Create the heavens and the world

Chapter 69

It has been more than a month since this book was released, and there are some things I want to say.

Let me tell you first, the performance of this book is not good, everyone can see the data of clicks and recommendations. Fortunately, there are many supporters of book friends, as well as the help of editors. At least the jokes have the motivation to continue writing, and Have the confidence to write it better and better.

Again, you don't have to worry about the eunuch. Since the book has been signed, it will be finished no matter what.There is a complete novel "Tiandao Credit Card" with nearly 200 million words at the starting point, which can be regarded as a guarantee of character. Those who like science and technology can read it.

Let me talk about the comments made by book friends in the book review area.

I generally don't read the book review section, I dare not read it, for fear of too much criticism, please understand this.It's not that I'm too weak, but that in the field of online writing, I'm just a street writer, and I really don't have the confidence to face many criticisms.Watching too much, one is to affect my mood, the other is to discourage enthusiasm, and the third is to get angry. To be honest, not all criticisms are out of good intentions, and many times involve insulting personality. This is very common on the Internet. matter.

At the stage of the new book, there are relatively few book reviews. I mustered up the courage to read it and explain some problems.

First, some book friends mentioned the problem of setting. I can only say sorry for this. The outline setting is something I determined before writing the book and cannot be changed.

I think there is no need to be demanding about setting this thing in web texts. Net texts are originally a literature that lets imagination fly, and it is impossible to have a general setting.Take Honghuang as an example, in some web articles, the saint is the master of everything, in some web articles, there are many realms above the saint, and in some web articles, the gods can challenge the saint... The only question is whether the readers are willing to follow the author Read on, as long as you think the story is good, what's wrong with the new setting?

Whether the setting is reasonable or not depends on the degree of recognition.There are many masters at the starting point, and basically every master publishes a new book with a new set of settings, because they disdain to rest on their laurels, let alone follow suit.The status of great gods is there, with readers and authority, and their settings quickly become the standard for similar books, because everyone agrees.This is a reality and a very normal thing. I do not deny that many settings of "The Creation of the Heavens and Worlds" come from those good books before.Of course, many do not mean all, and there are still some differences. I hope everyone can be a little more tolerant and patient.

Second, common sense issues.Any imaginary things are actually based on reality, the same is true for online articles, and the same is true for my writing books.Some book friends mentioned that the four elephants are not earth, water, wind and fire. I checked this, and according to our ancient sayings, it is indeed not the case. Earth, water, wind and fire are Western materialism.Is this a mistake?In my opinion, it can be regarded as a common sense error, or it can not be counted. In my opinion, it does not count, because like many online articles, the setting of this book is not completely based on reality.The biggest background of this book is the prehistoric times. There are many prehistoric novels starting from the prehistoric times, and the settings are not exactly the same, as I said before.In addition, a spoiler, although this book is about cultivating immortals, there are also collisions between immortality and magic. I think it is reasonable.

This is just an example. In a web article with millions of words, there may be more than one reference that is contrary to common sense in reality. I can only say that please don’t get entangled.An online novel is an online novel, there is no need to be specific, it depends on whether the plot is good or not, and whether it satisfies you.

Third, moral issues.Morality is a very difficult thing to explain, and it is a common problem of human beings to criticize others from the moral high ground.For example, some book friends in the book review area said that devouring the birthplace of the protagonist in order to improve their strength is no different from devouring their own mother. It seems that this statement is noble, but it makes people laugh when they think about it.This is self-proclaimed morality and using what one takes for granted to criticize others.If I have to struggle with these when reading online articles, then I really don't know how to set up a character, nor what kind of moral standard a character in a novel should possess.

The world of fiction is a disordered world, and it is also a world that does not overlap with reality. Such a world has morality, but whether it is the same as the standard of reality is debatable.In fairy tales and fantasy novels, it is a heinous thing to destroy the world and the planet at every turn, and cause the death of many lives.And yet... what reader would resent such things?

Let me briefly talk about the problems in the book review area, and please be more patient with this book. After all, "Fortune of the Heavens and Myriad Worlds" is still the beginning, the story has not yet unfolded, and my skills are limited, so I can't cover it in such a short space. The story is very exciting... If I have such strength, I may also become a great god.However, I still have confidence in presenting a wonderful and complete story in a relatively long space.There are all kinds of books at the starting point, and the genres everyone likes are different. If there are book friends who like this type of book, you can wait and see, even if the beginning disappoints you, there may be something you are interested in later?
Finally, please support the book friends who like this story, recommend, bookmark, click, your support is my biggest motivation!

