GodfallTwo-dimensional

Chapter 39 The Gentle Xia Shizi
Meet Xia Shizi?Based on He Xia Shizi's usual chat, Wang Hao can already judge that the other party must be a character like Yamato Nadeko in reality.

Not only is she gentle to others, but she must also be a goddess who exudes the atmosphere of a literary girl.

Suddenly wanting to meet such a girl, he didn't know how to respond for a while.

This should be true, right? !

Kasumi Shiko and Shiina Mashiro are different. The former was originally a genius writer, and what he said was based on rational thinking. Although the latter is a world-class genius, his brain thinking is also different from ordinary people. It should be said that he is innocent and straightforward, or has no scheming Woolen cloth?
But it's really surprising to have an appointment all of a sudden, and it's true that the two sides have known each other for a while...

Just because the other party's short sentence is enough to make him want to think.

Poor Wang Hao has normal attributes in other aspects, but only emotionally can compete with Zhenbai, or even surpass it a bit.

He dared to guarantee this. He was single for 18 years in his previous life, and he was single for 16 years when he was reborn into this world. Together, he was single for 34 years, and he had been single for 34 years! !
It can be regarded as sad for those who hear it, and tears for those who see it.

[Xia Shizi: What's wrong?Don't Haojun want to meet me? (sad)】

What a joke!How can you not make an appointment? !
Even Wang Hao, who was emotionally sluggish, found that the opportunity to get rid of the single was right in front of him, and there was only one thing to do.

About, about, about! !

[God Lord: There's nothing like that. It's just that I want to meet Xia Shizi suddenly. I'm a little overwhelmed with joy. I don't know how to face Xia Shizi, because someone like me... 】

Speaking of the end, the inferiority complex hidden in Wang Hao's heart slowly emerged. He always seemed to be a cool person who belonged to a fake house in his previous life, but he was actually very lonely. After he couldn't make friends, he gradually began to feel inferior. .

Even if I came here and knew all kinds of people, I still couldn't get rid of the hidden low self-esteem.

[Xia Shizi: So what about this?I don't hate this kind of place in Haojun, because I have experienced it too. 】

Seeing this text, Wang Hao suddenly felt a touch of emotion, and at the same time, he felt a sense of guilt.

[God Lord: I'm sorry, it reminded you of bad memories. 】

Unexpectedly, Xia Shizi, who has always been considerate, also had such a lonely past, and he began to regret why he had said more.

[Xia Shizi: I am very happy to learn more about Haojun.And compared to this, now I still think of a password for a meeting. 】

[God Lord: Do you still need a password when we meet? 】

Wang Hao knew that Xia Shizi deliberately opened up the topic, and he didn't want to continue talking about those heavy past events. It was already embarrassing enough just now, and it must have left a bad impression on the other party...

[Xia Shizi: Of course, don't you think you have the demeanor of a special agent?Hope Haojun can think of a handsome password. 】

Eh!Let me think about it? !

Many clips flashed through his mind, and he remembered the secret code used by the agents to communicate in the movie, which was indeed mysterious and handsome.

Is this the case for ordinary offline gatherings?Wang Hao has never participated in an offline party, so naturally he is not very clear.

The password should be used to prevent the embarrassment of admitting the wrong person, but I always feel that something is wrong, it feels weird...

He could recall a lot of password words, and one of the most impressive classic passwords was even more unforgettable, and he typed it subconsciously with both hands and sent it.

[God Lord: When we meet, let's use the code of 'Heaven King Gai Dihu, Baota Town River Demon', you say the first sentence, and I answer the second sentence, how about it? 】

When he came back to his senses, he realized that the sentence was full of middle-[-]nd breath. He covered his face with a headache with his left hand, wouldn't he be regarded as a middle-[-]nd boy?

It's a pity that there is no withdrawal function, and you can only watch the messages sent in the past.

[Xia Shizi: Hao Jun is really very literary. I have read the novel called '5 Centimeters Per Second'. Although it is only a short chapter, the writing style makes me immersed in it involuntarily, and I look forward to it more and more. The story behind. 】

How to forget the business?

Wang Hao was slightly startled. The reason why he logged into Penguin was to tell Xia Shizi his evaluation of 'Love Metronome'.

Secretly calmed down for a while, and objectively sent his evaluation of 'Love Metronome' in the past.

[God Lord: No, Teacher Xia Shizi is amazing. I also went to read the 'Metronome in Love' today, and it touched me a lot, but I felt that something important was missing. 】

[Xia Shizi: Really?I hope Haojun can tell me the truest view. 】

[God Lord: To put it simply, you lack a routine in the novel. At the end of the first volume, the development of the plot obviously begins to be unstable. Because the relationship between the hero and heroine is developing too smoothly, it will be difficult to impress readers. After all, what you wrote It's a love novel. 】

These views are entirely his own. In his previous life, Wang Hao also worked as a writer for many years. Although he was still on the street, he still had some insight.

[Xia Shizi: Then I should add some... routines to the novel?But I don't know what to do...]

If other writers told him that he did not know how to do routines, Wang Hao would definitely spit it out, and he chose to believe what Xia Shizi said.

There are two reasons. One is because the other party has just started writing, and the style of writing is still being finalized, so they have not chosen another path to follow the trend; the second reason is, do you need any reason to believe in your friend?

No tricks?It's okay, let me teach you step by step, this kind of thing is commonplace for Wang Hao.

[God Lord: According to the type of novel you write, I think you should add a time-honored routine. Although it looks very old, it does not hinder readers’ love for it, that is, heroes save beauty.

Love without twists and turns is too bland, the hero should go through various tests, and finally defeat the boss and stay with the heroine, which increases the reader's interest in reading. 】

[Xia Shizi: So it is, indeed, this will stabilize the development of the plot and create a more exciting story, thank you! 】

The addition of routines was something she had never thought of before. Perhaps most of her works are filled with the same routines. Xia Shizi instinctively rejected them.

Because of this, 'Love Metronome' has attracted many readers with its first volume. It is considered a clear stream in the light novel world. In the final analysis, it is a love light novel.

The hero saves the beauty seems to be an old routine, but most of the successful romance light novels are basically used.

The key lies in how the author perfectly integrates into the routine. Although Xia Shizi is writing a novel for the first time, she has been reminded by Wang Hao and has the confidence to create a better story to show everyone.

ps: Thanks to the book friend 'Du Lianyou Banyue' for the 200 reward, the first reward for the book, which makes the author feel recognized. Because of school, it may be updated very late today. But the author will definitely complete the two updates and report back.

I would also like to thank other book friends for their support to the author. It is really nice to meet you.

(End of this chapter)