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Chapter 241 The Authority of the King of Books and the "Star-Suction Law"

the next day.

Hua Yingxue revised the novel "Shadow Man VS Feng Manlou" again, adding what happened in the secret cave of Siguo Ya last night.

Although "Shadow Man VS Fengmanlou" is a documentary novel, the materials are all ready-made, but its creation is very difficult.

It will not work at all if you just record the material in its original form. This can only be regarded as a news article, not a documentary novel.

The biggest difference between novels and news is that news only needs to narrate facts, while novels need to stimulate readers' perceptions, especially their imaginations.

A novel should not only let readers see what is in the text, but also let the reader see what is not in the text.

Only by making readers think and arousing readers' imagination can the novel be fascinating, and it is also a documentary novel that can be used to solve crimes.

When creating, a writer not only needs to consider authenticity, but also how to use the text to summon the structure to guide the reader's imagination, which requires very creative skills to turn decay into magic.

It is precisely because of this that Hua Yingxue encountered many difficulties when writing "Shadow Man VS Wind Man Lou".For ordinary fictional novels, she can write a four-star or five-star level, but this documentary novel has been revised repeatedly for more than half a month, but it has only reached a three-star level.

"Shadow Man, I have revised the novel again."

"I'll take a look."

After receiving Hua Yingxue's revised novel manuscript, Liu Xing quickly flipped through it.

[Book Title] "Shadow Man VS Wind Man Lou"

[Type] Documentary Fiction

【Grade】Three-star
[Matching degree] 11.3%
The level is still three stars, and the matching degree has only increased by 0.3%.

The lower the matching degree, the lower the accuracy rate of Liu Xing's pre-reading technique.Only novels with a high degree of matching that can be fascinating can really play the role of pre-reading.

"I didn't write it well, did I?" Hua Yingxue's fair cheeks showed a hint of shame, and said frankly, "This novel involves too many things, and the clues are very cumbersome. I have never written a documentary novel with such a large framework. , It’s a bit difficult to write.”

Liu Xing comforted: "Everything is difficult at the beginning. In fact, your writing, characters, and details are all impeccable. The only shortcoming is the overall structural layout. I suggest you read Yang Baichuan's "She Luo" "Nine Heavens" and Tai Xingchen's "Hundred Kingdoms War", these two novels can be regarded as the pinnacle of the layout of the character flow, and we can learn from them."

""Shooting Down the Nine Heavens"? "A Hundred Kingdoms War"?" Hua Yingxue frowned slightly, "What kind of novel is this, I seem to have never heard of it?"

Liu Xing has never read these two novels before, but after being fascinated by "The Shadow Man: The Master of Pre-reading", he transplanted the memory of the master of pre-reading, and there are more than 100 million reading memories of novels in his mind.

""Shooting the Nine Heavens" and "The War of a Hundred Kingdoms" are two banned books." Liu Xing said according to the memory of the pre-reading master in his mind, "They were created more than 40 years ago, and you can read them in the forbidden book in China. -Look in the library."

"Oh." Hua Yingxue immediately used her laptop to open the forbidden-shuku website of the Huaxia Reading Alliance, and logged in with her reader account.

Ban-shuku is not accessible to every scholar. Hua Yingxue is one of the top ten writers in the Xiaoyao Cup Novel Contest, so she enjoys this privilege.

"Shadow Man, there is no "Shooting the Nine Heavens" and "The War of a Hundred Kingdoms" in the ban-library?" After searching for a while, Hua Yingxue said, "I searched several times, but I couldn't find it."

"Why not?" Liu Xing thought for a while and said, "Maybe your authority is not enough, I will try with my account."

The banned books in the forbidden library are also divided into grades, the first-level banned books are the lowest, and the fifth-level banned books are the highest.The higher the level of banned books, the higher the authority required to be eligible to read them.

Hua Yingxue's current authority can only read banned books below the third level, and "Shooting Down the Nine Heavens" and "The War of a Hundred Kingdoms" are banned books at the fourth level, so she has no right to read them.

Liu Xing is now the king of books in eastern China, with the highest authority and can read all banned books.

When he logged in to the website with his Book King reader account, he quickly searched for information on "Shooting Down Nine Heavens" and "War of a Hundred Kingdoms".

"I found it, you can read it now." Liu Xing said.

Hua Yingxue was stunned for a moment, and said in a low voice: "Shadowman, I don't have permission to read these two banned books, and now I use your account to read them. This seems to violate...the rules of the Reading League, right?"

Liu Xing said: "Look at it secretly, just don't spread the word."

Hua Yingxue smiled lightly and nodded again and again: "En."

Afterwards, she began to read "Shooting Down Nine Heavens" and "The War of a Hundred Kingdoms" using Liu Xing's account.

These two novels are both historical novels, telling the story of the most chaotic Warring States Period in Chinese history, with a grand background and many characters, and the overall layout can be regarded as a model of human flow.

