Selling equipment everywhere

Chapter 1 Short Review Collection

Su Pingzhi "Selling Equipment Everywhere in the Rivers and Lakes"

By—Purple tassels

theme:

The subject matter of this book is very novel, it is an anti-time travel online game article.It should be said that anti-traversal is actually not flattering, because readers read the article, and it is a cool word.As for the theme of time travel, the main character of time travel is born with huge advantages in technology, thinking, and experience, and at the same time uses these advantages to play with ancient times. The protagonist doesn't understand anything in modern times, and he doesn't know anything, and his advantages are gone. Therefore, anti-time travel is not easy to write, but the author of this book has solved this problem ingeniously - the game.Although the protagonist doesn't understand all the strange things in the game, this does not prevent the protagonist from having an advantage.She has a huge advantage in consciousness and physical response, which is what this book is about.It can also be seen from this that he has solid basic skills early.

plot:

It should be said that the three books reviewed today have a good grasp of the plot rhythm, especially this one, the plot transitions are very, very smooth and natural. As for the shortcomings, it is still the same as the previous book, the climax is not obvious.It is suggested that the author deliberately create the climax part.

Writing style:

The writing style is very simple, but natural, smooth, and story-telling, which is my favorite style.There is also a small paragraph summary just mentioned in the previous book, which is also reflected in this book.

character:

I haven't seen much, but the shaping of the protagonist is still very good. The disadvantage is that there are not too many obvious setting characteristics, which makes the characters lose their color a lot.

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Comment on "Selling Equipment Everywhere in the Rivers and Lakes"

By—Ling Jia!
Classmate He Zao's novels are guaranteed in quality, so I jumped into the pit, even though I have always been shocked by the title of the book that does not highlight the novel's highlights - "Selling Equipment Everywhere in the Jianghu".

The setting of "Equipment" is very novel. I don't read many online game novels, and it's the first time I read a martial arts novel that travels through online games, so my curiosity has never stopped.

In a sense, I think "Equipment" is more like a reverse-transmission text. The killer of the Song Dynasty is reversed into a modern online game. Although the background of the game is ancient, everything is stained with modern factors. He is a modern person, and his thinking is even more different from that of the ancients.Qin Zheng seemed to understand something that he didn't understand or didn't understand at all, which was almost exactly the same as what happened to the ancient people when they crossed over to the modern age.

Most of the anti-travel novels later talk about how the protagonist adapts to the modern society, as well as the struggle and encounters in the modern society, and gradually become urban novels in the later stage, which I don’t like very much.The wonderful thing about "Equipment" is that even if it is reversed, the author uses online games to continue telling stories that happened in the rivers and lakes, attracting a large number of readers and martial arts fans who love ancient styles. This setting is quite creative and quite success!
There is another place in this article that is well set, and that is the identity of the heroine. This identity does not refer to her identity as a killer, but means that she only exists in the game. This has been set, which makes people worry about it.

I have always been worried about the future of the heroine. After all, she is a soul without flesh and blood. She only exists in the game. Even if she is fully adapted to the game and modern cultural thinking, what can she do?She is always a fictional character.I don't know how He Zao will deal with her future in the future. Is it the same as the ending of "Tian Qing", making the protagonist a part of the network system?Really looking forward to it.

Only with a good idea can a good article be written on the basis of this idea. Only articles with highlights, selling points, and characteristics can be successful.He Zao MM is very successful in creativity. Let us know that time-travel or anti-time travel texts that seem to have flooded, as long as you think carefully, you can also write new ideas, which is worth learning from all authors!
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My little opinion on the male supporting roles

By—Leaf Lamp

Some appearances are okay, but I basically exclude the male supporting actors who 'should' have no chance to win the male lead.For example: Scholar Yebai.

The first male supporting role to appear is Ruotian Wuyun.I looked through the comments and found that this guy has a lot of supporters. So far, he is the only male supporting role who has been with the heroine for the longest time.Ruotian's type of boy is quite good, um, the relationship between these two people is probably the so-called: more than friends, not enough lovers.Those who like the kind of ambiguous and inexplicable feelings should be very optimistic about him, and he is also sincerely good to the heroine, with a straightforward personality and no scheming. A little tempted, very promising, but this guy doesn't seem to know how to reject girls.This is very troublesome.

The second male supporting role is Han Tieyi.Regardless of whether he has more supporters than Ruotian, there should be many people who think that this man has a good chance of winning the male lead.I personally don't like Han Tieyi very much, but it's not because of the fact that he sold the heroine.In all fairness, the misunderstanding and conflict between these two people is simply a misunderstanding, and there is no question of who is right and who is wrong.Generally speaking, Xiaoyan’s Huanxi Enemy refers to the relationship between these two people, but how to put it, I just think that Han Tieyi’s sex is not pleasing to the eye, but I think he must have a pretty handsome face under the mask. Haha, and the identity is not simple, just that momentum and those eyes, tsk tsk!But with the personalities of these two people, if they are really together, it will be a toss.

