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Chapter 4 About "Cats" and "Jianghu" - Quietly
I prefer "Cats" to "Jianghu".To be honest, who the hell, don't hit me with tofu dregs.

The plot of "Cat" is still full of gentle characters, I think so.The characters in it are full of personality and at the same time factions and identities, that is, the standpoints and contradictions of the characters are not very sharp.A friend is a friend, and there is no loyalty that is absolutely crazy, and you will not stubbornly think that all friends are right and enemies are not good things.Let’s just talk about the young master among the characters, the first time I saw it I didn’t feel it, I was just a passerby, the second time I saw it was disgusting, the third or fourth time... the more I saw it, the more pitiful and even a little bit cute (even if it is very uncomfortable for Su who is critically ill) polite). .There are even several types of nympho: Wen Feifei and Kong Rong.Although the means of the villain are very bad, but I like the protagonist, even the villain in it.I’ve read this book three times and I’m still not tired of it. After half of the classmates rushed to read it, "Cats" was very tattered...

Besides, "Jianghu", I look forward to it, I pat the table - why is it so slow to lift the ban, I'm used to watching x posts!Of course, if the book is published, I will still buy it to fill the bookshelf like "Cat".

Leaving away, dragging back—Praise first, the article is very tense, the storyline is very emotional, and if the protagonist is in danger, I will hold the mouse tightly. Although I know Zaozao is my mother, I am still very happy. I was afraid that if I was not careful earlier, I would let July hang up.Then greet Yebai or Baiye a hundred times in my heart a hundred times.

But, I said why is this one character so disabled (brain disabled)! ! ! The advantages of "Cats" are all its disadvantages, see the first paragraph.The character setting is a bit rigid, how do I see July’s friends, except Xing MM, they all seem to be men, they seem to appreciate July very much, and they seem to be desperate for July... I think July is There should be a few best friends, but can you not get tired of being together every day?Also, July's circle of friends is too small, and it looks awkward, as if there are only a few people in the world. (Writing and writing suddenly realized, no wonder it looks a little awkward recently) It is suggested that more major events will happen, and the scene will be more open.

Again, that Yebai under BS belongs to Baiye. Although he has contributed a lot to the plot of "Jianghu", he is the one who is the most cruel (resolute). If PK loses, he loses, and after a few days of peace, the words that hurt him in the world will fade away.But he always finds fault, for fear that others will not remember his loss to July.How can the supporting role win the leading role?So ignorant.It's impossible for Zao Zao to be his mother!Enmity is too much, I forgot about him a long time ago, he will take revenge ten years later, it doesn’t have to be so obvious if you have to retaliate, you can make a stumbling block at a critical moment, but it’s so stupid In broad daylight, he blatantly wanted to kill July.

Also, it is rare for me to write such a long one, so I will continue to talk more.Good morning, your man writes that he is insidious or vicious, at least he must treat women fairly!How can you write that most of the women who appear on the stage are brainless?It's not clear what attribute Xing Mum is, even a pretty woman has a lot of acquaintances trying to find fault with Qiyue on her behalf.The goddess Brilliant, who is very good, strong and very short-sighted, fell in love with Han Tieyi, so it was a pity that she couldn't make good friends with July.I strongly appeal to be able to face feelings in a chic way, and those who are a bit experienced in online games don't need to be good-looking chivalrous girls!There is no need to be antagonistic or friendly with the protagonist. It is very satisfying to be a past tense who has left the world and loves to gossip about her.

The boundaries of the characters are too clear, either friends or enemies in July, come and go so little enmity is endless.Anyway, let’s come up with something new, so that Qiyue will occasionally rob impulsively (when she was short of money, but now there are restaurants, it seems very unrealistic) to make enemies instead of being passive victims!

The foreshadowing can be deeper, like when I was forced to watch "Zero Final Fantasy" last year, I felt that fireworks were more suitable for writing romance, and online games were also pretty bad, but I desperately searched for it, and it also discovered the advantages for me, for example, just now I found something unknown at the beginning, and it was not until later that I discovered the benefits of some unintentional actions in the past.