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Wang Chong didn't dare to take his eyes off the jade box in Lei's hand for a moment. The Phantasmal Ice Epiphyllum in the jade box was too important for him to take any risks.

Dreamy Ice Epiphyllum is a very precious spiritual herb. This kind of spiritual herb can strengthen the soul of the warrior, and it is also the main medicine for refining the pregnant god pill.Pregnant God Pill is much more precious than Tongtian Pill. Tongtian Pill is only for people to advance to innate level, while Pregnant God Pill can strengthen the primordial spirit of innate warriors and improve the realm of innate warriors!

This dreamy ice epiphyllum with more than 9000 years of spiritual power is assisted by other elixir, and at least it can refine more than 10 pregnant god pills. According to the Wang family's family law, at least one pregnant god pill can be shared with Wang Chong's credit. , this Pregnancy Pill is enough for Wang Chong to break through the Realm and reach the Realm Realm!

Wang Chong is the third generation of the Wang family, not too old, but not too young.He has advanced to Xiantian for more than ten years, and because of his talent and cultivation resources, he has always been in the Real Qi Realm. Now that he sees the hope of the True Yuan Realm, how can Wang Chong not be in a hurry?
Through probing, Lei Dong became more and more aware of the importance of the jade box to Wang Chong.

"There is no discussion, I will hand over the jade box to you, and you let her go!" Lei Dong said very strongly, "If you don't agree, I will destroy the jade box."

Wang Chong hesitated for a long time, and finally nodded.For him, the fantasy ice epiphyllum that can enhance his cultivation is the most important thing, as for the enemy, that is a matter of later.However, Wang Chong is an old man. Although he made concessions, he still put forward several conditions.

Wang Chong asked Leidong to put the jade box on the north side, and then asked him to retreat to the south side. The distance between the two was about 50 meters.Then, Wang Chong brought Lei Ling closer to the jade box. When he walked to a distance of more than ten meters from the jade box, he threw Lei Ling towards the mountain forest to the east, and quickly grabbed the jade box and fled northward.

"Little Ling!" Lei Dong didn't care about chasing Wang Chong, and went straight to Lei Ling. In his eyes, nothing was more important than Lei Ling's safety.

On a small mound tens of meters away, Lei Dong found Lei Ling.

"Little Ling, how are you doing?" Lei Dong picked up his younger sister and let her swallow the Haohua Tianlu on his body, but it didn't work.Lei Ling took more than 100 drops of Haohua Tianlu, but he still didn't wake up, and instead spit out a big mouthful of blood.

After spurting blood, Lei Ling's aura became weaker, and the flame of life was like a candle in the wind, which might go out at any time.

Lei Dong was terrified, but he had no choice but to pick up Lei Ling and place her in the cave.When passing by the Wang family, Lei Dong slashed down with an ax angrily, smashing more than a dozen Houtian warriors abandoned by Wang Chong into pieces.Afterwards, Lei Dong stood still in front of Lei Ling, feeding her Fortune Heavenly Dew from time to time.

It was already late at night when Zhou Tianci returned to the cave. After Yinyi and Yiner recovered some of their strength, he subdued the other three monsters in Snake Pan Mountain in one fell swoop. Moon Lizard.

The strength of these three monsters is not small compared to Yin [-] and Yin [-], and they are all innate early stages.

To Zhou Tianci's regret, no spiritual material with destructive power was found.

After leaving the five monsters on Shepan Mountain, Zhou Tianci left.These five monsters were too big for Zhou Tianci to carry with him, so he could only let them stay in the cave first.

"Leidong, what happened?" As soon as he got close to the cave, Zhou Tianci smelled a strong smell of blood and felt the death aura here, which surprised him.Fortunately, he quickly discovered Leidong, otherwise he would have thought that something happened to Leidong and Lei Ling.

When Lei Dong heard his question, a tinge of color appeared in his blank eyes, and he said with a crying voice: "My lord, Xiao Ling is injured, I can't wake her up..."

When Zhou Tianci saw Lei Ling lying on the bed, boundless anger surged in his heart.He and Lei Ling have been together for less than four months, but the well-behaved and sensible Lei Ling has long been regarded as his sister by him for more than three months. , how could Zhou Tianci not be angry!
After all, Zhou Tianci still had reason, so he immediately suppressed his anger and went to check on Lei Ling's injuries.

"My lord, how is Little Ling?" Lei Dong looked at Zhou Tianci expectantly.

Zhou Tianci remained expressionless, and said slowly: "Xiao Ling's injury is very serious, most of her internal organs are damaged, her heart fails, and she may die at any time. Such a serious injury, if you hadn't been hanging with Haohua Tianlu, Xiao Ling I can't hold on for even a quarter of an hour!"