Let's talk about the fourth Wu Qi who appeared on the stage.The forthright and passionate Wu Qi also has certain supporters, but how I see it, I don't think there will be any sparks of romance between him and the heroine... Sweat first.Of course, this is just a personal opinion - besides nothing is impossible, we must firmly believe: JQ is everywhere!Well, I personally think that the relationship between him and the heroine is very natural, that kind of feeling of warmth between brothers and sisters.But the tacit understanding between the two is really good.In fact, I really want to see that after the overall value of the heroine rises, the two of them will practice together in retreat. The experience gained is absolutely nothing to say.

The last one is the 21 string that I personally like.Although only played twice so far... 囧.However, at present, this person's conditions are the best.The vice president of the big guild, has a good voice (although I am not a voice controler), seems to be quite evil-looking, with a good personality and good temperament-but it cannot be ruled out that this guy is hiding a knife in his smile, everyone, don't forget that he looks at the heroine The interested gaze from the back (black-bellied Gong)!Well, there is a saying that goes like this: Curiosity is the beginning of temptation.I am extremely excited to look forward to the ambiguous sparks between the heroine and the 21st string... But the premise is that there must be enough scenes... After counting, this guy hasn't appeared in about thirty chapters... and the heroine treats him , I have no impression at all...But in my heart, I don't want the heroine to get involved in the vortex of any guild. The kind of troubles of fighting for power and profit are definitely more than dangerous for the heroine who has no ability to protect herself.So tangled, so tangled...

Although I am personally optimistic about the 21st string, since I read a time-traveling article, I have deeply and painfully understood a truth: the last one to appear is the big boss!So we need to know that we can't make a conclusion until the end, maybe a ruthless character will be killed halfway... Maybe there will be no male protagonist, after all, the current situation of the heroine is unknown, and I don't even know if she has a body. It all depends on how it develops.Unknowingly said so much nonsense, well, that's about it.Finally, I hope that 21 strings will have more scenes... Hehe.

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Where will sister Qin Zheng go?
——Short Comment on "Selling Equipment Everywhere in the Rivers and Lakes"

By—watermark mm
"Equipment is sold everywhere in the rivers and lakes" I have been chasing since the beginning of pk.I have watched a lot of online games in such a long time, and I can roughly guess the follow-up content after seeing the basic part.In fact, many online game works are not waited for. Often after reading a book, I can't even remember the name of the protagonist, let alone the storyline.If it is still not over, then you can turn off the screen without even thinking about it, and you will not think of collecting or even chasing and waiting for updates every day.Especially in the works of some male writers, the protagonist often has supernatural powers, so he can do whatever he wants.However, the article "Jianghu" gave me a lot of fresh feelings, and it is also one of the few online games that is still in the favorites.

Although it is titled as an online game, it is actually more appropriate to say that it is time travel or "another world".As the killer of the Song Dynasty, Qin Zheng's sister not only crossed over, but the place she crossed to was not the real world. What's more, because of the similarity of the environment (an online game with an ancient background), she didn't even realize that she was A consciousness (maybe a ghost?) that exists in a virtual environment.Such a setting in itself is eye-catching.After that, it developed step by step, and the story unfolded step by step in the game.

What fascinates me most about this article is the elusiveness of the future.Often an online game work, if it is written by a male author, the protagonist will inevitably develop rapidly in it, such as gang wars, artifacts, beauties; Exchange renminbi, and finally make a fortune and retreat to the world.

If it is an article written by a girl, then the heroine will either have a lot of adventures; or she will be lucky; or she will meet countless beauties and make a name for herself in the game with various abilities.

As for He Zao's article, after reading it for so long, I still can't predict Qin Zheng's return.Will she find out that this is a virtual world?Will she find her own way of surviving in such a world?She doesn't even have her own purpose now, she just knows to survive.Improve yourself better.And those potential male No. [-] and No. [-] (I'm more like a cloudless sky, what a good boy~), how will they know and love a soul without a body in reality, and how will the future change?So many possible worries even made me worry about Qin Zheng. I clicked on the update every morning to see how such a strong and lovely girl survived in a seemingly familiar but actually unknown world.

Sister He Zao not only firmly grasps the hearts of the people in terms of plot, but also shrinks freely in plot control.Carefully look at the titles of each chapter, they are actually very ordinary words and sentences, unlike many works that make a big fuss about the titles; and the language description in the text is also straightforward and even slightly humorous.But often you can catch a moment of humor.For example, when I went to Kaixin.com a while ago, when they bought slaves from each other, the men would sell black coal mines, and the women would go to the bar to accompany them.So when I saw Qin Zheng throwing her opponent into the black coal mine, I couldn't help but smile knowingly.In terms of the main line, there are many changes. So far, there are still many possibilities for the development of Qinzheng mm.Being able to have such control actually reflects the author's great intentions in the text.

Where will sister Qin Zheng go?The title of the article is to sell equipment. Now that the equipment is available, how will it be sold in the future?With so many excellent ggs, will our sister Qin have a perfect home in the end?Looking forward to Hezao's next update, let's update it quickly~~ Who knows if you are as anxious as me?
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