GodfallTwo-dimensional

Chapter 60 The [-] Centimeters Per Second Manga

In ancient times, Liu Xiahui was not in a mess, and Wang Hao thought that he could not reach that level, but after looking at Zhenbai's peaceful eyes, the impetuousness in his heart disappeared inconceivably, leaving only a touch of warmth.

Facing the temptation in front of him, between beasts and beasts, Wang Hao finally failed to choose to incarnate as a wolf, so he quietly admired the manuscript in his hand.

……

Five minutes later, after quietly reading Zhenbai's original manuscript, Wang Hao's expression became weird, and he finally understood why, as Shiina Zhenbai's world-class painter, the submission was still returned.

"You should know why."

Putting down the manuscript, Wang Hao asked straightforwardly, believing that Shiina Mashiro himself knew this problem.

"Well, the plot is really boring..."

Lostly nodded, just as Wang Hao thought, Shiina Mashiro himself already knew the reason. From the beginning to now, he has submitted articles many times, but none of them have passed. Iida Ayano also raised such questions.

Although Shiina Mashiro lacks common sense, he still has his own opinions in his heart. Even a genius will have the same things as ordinary people.

"The plot is really boring. It can be said that it is a completely brainless plot. There are so many things that people don't understand. It can make readers go crazy."

Wang Hao bluntly said that since he decided to teach Zhenbai to learn manga, he should clearly point out the flaws to the other party.

"Um……"

Shiina Mashiro only said this sentence, and his mood was obviously a lot lower. Although it is unbearable to criticize a girl like this, using white lies will only make Mashiro go further and further down the wrong path, so Wang Hao decided to tell the truth.

"First of all, let's talk about the style of painting. You have made every character too perfect, and you can hardly find any flaws. The appearance of any passerby can be comparable to the protagonist. The most important thing is that the characters are too peaceful. Not only the male protagonist has a peaceful personality, but other characters, including the male protagonist's rival in love, have become popular. Although this is just a comic, it is really boring to rely on the setting of all characters with the same personality."

The character of the protagonist of a comic is too important. No matter what the characters in the comics are, they all have their own unique personalities, such as optimism, black belly, arrogance, passion, etc. It is the unique personality that gives the characters their souls, allowing readers to learn more about them. A clear understanding of the nature of comics.

However, Shiina Mashiro's manga has a setting that is impossible to see in other manga. All characters have the same personality, and it is impossible to reflect the strong personal charm of the manga characters.

After a pause, Wang Hao got up from the chair, walked to the other side of the bed and sat down, just facing Shiina Mashiro, and continued to speak.

"Then is the most important plot. Your comic content is despising everyone! A rival in love finally appeared, why did he disappear inexplicably just after he appeared on the scene? Even the cute pet dog is not spared, isn't it? Because it is the pet of a rival, should it disappear as a matter of course?! And please don’t underestimate love, how can there be such a smooth and unimaginable love in the world, even if it is fictional, it is impossible!”

Wang Hao said what he wanted to say in one breath, and noticed that his tone was a little excited, but Zhen Bai was so ignorant in the plot that he was disappointed.

As a manga artist, Shiina Mashiro can be said to be a rookie except for the painter. If it were divided into four papers, he would give the painter a full score of [-] without hesitation. As for the other three There are absolutely no exceptions for Zhang papers, all of which are zero points.

On a comprehensive average, an average of 25 points in each subject is regarded as a just-qualified cartoonist, while Mashiro's average is only [-] points in each subject, and these scores are all obtained by drawing.

It really disappointed him, but Wang Hao did not continue to criticize. After all, Zhenbai still lacked a lot of life experience in his life, and he was almost a blank piece of paper without any trace.

"sorry."

Shiina Mashiro's voice is still as flat as water, and it's hard to find the loss if you don't listen carefully.

But Wang Hao still noticed it and sighed softly, it seems that what he said just now was a bit too much.

"Don't worry about the aspects I mentioned just now, I will teach you slowly."

The reason why Wang Hao said the shortcomings just now is to let Zhenshi know the shortcomings of being a cartoonist, but it seems that he has noticed these a long time ago, and he is very pleased that he did not refute it.

On the other hand, Shiina Mashiro is a talented painter after all, but he doesn't have a trace of arrogance.

"Then please teach me how to shape the characters and how to create the plot, please!"

Shinshiro raised his low head, his face looked more serious, and asked earnestly.

"Well, even if you suddenly say that..."

Wang Hao said with some embarrassment, the teaching just now was really going to be implemented, and he didn't know where to start for a while, and it was obviously impossible to suddenly let Zhenbai regain common sense.

All cartoonists come step by step, and Wang Hao can't achieve success without paying. He has modified both [-] Centimeters per Second and Dragon Ball. He started from the moment he set the goal of creating a two-dimensional empire. In silent efforts.

For example, there are a lot of related materials in the room, all of which are related to the production of games, comics, animation and other related books. When he is free, he will often read it, and now he has come into contact with a lot of new knowledge.

The topic is a bit far off, but the meaning I want to express is that it takes time and effort to get closer to the goal slowly.

There are many people in the comics industry who are respected as 'teacher', who basically start from other people's comic assistants.

Wait...a manga assistant? !

"I now have a work that is very suitable for Zhenbai. It is a work I am creating. It is called "Five Centimeters Per Second". Your style of painting completely meets the requirements. Just follow the development of the above plot, so that you can accumulate some experience! You! How does it look?"

Wang Hao clapped his hands excitedly. The second five background picture created by Zhenbai last time, the beautiful and touching style of peerless painting has made him unforgettable to this day.

At first, he didn't think about giving the second five a comic, because it is difficult to express the touchingness of the novel in the way of pictures, especially as a comic, which requires the cartoonist's style to the extreme, so He just gave up on the idea, or didn't even think about it at all.

But "Five Centimeters Per Second" seems to be a tailor-made work for Shiina Mashiro. With the unparalleled style of painting and the depressing plot, Wang Hao's eyes have already seen the ending...

(End of this chapter)