"Ah..." Lei Dong knelt on the ground and roared hoarsely, "Wang Chong, the Wang family, I want to kill you!"

"Okay!" Zhou Tianci picked up Lei Ling and reprimanded Lei Dong: "Lei Dong, calm down. No matter how Xiao Ling was injured, the most important thing now is to heal her first. I will take Lei Ling to Weeping Blood City immediately. , find someone to treat her, you wait here for my news."

"My lord, I'll go with you!" Lei Dong wiped his tears and got up and said, with a very firm attitude, "I can help you with my current strength. Besides, Xiaoling is injured now, so asking me to wait here is tantamount to asking me to wait here." life."

Zhou Tianci thought for a while, and finally agreed: "Okay, let's pretend later and go into the city overnight. Don't bring your mountain axe, so as not to cause trouble."

As Lei Ling's life was at stake, neither of them dared to be negligent, they simply cleaned up and set off immediately.In order to take care of Lei Ling, the two couldn't go all out, but they also arrived at Weeping Blood City after an hour.However, the city gate of Weeping Blood City is closed.

"My lord, what should we do now?" Lei Dong asked anxiously.

"Sneak into the city." Zhou Tianci said, "Then let's go to Wanhai Pavilion, they have brilliant alchemists, they will definitely be able to heal Lei Ling!"

The city gate is not an obstacle to Zhou Tianci and Leidong today. Both of them have the strength of the Gang Qi Realm, and they entered the city with a little effort.Afterwards, Zhou Tian sent them to Wanhai Pavilion.

"I'm looking for Wanyingying, tell him Hongjun is here!" Zhou Tianci rushed straight into the Wanhai Pavilion, and those who blocked him were shot away by Leidong. Of course, Leidong didn't hurt them.

"Who are you? How dare you do something in Wanhai Pavilion!" The steward of Wanhai Pavilion scolded.

"Stop talking nonsense, let Wanying come to see me immediately!" Zhou Tianci stomped his foot, and a crack spread from his feet to the other end of the hall, which was more than 100 meters long.

"You..." The steward was finally scared. He knew that the ground of Wanhai Pavilion was made of red gilt copper. This kind of copper is ten times stronger than fine steel in terms of toughness and hardness. , let alone a [-]-meter crack.

Those who can do this are definitely not something he can afford!

Under the deterrence of force, the steward immediately notified Wan Wanying.

Wan Ying came to the first floor with six congenitals, and when he saw Zhou Tianci, his expression was not good.

"Brother Hongjun, what do you mean by bringing people to make trouble in Wanhai Pavilion in the middle of the night?" Wan Wanying said coldly, "Although we have cooperated, it doesn't mean that you can do anything wrong in Wanhai Pavilion. If you give If you don’t have a reasonable reason, then don’t blame me for being rude.”

Zhou Tianci didn't care about Wanying's attitude, he stepped forward holding Lei Ling and said: "I'm really sorry, Brother Wan, if I hadn't had to, I would never have done this. This is my younger sister, she was seriously injured and was in danger, we There is really no other way but to seek help from Wanhai Pavilion."

Wan Ying stepped forward to look, his eyes flashed a strange look, he turned around and said something to his subordinate, and the subordinate left immediately.After a while, the subordinate guard Guan Lao brought him.

"Guan Lao is the most brilliant alchemist in Wanhai Pavilion and the top alchemist in Dayu Country, let him have a look." Wan Ying said.

Zhou Tianci put Lei Ling on the chair, cupped his hands gratefully and said, "Thank you, Brother Wan!"

Guan Lao stepped forward to check Lei Ling, then stroked his long beard and said, "This little girl suffered serious internal injuries. Not only were her internal organs broken, but her meridians and acupoints were also destroyed by true energy. The true energy left in her body Looking angrily, it seems to be the Wang family's "White Tiger Roaring in the Sky". I don't know who has played such a cruel hand."

Zhou Tianci hurriedly asked: "Old Guan, how can we cure her?"

Guan Lao pondered: "If an ordinary person suffered such a severe injury, he would have died long ago. It should be due to Linglu that this little girl can survive until now. However, Linglu can sustain her for a while, but cannot save her. , if you want to save her, you must use the Reborn Bone Pill. As far as I know, only the Reborn Bone Pill can reshape the meridians and acupoints, and repair her broken internal organs."

"It's fine if there is a cure!" Zhou Tianci and Lei Dong looked at each other, and they both saw each other's joy.But the next moment, Wanying's words made them feel down again.

(End of this chapter)