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Chapter 7
The title of the post is "Surprised to discover a masterpiece of poetry, and the classics can be handed down from generation to generation." Click on it and see that it is the poem I made in class yesterday.There are countless posts under it, and the number of hits is already crazy, including comments from famous Internet celebrities and real people.

"Today, when I was browsing the posts on the Internet by chance, I saw a post by chance. The title of the post was very arrogant. I clicked on the post with contempt, and there was a poem on it. After I read it casually, I was very Solemnly read it over and over again, and in the end I really couldn’t violate my own heart. I copied it down with a pilgrimage, and realized it carefully. I admire the mysterious author very much, and I wish I could be a lackey. The following is I have written some of my humble opinions on poetry, and I have written my feelings, please refer to and correct me.”

"The poem is written about the sorrows of the journey, and the concept is ingenious. The first sentence "moving the boat and mooring the mist" points to the title, and writes that the boat is moored by the small sandbar in the river to prepare for accommodation. The second sentence "the sun sets and the guests worry about the new" describes the mood of the poet at this moment The word "new" makes people feel that the poet originally had endless old worries, but today he parked here and gave birth to more new worries. Then the author described to us a vivid scenery of sunset by the river: the vast wilderness , the sky hangs low, as if to cover everything; in the clear river, there is only a bright moon, rippling beside the boat. In this vast and long river, only the bright moon comes to accompany the lonely Youzi. The bright moon gives him comfort , It also added more new worries to him. When I was reading, I felt as if I had appeared on the bank of the river, in the wilderness, surrounded by a vast expanse, accompanied only by the bright moon, and my chest was filled with melancholy, and I was very intoxicated."

This is the exclamation of Cui Ming, a well-known Internet celebrity. Once this post was published, it made people even more frantic discussions.I'm going to turn into a running dog, so hurry up and watch.

And the appearance of another heavyweight figure pushed the post to a peak.The same is an exclamation.

"Moving the boat and mooring the Yanzhu, the sun is setting and the guests are worried about the new. The wild sky is low and the trees are low, and the river is clear and the moon is close to people. This poem expresses the nostalgia of the guests by depicting the river scenery. The poet naturally absorbs it and is suitable for expressing the feeling of loneliness and wandering on the journey. The foreground objects in front of my eyes are written lightly in ink using the method of line drawing, but it conveys my true feelings."

"This poem reveals the special connection of objective things through the detailed and vivid description of the scenery, and at the same time expresses his own unique feelings. The poet first described the misty riverside Zhouzhu, and pointed out the time and place of the night in Jiande River. Then, More specifically describe the scenery of the river and sky seen on the Yanzhu, where the boat is moored. First write the distant view, and then write the close-up, with clear layers. The field is open and the field of vision is wide, so that it creates the illusion that the distant sky is lower than the nearby trees. Because the river is clear, the shadow of the moon floats in the river, and the people on the boat seem to be closer to the people. This kind of scenery can only be felt and cannot be described in words. , the poet described it meticulously and realistically in only ten characters. Without keen observation and expressive power of line drawing, it is impossible to express the relationship between sky and trees, moon and people caused by the wilderness and Jiang Qing. Changes in relationships are so accurately and vividly depicted.”

"From the perspective of borrowing scenery to express emotions, the poet does not just blend his feelings into the scenery in general, but reveals the nostalgia he wants to express through the scenery layer by layer and layer by layer. When travelers encounter autumn, they are most likely to be touched by sorrow. , This is the first layer; this first layer of poets did not express positively, but revealed it from "Ye Kuang" and "Jiang Qing". Mooring a boat in Jiangzhu in the twilight is the second Layer. The wilderness creates a feeling of far away, making travelers feel that the hometown is thousands of miles away, and the return journey is far away; and because of the wildness and silence, the traveler feels lonely and desolate on the journey. This is the third layer. Because the river is clear, it is better The bright moon is close to people, and seeing the bright moon makes me miss my hometown even more. This is the fourth layer. The poet describes the scenery from far to near, but conveys his own sorrow from light to strong, from shallow to deep. From the perspective of composition structure, To write quatrains well, they must be well-concluded at the end of the sentence, creating a complete artistic conception, and cannot make people feel that there is no beginning and no end after reading. Three sentences. But this first chapter is very special. It ends with three and four sentences in opposition, but puts the turning point at the last three characters of the second sentence. The poet cleverly used the three characters "Ke worry about new" to point out the topic, as if The eyes of the poem are highlighted like the finishing touch, and the three or four sentences are just the three characters set off by the scenery. In this way, when it comes to the three or four sentences of the antithesis, the purpose of the poem is clearly and completely expressed."

