in the same vein." Cai Zishi looked at Du Ziyuan, his desire and dissatisfaction in his eyes were self-evident.

I blame you for teaching what is not good enough to teach my apprentice out of context! Wait for the knife!