GodfallTwo-dimensional

Chapter 29 Found a Treasure
"You three, come to the office with me."

Iida Ayano randomly selected two adult men in their 30s, hesitated for a while, and nominated Wang Hao as well.

The other rookie cartoonists who were not selected were all disappointed. The two more mature cartoonists were nominated, they could agree, but the other one was obviously a high school student!
This damn world still needs looks...

Although they thought so in their hearts, everyone did not express their thoughts, so they had to sigh and leave.

Wang Hao and the other two cartoonists followed Tian Lino's footsteps and walked into an office on the second floor. The other two were obviously a little uncomfortable with this environment, and their faces showed respectful expressions.

Wang Hao sat on the office chair casually, and Ayano Iida admired this calm attitude.

Since the other party has such a confident attitude, either he is full of confidence in his own manuscript, or he is just a self-important ghost who has not come out of society.

But judging from Wang Hao's temperament, she prefers the former, hoping that this kid can bring her a little surprise.

"Show me your manuscript."

When it comes to business affairs, Iida Ayano's casualness just now completely disappeared, replaced by an aura unique to a strong woman in the workplace.

"Hay!"

The other two cartoonists, both in their thirties, respectfully agreed, took out their original manuscripts from their briefcases, bent over and handed them over.

This scene made Wang Hao a little speechless, but he didn't say anything. He also took out the manuscript from his bag, placed it at the bottom, and sat casually on the chair.

Seeing this, Iida Ayano only frowned slightly, and then began to pick up the manuscript in her hand and read it carefully.

People who can be editor-in-chief often have a pair of bright eyes and a longer-term vision, and can even see the future potential from the beginning of the comics.

A long-term perspective is an essential requirement for being an editor-in-chief at Shueisha.

Iida Ayano was very careful when reviewing the manuscript, but every time she turned a page, the manga artist who was being reviewed would sweat on the forehead. At his desk, his worst fears happened.

"Please take your manuscript, it's no longer your business here."

"Can you tell me why?"

The cartoonist held the manuscript unwillingly, and did not leave in a hurry. His long-term efforts were denied in one sentence. How could he leave in such a disheartened manner, how could he be repaired! !
"That's what you want." Iida Ayano smiled slightly, this smile was particularly piercing in his eyes, and then he heard Iida Ayano's evaluation, "You should be a newcomer, right?

From the most basic point of view, it is not qualified, and I have absolutely no idea what you want to express.

There is also the development of the plot that deviates from the theme from the third page, and the fifth page has a different style of painting. With these, your comics have already failed. "

Iida Ayano's few short words made the manga artist feel ashamed and ashamed. With difficulty, she spit out a thank you, and left the office with a stooped figure.

His departure made another cartoonist nervous, waiting anxiously for the outcome.

After a long time, Iida Ayano put down another manuscript and tapped lightly on the table with her left hand.

"Your splitting method is also not right, it's a little better than the last one.

From the perspective of the protagonist's character shaping, why did he change his character three times in just one sentence?

Presumably you were trying to produce a different kind of protagonist, but that's what caused you to fail because you didn't have that much control.

The hierarchical structure of the story is confusing, and why the heroine died on the third page, was resurrected on the No.17 page, and died again on the 25th page. This is not a supernatural horror comic! "

"Thank you."

The cartoonist who uttered this sentence seemed to have collapsed all over his body. He finally realized the feeling of leaving the person just now, and also left the office with failure.

The departure of the two did not affect Wang Hao in the slightest, but the beautiful editor-in-chief looked tough and left no room, but kindly reminded the two newcomer cartoonists of their shortcomings.

But these problems will not happen to Dragon Ball at all. This phenomenal comic has attracted the expectations of countless people from the beginning, and it is because of this that there will be subsequent ups and downs.

[A long, long time ago, in a deep mountain thousands of kilometers away from the city, this imaginative story began...]
The opening chapter of Dragon Ball attracted Iida Ayano's attention. What he saw was a young man with a tail rolling a wooden wheel, carrying a large saw knife, and greeting the animals around him.

The style of painting looks very unique, but it does not make people feel uncomfortable.

Turning to the second page with curiosity, the young man with a long tail threw the wooden wheel bigger than his body into the sky, and kicked it apart suddenly, which is even more admirable.

A teenager went out hunting and caught a big monster with his tail in a creek under a cliff. He was hit by a car on the way home. The hero and heroine met, and there was a bad fight...

The more I look down, the more surprised Iida Ayano is. The idea of ​​this manga is like a fantasy, combining a strong technical style and retro flavor, as if entering a whole new world.

[It is said that the seven dragon balls can be collected and the spell can be recited...]
[The dragon will appear, and it can help people realize any wish, but only one wish can be realized at a time! ]

The sudden increase of mythological color did not break the original style, but added a lot of charm to this comic.

After slowly and carefully tasting Dragon Ball, Iida Ayano couldn't believe that this was the work of a rookie cartoonist. Whether it was from the storytelling technique or from other aspects, she couldn't find anything that could be changed. .

What are the responsibilities of a comic editor?It is to find out the deficiencies of the cartoonist's works and point them out to correct them.

The content of the story is very interesting. The young man named Sun Wukong gives people a lively and naughty feeling. The cartoonist's idea is even more imaginative, and he perfectly controls several elements together.

From her point of view, this is definitely a comic with unlimited potential. As long as the plot behind it is not affected, it will definitely catch fire.

The most important thing is that this manga is too in line with Shueisha's requirements, plus the recent predicament...

Iida Ayano solemnly packed up the manuscript and took a deep look at Wang Hao. If he hadn't seen it with his own eyes, who would have thought that this [-]- or [-]-year-old sunshine boy had such a powerful talent.

Before she knew it, Wang Hao's status in her heart suddenly increased, and this time it was a treasure!
ps: Thank you Mina-san!Because of Mina-sang's support for this book, this book has the opportunity to sign a contract. The author has nothing to repay, so he can only update as much as possible (≧▽≦)
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