It's just that the novel involved a lot of secrets, so it was listed as a fourth-level banned book, and most readers would not have the opportunity to read it.

Hua Yingxue's learning ability is very strong. After spending a day reading two novels, she quickly found the trick of character flow layout, and applied it in "Shadow Man VS Wind Man Lou".

After revision, this novel has made a qualitative leap.

[Book Title] "Shadow Man VS Wind Man Lou"

【Category】Fiction

【Grade】Four-star
[Matching degree] 20.4%
"Yes, the progress is very obvious." Liu Xing said, "The shortcomings in the layout have basically been made up."

Hearing this, Hua Yingxue's pretty face showed joy: "This is all your help, the two forbidden books you read to me are very useful." After a pause, she asked with concern, "Is there anything else that needs to be improved? ?"

Liu Xing looked at the manuscript and said: "The biggest shortcoming now is the description of Feng Manlou, especially the description of Feng Manlou's martial arts. Your writing is a bit distorted."

Hua Yingxue was a little helpless: "I have never seen Fengmanlou's martial arts, it is difficult to write realistic ones."

Liu Xing thought for a while and said, "I can perform it once for you to see."

"Really?"

……

Huashan thinks over the cliff, inside the secret cave.

Zheng!
Accompanied by the sound of howling swords, a branch in Liu Xing's hand pierced out quickly, piercing a needle like a golden needle, drawing an unimaginable arc in mid-air, pointing his toes to the stone wall, his figure suddenly turned back.

The sword move performed by Liu Xing is the "Golden Needle Crossing the Tribulation" of the Hengshan School in "Swordsman", and it is one of the sword moves carved on the stone wall of the secret cave.

From morning till now, Liu Xing used tree branches as swords to practice martial arts on the stone wall of the secret cave. He has practiced Huashan swordplay, Taishan swordplay, Songshan swordplay, and Hengshan swordplay successively.

At this moment, he practiced the Hengshan sword technique again, and mastered all the sword techniques of the Five Sacred Sword School.

While Liu Xing was practicing the sword, Hua Yingxue was sitting in the corner of the secret cave watching, watching the unbelievable moves of the shadow man, while silently recording the material on the laptop.

The reason why Liu Xing practiced these martial arts in the secret cave was to facilitate Hua Yingxue's writing of novels.

Feng Manlou may have learned all these martial arts in the secret cave. If Hua Yingxue wants to write Feng Manlou well, she must have a good understanding of his martial arts.

When watching the ever-changing moves performed by the shadow man, Hua Yingxue was surprised. If she hadn't seen it with her own eyes, it would be hard to believe that such wonderful martial arts existed in the world.

hum!
After rehearsing the swordplay of the Wuyue Sword School, at this moment, there was a soft cry in the secret cave, and Liu Xing saw the branches in his hands spinning rapidly, drawing circular sword shadows in the air, and the sword circles circled. The air swayed in all directions like water waves. Under the agitation of the sword air, a small wind blew in the cave, and fine dust flew up.

The sword technique that Liu Xing is displaying at this moment is exactly the "Tai Chi Sword" of the Wudang School!
Like waves, bursts of sword energy surged in all directions, hitting the stone wall of the secret cave again and again.

Zheng!
Suddenly, Liu Xing retracted his thoughts, the branches suddenly stopped, and the whole cave became quiet.

A set of "Tai Chi Sword" has been practiced.

Throwing the branch aside, Liu Xing prepared to rest for a while, and walked to Hua Yingxue in the corner.

"Heiying people, you people who practice martial arts must be very hard, right?" Hua Yingxue thought of something and asked curiously, "How long does it usually take for people who practice martial arts to acquire 'internal strength'?"

"It depends on the situation." Liu Xing explained, "If you have the opportunity to practice high-quality inner strength, you can achieve a small amount of inner strength in a year or so. If you simply practice swords, it may take several years or even ten years .”

"Ten years?" Hua Yingxue frowned, "Speaking of which, it is very difficult to develop 'inner strength'. Last time you lost so much 'Nine Yang True Qi' to me, did it give you vitality? Serious injury?"

Liu Xing smiled and said, "Don't worry, I only lost less than a quarter of my internal energy in your body, and the loss is not much."

Hua Yingxue thought for a while, and then asked: "Can I return the 'Nine Yang True Qi' in my body to you?"

Liu Xing was puzzled: "Why, you don't want it anymore?"

"Jiuyang Zhenqi is both self-defense and healthy. I am worthy of receiving such a precious thing." Hua Yingxue said, "These internal forces are cultivated by you so hard, but they are lost in my body. I think It's not suitable. Shadowman, can the Nine Yang True Qi in my body be injected back into your body?"

"Of course." Liu Xing pointed to a string of words on the stone wall of the secret cave, and introduced, "This set of "Suction Star Da-fa" is a set of martial arts that can absorb other people's internal strength. ", I will be able to suck back the internal force in your body."

