Ke Xuezhuo's son-in-law

Chapter 378 Trying to Satisfy the Funder

With the blessing of advanced painting skills, Fujiwara painted from morning to afternoon. Except for going downstairs for lunch at noon, Fujiwara Hoshikai spent the rest of the time revising the drawings.

Finally, after going through a lot of hardships, Fujiwara drew the model and immediately took a photo and sent it to the sponsor.

After clicking the 'Send' button, Fujiwara fell down on the bed behind him with a relaxed expression.

It turns out that this is what it feels like to draw by yourself. In the past, he was always used to using the system to be lazy, and directly sent the manuscripts converted from the system to the editorial department. Over time, he forgot that he had studied storyboards diligently before encountering the system. and composition, and tried to use his own memory to restore the general plot of the comics in his previous life. Unfortunately, his drawing skills were not up to par at the time, and the editors were too lazy to read those masterpieces that would become popular as long as they could restore the general plot.
  What a pity
  Fujiwara got up from the bed and returned to the computer to find that Ooka Momiji had not replied yet. Just when she thought the other person was not in front of the computer but doing other things, it was Fujiwara's cell phone that rang first.

When I picked it up and looked at it, I found that it was Hongye coming over.

"Can't you type something? Why are you calling me all of a sudden?"

Fujiwara held the phone and thought for a while, and finally decided to find an excuse to refuse.

So I typed in the text message box on my mobile phone, "It's not convenient to call now because I have something to do, so just type."

After typing, click Send.

On the other side, Ooka Hongye was a little confused after seeing the text message sent from the other side.

The other party has just sent me a revised manuscript. Is there anything inconvenient about answering the phone?
  She re-read the revised draft sent by Fujiwara Hoshikai and began to review it word by word. Hongye noticed that Fujiwara Xinghai made changes according to the last request, but this time the problem was more about the logic of the plot.

Recently, her eyes were inflamed and sore due to staring at the music card for a long time. The doctor suggested that she take more rest and try not to look at the light sources with radiation, and look at nature more.

(Maybe you don’t want to talk to me.)

Thinking of this, she didn't pay much attention to it. She squinted her eyes slightly, restated the question she had just written down, and sent it by blind typing.

Fujiwara Xinghai saw that the question sent this time was inexplicable, and he immediately suspected that she was here to trouble him.

(Could she be teasing me on purpose?)

He obviously made modifications according to the last request, but this time Hongye's request was completely different, and it was more about the presentation of the picture.

[Can you be more specific? Your one-sided remarks make it difficult for me to handle. 】

Less than a second after the message was sent, the other party replied:
  [Actually, I feel that your painting is much better than last time, but I always feel that something is not quite right. You should answer the phone. I want to talk to you. 】

Fujiwara saw that it was not an option to continue communicating like this, so he answered the phone.

As soon as the phone call came through, he asked, "What is the presentation of the picture you are talking about? Is there any big problem with my painting?"

"No, your painting is very good, but I think it could have been better. Think about a girl who likes singing. Is it unreasonable to quit the school team because her friend suddenly quits? What do you want to say? She is quite emotional and can't distinguish between priorities, which is okay, but from the beginning of the comic, she gives the impression that she values ​​music cards more than anything else. So I personally don't like such an emotional protagonist. , so I think personal emotional changes can be shown in the game."

Hongye spoke for nearly two minutes, but in Fujiwara's opinion, this was actually something that could be explained clearly in one sentence.

In the original plot, due to Taichi's sudden withdrawal from the team, the protagonist Chihaya was confused about her feelings, so she chose to quit the team to calm down. It was just because it was an important time approaching the game, and her sudden departure had an impact on many people. This is a very irrational behavior.

"I probably understand. Is there anything else you need to add? Say it all."

After thinking for a while, Hongye felt that there was nothing else to say. It was just that the main plot of this sentence had gone astray, so he could just revise it from the beginning.

Fujiwara Xinghai felt his head pounding when he heard the word ‘redraw’. As expected, Party A is not easily satisfied.

If he continues to draw, Fujiwara doesn't know when he will be able to finish it.

Hongye on the phone heard Fujiwara sighing, and comforted him, "If you feel irritable, you can wait until you feel better before painting. Anyway, I have plenty of time and I can afford to wait."

"No, I just think what you're doing makes me doubt whether I can draw or not."

If I were to start painting from scratch, I would have to work for several more hours. It is now approaching evening, and if I continue like this, I will definitely be working on it until the evening.

"No, your drawing is pretty good, at least better than 95% of the current artists, but I think it would be much better if the loopholes in the plot could be fixed."

"Okay, then I'll make a draft and prepare it, and I'll send you the new chapter in a few days."

Hongye smiled after hearing this, "Don't be in a hurry, I have plenty of time anyway, but you really don't want to come to the game?"

"What competition?" Fujiwara put away the drawing paper and asked casually. After a long time, he had forgotten about the so-called shogi challenge.

"It's the challenge I told you about last time. Are you planning to give up completely? You've been working hard for this for several years before, so it's not right to give up so easily, right?"

"When is the game?"

"It's this Thursday. The location is by the pond behind Ningxiang Temple. If you feel that it is not safe to compete in the Kyoto circle, you can also apply to change the competition venue. Based on your contribution to the Shogi Association, I think they are Will agree."

When Fujiwara heard about his past contribution, he suddenly felt sick to his stomach.

If those people really looked at their past contributions, they wouldn't have just stood by during the most difficult period.

"I'm not interested in playing chess or anything like that right now, and there's no need for you to worry about my affairs. I'll revise the comics and send them to you when I'm done."

"Okay, it's just that I think it would be a pity for you, like Chihaya, to give up something you once loved so easily because of some emotional things. But since you are ready to give up, then I have nothing to say. I hope you look back on the past Don’t regret it.”

Fujiwara was not afraid that the Ooka family would cause chaos when he went to participate in the competition, but he was unwilling to go because he really couldn't play chess.

His level of shogi is still beyond the beginner level. If he wants to play shogi well, he has to start from scratch. Even if the system can provide a promotion path, if Fujiwara wants to return to the original master level, he will have to spend 15,000 system points to unlock shogi. Grandmaster.

The shogi game itself does not benefit very much and is not worthy of Fujiwara's efforts.

"Okay, I'll wait for your call."

"Row."

After hanging up the phone, Fujiwara tidied up the studio and planned to start drawing the remaining comics in a few days before going downstairs to watch the live broadcast of the baseball game. Unexpectedly, Conan's big face was the first thing he saw.

When the host asked him why he was so smart to find the prisoner, Conan said to the camera without hesitation that he was a descendant of Sherlock Holmes.

"This guy really doesn't know how to restrain himself."

This is a real-time TV broadcast. If anyone who has ever known Conan sees this scene, it will be a disaster.

(End of this chapter)