Ask Immortal Way

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2021-05-24 Author: Yu Da Bluestone

Summary of Volume One

There was a lot to say, but suddenly I felt too hypocritical.

Write these words out and put them here. Readers will judge whether they are good or bad. I will just say three things briefly.

First, it is said that this book abuses the owner.

I don't agree much, but the process has twists and turns, but if you sort out every plot, you can find that the protagonist is capable of overcoming all obstacles and getting what he wants.

Everything you want is what you want in the novel.

This situation may be due to my narrative style.

I now find that the tendency of the author's description can really guide the reader's emotions, but I am still very ignorant, and I can't sort out 123. Let's learn and improve slowly.

The second is the problem of the protagonist's pill formation.

What I am most proud of is that the plot trend is basically not out of the outline, and I can barely make the transition.

Because of this, the first volume accidentally wrote six hundred chapters.

When I first designed the outline, I had no experience and had no idea about the number of words corresponding to the plot. The idea was to bury all the lines that I want to write in the plot, and construct the connections between the lines, so that each plot can find the introduction. .

Now think about it, some places can be streamlined.

Thirdly, it is the only plot that did not follow the outline. It is also the original intention for me to write this summary. It is the plot where Qin Sang was judged to have no spiritual roots in the Great Sui and refused to lead to the Han family.

The original outline was: The fat man of the Han family was bought by the Dongyang princess with a good spiritual material, so that he would cut off Qin Sang Nianxiang and stay in Da Sui.

I hesitated when I moved forward to unlock the truth.

Because there is a saying in Xiu Xianwen: To cut a human path is like killing a parent.

Regardless of whether the princess is acting for profit or for affection, she seems to be hard to forgive for doing so.

There is an advantage of writing this way, which is that it can well take over the princess's personal design, the ruthless high-ranking person, and the unscrupulous means to achieve the goal.

But apart from being able to create a distinctive character, how good is it for the overall plot and the protagonist?

It seems useless except to make the protagonist and the reader feel entangled.

For this small episode, I couldn't sleep every day, and after thinking about it for several days, I decided to change it, and also cut off the small plots that I came into contact with Brother Han later.

Some friends should feel this period of anticlimactic.

Until now, I don't know if this choice is good or bad.

It's done.

If there is an opportunity for revision in the future, let's talk about it.

After the summary, the journey continues!

(End of this chapter)

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2021-05-24 Author: Yu Da Bluestone

Summary of Volume One

There was a lot to say, but suddenly I felt too hypocritical.

Write these words out and put them here. Readers will judge whether they are good or bad. I will just say three things briefly.

First, it is said that this book abuses the owner.

I don't agree much, but the process has twists and turns, but if you sort out every plot, you can find that the protagonist is capable of overcoming all obstacles and getting what he wants.

Everything you want is what you want in the novel.

This situation may be due to my narrative style.

I now find that the author’s description of the tendency can really guide the reader’s emotions, but I am still very ignorant, and I can’t sort out 123~www.readwn.com~ slowly learn and improve.

The second is the problem of the protagonist's pill formation.

What I am most proud of is that the plot trend is basically not out of the outline, and I can barely make the transition.

Because of this, the first volume accidentally wrote six hundred chapters.

When I first designed the outline, I had no experience and had no idea about the number of words corresponding to the plot. The idea was to bury all the lines that I want to write in the plot, and construct the connections between the lines, so that each plot can find the introduction. .

Now think about it, some places can be streamlined.

Thirdly, it is the only plot that did not follow the outline. It is also the original intention for me to write this summary. It is the plot where Qin Sang was judged to have no spiritual roots in the Great Sui and refused to lead to the Han family.

The original outline was: The fat man of the Han family was bought by the Dongyang princess with a good spiritual material, so that he would cut off Qin Sang Nianxiang and stay in Da Sui.

I hesitated when I moved forward to unlock the truth.

Because there is a saying in Xiu Xianwen: To cut a human path is like killing a parent.

Regardless of whether the princess is acting for profit or love, she seems to be hard to forgive for doing so.

There is one advantage of writing this way. It is able to take over the princess’s personal design, the ruthless high-ranking ones, and the unscrupulous in order to achieve their goals.

But in addition to being able to create a distinctive character, how good is it for the overall plot and the protagonist?

Apart from making the protagonist and the reader entangled, it seems useless.

For this small episode, I couldn't sleep every day, and after thinking about it for several days, I decided to change it. Later, I also cut off the small plots that I came into contact with Brother Han.

Some friends should feel this period of anticlimactic.

Until now, I don't know if this choice is good or bad.

It's done.

If there is an opportunity for revision in the future, let's talk about it.

After the summary, the journey continues!

(End of this chapter)