"The author's superb artistic structure. The use of words and his heart are really a role model for my generation. I hope that when there is communication, Zhou Zeguang is very honored."

This is the comment of Mr. Zhou Zeguang, a master of the Shenzhou Empire generation, no, it is an analysis.Zhou Zeguang, the treasure of the Chinese poetry world, does not explain it.

After reading some reviews, they were all positive.And so much respect.

Lin Feng couldn't help sighing: "A classic is a classic. No matter in that time and space, no matter how it is spread, it can't stop its brilliance. But there are really many masters in this world, and the comments in this article are definitely not inferior to those on Earth. Check out everyone’s comments. Thank you, the person who posted this post didn’t reveal me, but he should know me, who could it be?”

Lin Feng shook his head, "Forget it, let's change Doupo first."

Lin Feng didn't look at the background data first, but directly opened the dw text software to start coding.That concentrated demeanor is so charming, if a girl sees it at this time, she should fall in love with him.A man who is attentive is the most attractive.

Finally, with the last few taps, the two chapters were completed.The speed is much faster than yesterday.After logging into Chuangdian's background and uploading the chapters, Lin Feng looked at the overall data. The total clicks were 20, members clicked 9, recommended votes were 1, and favorites were also 1. The data is dismal.Lin Feng was not emotional about this, he was very calm.

It's normal for newcomers and new books to have poor grades, not to mention the entire online literature circle, even if they are creating points, there are so many novels. An ordinary newcomer wants to attract the attention of readers just after publishing a chapter or two, unless one chapter and one [-]D, and then keep updating.

Without daily accumulation, little by little efforts, how can there be success and fame.No one can achieve it overnight, only by persevering hard, and using only one percent of one's talent to one hundred percent is success, will succeed, is success.

Therefore, Lin Feng just uploaded silently. He didn't post an advertisement on the forum, nor did he go to the group for sponsorship. He was waiting, waiting for the website editor to review and sign the contract.Then it is time to actually advertise, and it is still a big advertisement.Lin Feng was very confident.

After finishing uploading the chapters, Lin Feng checked the time and went to sleep when it was getting late.The day after tomorrow is Saturday, so go to bed later and save more manuscripts.

As for the composition about youth assigned by the teacher, one of the trivial matters has long since ended.

When I woke up, the rising sun shone through the curtains on the bed and the floor, covering everything with a veil of light, which was very beautiful.

According to the habit, after completing many tasks including eating, Lin Feng started the day's itinerary.

class, get out of class.Teachers come and go, textbooks are changed, and time travel seems to speed up.

In the Chinese class, Zhang Yong looked through Lin Feng's composition, but the result was very disappointing.Because the composition is very plain, although it is not bad, it is still far from the classics, which disappointed Zhang Yongda who was looking forward to it.Because of this, Lin Feng had a very peaceful day, although because of the poem, he became popular and attracted the attention of his classmates.However, students, even high school students, don't understand the meaning of the poem, which means that there is a man who stands shoulder to shoulder in modern times, and ancient poetry is not in decline after all.So the turmoil caused is not very big, of course it refers to this school and this class.So Lin Feng enjoyed the cleanliness very much.

In addition, Teacher Zhang Yong also quietly apologized to him. He was the one who posted the post, but he has already told everyone not to disclose Lin Feng's news about the poem.Lin Feng felt more at ease, he could live a peaceful life for a while, since he chose this path, he still had to pay.As for Zhang Yong's invitation to discuss, Lin Feng just declined with euphemistic language.I am very busy.

However, there is still one who has not escaped, so the tranquility of this day is still somewhat flawed.

　Ps: Although it was very tiring, it was done.There is no classmate's birthday today, so I can work.The one chapter owed yesterday will be sent together with two chapters tomorrow.

　　Subsequent developments will not disappoint everyone.Ask for tickets, ask for favorites.Thank you all.

　　
　
(End of this chapter)