The group pet sister is a koi

Chapter 339 Story Evaluation
Shen Aiai looked at Shen Zhe again, wanting to see his opinion.

Shen Zhe didn't pay attention to the plot of the story, but just glanced at it. Seeing Shen Aiai's expectant eyes looking at him, she said something embarrassed.

"Hey, actually, I don't know if the writing is good or not. I usually don't like reading storybooks."

What he said was the absolute truth. He didn't like to read these complicated plots on weekdays. Every time he saw the densely packed text, he felt a severe headache.

Obviously, his words made Shen Ai Ai a little disappointed.

Shen Jiaxin was immersed in the enthusiasm, and she was full of praise: "Let's act in the story written by Ai Ai, and we will definitely win No.1 when the time comes, and the bicycle and bonus will be ours."

"Jiaxin, thank you."

Shen Aai obviously lost the joy she had just now, her expression was slightly disappointed, and her eyes even revealed a trace of sadness.

The reason why Lin Chuer didn't say anything was not because Shen Jiaxin's story was not good, but because this kind of story was too old-fashioned for her. She had read too much before, but now she felt a little unimpressed.

Of course, her ideas cannot be used as a reference, after all, this era is not at the same creative level as her era.

She suggested: "Student Ai Ai, if you are interested in literature, I think you can study more in this area. Maybe your works can be published in major newspapers and magazines in the future?"

There are many people who read newspapers and magazines in this era, especially the cover characters, many people are vying to be on the cover.

If Shen Aiai had done more literary creations these years, she might become a great writer by then.

There are so many novelists who write about love, it's not like Shen Aiai has no chance.

"Chu'er, what do you think of my writing? Can the story be read? Or is it so-so?" Shen Aiai asked cautiously, for fear that her question would increase the pressure on Lin Chuer to answer.

As a friend, of course she hoped that Lin Chuer would tell the truth, but she was afraid that she would be too glassy to accept it.

Lin Chuer was not polite to her, and said directly: "The writing level looks good, it is small and fresh, but it lacks contradictions. It seems that the plot of the story is too plain, and there is nothing that can arouse everyone's emotions."

"I agree with Chu Er's statement. The story is written very smoothly, very small and fresh, but it lacks enough impactful plot. Without this kind of plot, it will make people feel very boring, and even doze off." Shen Zhiyun He didn't give Shen Aiai any face, and continued following Lin Chuer's words.

Since Shen Aai wants to develop in this area, then he should be more outspoken.

Doing this is the way to improve Shen Aiai.

After listening to Lin Chuer and Shen Zhiyun's words, Shen Aiai looked down at a story she had written, and had to admit that the problems pointed out by Shen Zhiyun and Lin Chuer were very incisive, and it was indeed something that was missing in the story she wrote.

The stories she writes are very smooth, but the smooth and flowing story plots lack the passion worth watching.

She took a deep breath and encouraged herself: "Criticism is the only way to make progress. I will revise it at night, and then you will help me to see if there are any deficiencies. I will try to write and act the story well. Take the first place."

"Student Ai Ai, come on, I support you mentally, hehe." Shen Zhe put his hands on Shen Aai's shoulders, showing a bright smile, such a smile just gave Shen Aai great encouragement.

Shen Aiai's originally lost mood was immediately relieved.

(End of this chapter)