Hearing this, Hua Yingxue's eyes lit up slightly, she looked at the mental method on the stone wall, and said: "Shadow man, you should learn the "Star Absorbing Great-Fa" quickly, after you practice it, you can suck my internal energy away." .”

Liu Xing didn't expect this girl to be so kind, so he intentionally teased her, and said, "If I really learned the "Star Suction Da-fa" to suck your internal energy, you might regret it."

Hua Yingxue affirmed: "No, I really want to return my inner strength to you."

"If you knew the method of "Suction Stars-Fa" to absorb people's internal energy, I'm afraid you wouldn't say that." Liu Xing reminded, "To absorb people's internal energy, both parties need to have physical contact. You know "Suction Stars" -Which part does the Law use to absorb people's internal energy?"

"Which part?" Hua Yingxue frowned, pondered for a while, and asked cautiously, "Hands?"

Liu Xing shook his head and lied, "It's the mouth."

"mouth?"

"That's right." Liu Xing said, "When you want to use the "Suction Star Da-fa", you have to kiss the opponent's mouth, then sink your qi into the dantian, and suck the opponent's internal force out of the mouth."

"..." Hua Yingxue was a little speechless for a moment, didn't this "Star Attraction Da-Fa" become a kiss?

Pursing her pink lips, Hua Yingxue asked weakly: "If you use the "Star Attraction Method" to absorb people's internal energy, how long will it take?"

"It's a matter of scoring. If the opponent's internal strength is weak, the inhalation time will naturally be short. If the opponent's internal strength is deep, the inhalation time will be longer." Liu Xing said, "You have pure Jiuyang Zhenqi in your body, if you want to use " It will probably take an hour or two if all the Star Absorbing Da-Fa" is absorbed!"

"One or two hours?" Hua Yingxue's heart tightened. Isn't this time too long?If it's just a few seconds of kissing, she can basically accept it, but kissing for two hours in a row is a bit...

"Do you have to use your mouth in "The Great Law of Attracting Stars?" Hua Yingxue asked again.

"Yes." Liu Xingqing coughed and asked, "How about it, do you still want to return your internal energy to me now?"

"..." Hua Yingxue was at a loss for words for a while, she didn't know what to say, her cheeks couldn't help but her cheeks were burning hot, agreed to be sucked by the shadow man, wouldn't it be the same as agreeing to be kissed by the shadow man?

How can a girl agree to such a request?
What's more, it was two hours of continuous kissing!

However, if you don't kiss, you won't be able to return your inner strength to the shadow man. Doesn't this make you seem too narrow-minded?

Hua Yingxue was secretly tangled in her heart.

"I was joking with you." At this moment, Liu Xing said suddenly.

"What?" Hua Yingxue didn't understand.

"You don't have to use your mouth to perform the "Star Attraction Da-fa", you can also use your hands." Liu Xing explained solemnly, "It depends on personal preference."

"..." Hua Yingxue raised her eyebrows and asked again, "If you use your hands, do you have to hold hands for two hours?"

Liu Xing couldn't help smiling, and suddenly felt that the woman in front of him was a little silly and cute, and said: "Don't think about it, I was just teasing you. My skills have already recovered, and the Jiuyang Zhenqi in your body is nothing to me. Use it, I won’t suck it back. If you want to thank me, just write the novel.”

After a few chats, Hua Yingxue sat in front of the laptop and continued to perfect the novel.After two hours of hard work, she finally wrote what happened today into "Shadow Man VS Feng Man Lou".

After that, Liu Xing read the newly revised novel again.

According to Shuyan's test, the matching degree of the novel has reached 25%.

After re-reading the novel, Liu Xing's pre-reading technique began to play a role, and an inspiration emerged from his mind.

""The Great Law of Attracting Stars"?" Liu Xing stared at the manuscript of the novel, startled.

Hua Yingxue was puzzled: "Shadow man, what did you say?"

"According to the speculation of the pre-reading technique, to find out the truth of this secret cave, you need to use the "Star Attraction Da-Fa"."

After finishing speaking, Liu Xing stood up suddenly, walked to the stone wall of the secret cave, and read the mental method of "Star Attraction Da-fa" on the stone wall.

Hua Yingxue was a little dazed, completely unaware of what happened, but not long after, she saw Liu Xing suddenly activated her internal energy, a strong wind suddenly blew in the cave, and all the wind was directed at Liu Xing.

Liu Xing has already displayed the "Suction of Stars-Fa", and the continuous internal energy is sucking the surrounding objects. Due to the strong suction, many stones in the hole rolled up, rolling towards Liu Xing, Hua Yingxue He could hardly stand still, and his hands were holding on to the wall tightly.

Whoa!
Under the pull of the suction force of the "Star Attraction Da-Fa", suddenly, the stone wall of the secret cave fell off, and countless stones fell down one after another.

When the stone rolled down, a golden wall appeared behind the stone wall...

……

(End of this chapter)