Chapter 509

Mo Yu didn't deliberately hide his thoughts, he pulled Mo Mo to tell his thoughts.

He wrinkled his face and said, "I haven't seen Master Kong for a long time. I miss him. I still want to study medicine with him. Master Kong is a bit strict, but he treats me really well. "

Having said that, Mo Mo also felt that she missed her brother Hu very much.

Her brother tiger is super obedient, I haven't seen her brother tiger for a long time.

She also misses her cousins.

"Oh, I also don't think it's good to come to Yuezhou Mansion. I miss my brother Hu very much. I also miss my cousin and cousins. I haven't played with them for a long time!"

Although Yuezhou Prefecture is very prosperous, they are used to living in Linmo County.

The friends who played well with them are also in Linmo County, and they are still not used to coming to Yuezhou Mansion suddenly.

Mo Yu also wanted to talk about his unhappiness, but found that Mo Mo was muttering a little, looking very unhappy.

Mo Yu began to think of ways to enlighten Mo Mo.

"Hey, we all really wanted to come to Yuezhou Mansion before, we can go to the bookstore to submit manuscripts! What about the stories you wrote? I don't know if there is any news about the previous submissions?"

As soon as Mo Mo and Mo Yu got together, they rushed to the bookstore to see how Mo Mo's manuscript was going.

Then think about whether they should contribute again.

The two came to the bookstore in a hurry, and the manager of the bookstore received Mo Mo and the others.

The manager of the bookstore had already read the manuscript that Mo Mo and the others had entrusted someone to send earlier.

The stories in these manuscripts are indeed wonderful, but there are also many shortcomings.

These manuscripts were all written by Mo Mo himself. Mo Mo's language organization ability is not that strong. The story is very good, but some sentences are not so smooth, and some places are a little bit confusing. There are many sentences and typos. There are also many mistakes.

These stories of Mo Mo are at the critical line that can be collected or not.

The manager of the bookstore has been thinking about whether to accept Mo Mo's stories.

After accepting Mo Mo's stories, who will revise them and how to distribute the expenses are difficult problems.

Today, Mo Mo and Mo Yu came over, and saw that the person who wrote the story was actually a doll, and the manager of the bookstore became a little interested.

He stroked his goatee, and said kindly, "Little boy, are you really the ones who wrote these stories? But,,,, that's right,,, some sentences are not very fluent, I guess it was indeed written by you. "

When I think of the problem that some of the words spoken by the steward are not fluent.

Mo Mo blushed a little, "I heard these stories from Master Jin, and I wrote them myself, so the writing in some places is indeed not good enough."

"Uncle, I'll go back and ask my dad and grandpa to help me straighten out these places and show them to you, do you think it's okay?"

"My father and my grandfather are both scholars! There are some mistakes in my writing, and they can help me correct them."

The manager of the bookstore was still hesitating whether to accept these manuscripts from Mo Mo.

Many of the manuscripts he received were written by some students, none of whom had any fame.

Thinking that Mo Mo's grandfather and father are both scholars, if they are willing to help Mo Mo correct these manuscripts, then some minor problems in Mo Mo's manuscripts can be corrected.

The most important thing is that Mo Mo's stories are really novel, and if they are put on sale, they will definitely fetch a good price.

The manager of the bookstore rubbed his hands excitedly, "Miss Mo is really talented! We have accepted your manuscript! I have to ask you to take it to your adults to help revise it. It will be even better if it is revised!"

Mo Mo thanked the shopkeeper of the bookstore sweetly, and she also took over the manuscripts she had written before.

After collecting these manuscripts, Mo Mo and Mo Yu went home excitedly.

Mo Mo never thought that this matter would go so smoothly.

She also began to realize her own shortcomings. Speaking of these stories, they were all good stories, but because she didn't learn enough, the stories she wrote were rough.

Mo Mo decided to study harder in the future and not to ask for leave every now and then.

(End of this chapter)

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