It's early, the way of accepting tasks can be bolder and more bizarre. I think that since the relationship between people is already..., I should just do more tasks and make the NPC more profound.Can you put that Yebai or Baiye aside first, let him develop, don't keep mentioning him, let him go, or else I won't whet my appetite, let the Jianghu world be bigger first, let go of Yebai or Baiye For this endless "feeling", write more about the interaction with NPCs?
You can post a post specifically to solicit funny tasks or NPCs.

Well, dizzy, away from my original intention, I was going to sing more about "Cats".

Let's see if I was moved early because of my love for "Cats", or because I was helpless because I was picky about "Jianghu"?

Those who appeared at the beginning of the chapter didn’t seem to have their names.

Okay, finally explain why it is ribs, because it is delicious, because I like it too!
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Help quietly organize it, add a title, put it away^^
Very pertinent long story, hard work.

Well, I haven’t been writing for a long time. I have only written three books so far. There are many shortcomings. Everyone pick and choose for me. If you understand where the shortcomings are, you can improve them next time to make progress^^
As far as the characters are concerned, I also found that the polarization is a bit stronger at the end of the writing, and the positions are very opposite. Of course, there are some neutral passers-by, but they are not important supporting roles, and the impression will definitely not be deep.As for the female characters, they will appear in the future. Although I won't write a lot of space, they will be softer than the previous ones.

As for the shortcomings of Ban Yuelian and scholar Yebai, I thought about it for a long time, and thought that maybe I was too eager.Because my own style is calm and tender, the plot of the whole article has no obvious ups and downs, and the climax is not strong. Some readers who are not used to reading plain articles may feel drowsy and feel bland, so creating a little conflict becomes very important.But maybe I cared too much and wrote this kind of conflict too deliberately, which caused the characters' personalities and shortcomings to be greatly exaggerated, and they became very stubborn.Although there are quite a few people like this in reality, they are still far away from most ordinary people, and they feel a little crazy and distorted when they look at them.This is where I failed and I will learn from it.

The two characters Ban Yuelian and Scholar Yebai appeared as villains when they first appeared on the stage, but the original idea was that Ban Yuelian should hide deeper and be smarter, pick right from wrong in secret, and keep the leading male supporting role in the dark.The scholar Yebai should also become more cunning and play tricks in the dark.But it may be because of my own personality. I don’t like Qiao Duan who is so suffocated. When I watched "Yi Tian Tu Long Ji" and saw Zhou Zhiruo's design to deceive Zhang Wuji, I hated the book so much that I couldn't read it anymore. I felt a kind of depression in my heart. It was about to explode, so I didn't read it at all, and now it's my turn to write it myself, and I can't handle this kind of plot. At the end of the writing, all the bad guys are on the bright side.Of course, this badness is also relative, and it refers to looking at it from the standpoint of the protagonist.

But for supporting roles like Wei Liang and Devil Sansan, I don’t want to write them as bad guys. In fact, I don’t think Wei Liang is bad. She just compares herself, and characters like Devil Sansan can also find many prototypes in reality. .I have always felt that human nature is complicated, and it is impossible to be completely bad or completely good, but probably my writing skills are not enough, and the outline is not good enough, so that people don't think that these two characters are actually neutral, but they look unpleasant. Hi, I feel bad.Also, um, I just want to say that my female characters are not so crippled, but they are all written too straightforwardly, without so many gossips... Because I think it's an online game, and many things don't need to be like Treat it with the same caution as reality, and then the more casual side of the character will come out...

Hmm, in the end, I concluded that the task of this book is not written much, it is all about the entanglement and interaction of the characters, and the book of the female channel is not as long as the main station, and the writing of several million words can broaden the horizon, so it is too Persevering in writing grievances makes the protagonist's social and entertainment circle a bit smaller.Although online games are online games that require interaction, otherwise it will become a stand-alone game, but in general, the part of my game is a little less ink. If I write online games again next time, I will pay attention to avoiding the above failures and make good improvements. .

Everyone is welcome to continue to shoot, but you still have to love me, Quack, keep reading the books I wrote, and then keep patting me... If one day, I can write a book that I think is relatively perfect , that's all thanks to your patting ^^
Hmm, I will continue to work hard, not seeking perfection in a single jump, I just hope that each book can improve a little bit, improve a little bit, and then attract everyone a little bit ^^
PS: The name of what, where to dig, appeared, although only once, quack.

(End of this chapter)