Xueba’s medical black technology system

Chapter 54 This is different from what I imagined!

Ruan Shishi's idea was very simple. First, she pretended to find Lu Liang and asked him to help her read the review and put forward some suggestions for revision.

In fact, it was to show Lu Liang.

Ruan Shishi thought that the review she had written was perfect, and she could not see anything that needed to be revised.

Thinking of this, Ruan Shishi couldn't help but look forward to it. She could now imagine the surprised look on Lu Liang's face after reading her article.

Ruan Shishi coughed slightly and cleared her voice: "That student Lu?"

Lu Liang, whose train of thought was interrupted, raised his head from the screen and looked at Ruan Shishi with a puzzled look on his face: "What's wrong? What's the matter?"

Ruan Shishi cautiously pointed at Lu Liang's computer screen: "Student Lu, are you also writing a review?"

Ruan Shishi deliberately emphasized the word "ye" very strongly.

But Lu Liang didn't seem to understand the meaning of Ruan Shishi's words. He just nodded: "Yes."

Ruan Shishi blinked: "Student Lu, you seem to have written a good review."

Lu Liang waved his hand: "I wrote it casually. After reading some documents, I feel that it would be a pity not to sort out these studies."

To be more precise, it is a pity not to pick up the source point after it falls on the ground.

Ruan Shishi's face showed surprise, and she then said: "Um, classmate Lu, I just wrote a review. Can you please help me take a look at it and see if there is anything that needs to be revised."

After hearing Ruan Shishi's words, Lu Liang was a little surprised. He didn't expect that Ruan Shishi had also started to get involved in scientific research projects.

Seeing the rare unexpected expression on Lu Liang's face, Ruan Shishi's vanity began to burst.

"Humph, I'm shocked. I didn't expect that you are not the only one who can write a review."

Ruan Shishi raised her chin without any trace, like a proud white swan, looking proud and proud.

However, Lu Liang didn't know what Ruan Shishi was thinking at the moment. He just felt that classmates should help each other.

Since Ruan Shishi seeks her own advice, she must do her best to help Ruan Shishi find out and correct all the problems in the article.

So, Lu Liang looked at the review that Ruan Shishi had just written on the computer screen.

Ruan Shishi, on the other hand, was waiting quietly.

She has now begun to look forward to Lu Liang's expression after reading the entire review.

When Lu Liang praised the review she wrote, how should he answer it?

To be more modest, this review is not that good. I am just learning and my abilities still need to be improved?

To put it more arrogantly, this review is just average. How can I write a better one?

Alas, this is really confusing.

Ruan Shishi felt happy, as sweet as honey she had just eaten.

Lu Liang began to read Ruan Shishi's review.

Ruan Shishi's review title is: "Pharmacological Effects and Research Progress of Chlorogenic Acid"

Lu Liang didn't know much about chlorogenic acid, but he knew that it was a plant polyphenol widely found in natural plants. This ingredient also exists in many Chinese herbal medicines, and plant polyphenols are also part of the current academic research. Big hit.

As long as there are no major flaws in this article, it will not be a problem to be accepted by the journal.

Lu Liang continued to read while thinking about it. He read the summary very quickly and at the same time he also read it very carefully.

Lu Liang read every punctuation mark from beginning to end to make sure he didn't miss a single character.

In about 10 minutes, he had finished reading the review written by Ruan Shishi.

After seeing that Lu Liang had finished reading the entire review, Ruan Shishi looked at Lu Liang eagerly, with expectations written on her face, as if to say, "Praise me, praise me."

But after a while, Ruan Shishi quickly realized that something was wrong.Because she found that Lu Liang fell into silence after reading her review, and then his eyes turned pitiful.

That kind of look is like looking at a terminal cancer patient.

It's late, there's no way to save it, just bury it.

Hey, hey, don’t look at my review the way you would look at cancer patients. I wrote it with all my heart and soul, Ba Ge Ya Lu!

Ruan Shishi couldn't help shouting in her heart.

Lu Liang's reaction was completely different from what Ruan Shishi had imagined, which made Ruan Shishi's heart beat.

She glanced furtively at the summary on the screen.

No, shouldn’t the review you wrote should be perfect?

So, she glanced at Lu Liang with a stern look from the corner of her eye.

Okay, she admitted that her review was slightly flawed.

But it shouldn’t be that serious, right?
She glanced at Lu Liang with a mournful expression from the corner of her eye.

Okay, okay, she admitted that there was a big problem with her review, and this time it will be okay!
Ruan Shishi was a little discouraged for a while.

At this time, Lu Liang finally spoke. He sighed first: "The task is difficult and there are many things to change."

"It shouldn't be that exaggerated. I think it's pretty good."

Ruan Shishi still seemed a little unconvinced, and she murmured cautiously.

Lu Liang turned and glanced at Ruan Shishi: "With the current level of your review, only one magazine will be willing to accept your article."

"Hey, isn't there another one?"

Ruan Shishi's eyes suddenly lit up.

What does this mean? It means that her article still has academic value!
"The Journal of the Hotel Management Technology Institute is published for a fee. Do you think your tutor's academic career is too clean and you plan to add an academic stain to him?" Lu Liang said lightly.

Ruan Shishi shrank her head and did not dare to say anything.

Lu Liang looked at the review and couldn't help but sigh: "Let me see where to start to change it."

Lu Liang withdrew his gaze from Ruan Shishi, and then looked at the review article on the computer screen.

He adjusted the document into review and revision mode, and then began to point out the errors in Ruan Shishi's review one by one.

"The abstract is too complicated. If it is simpler, you will write a review, not a research paper."

"Remove this part. The entire review mainly focuses on inflammation and antioxidants. What do you want to do by adding Alzheimer's disease here?"

"I just thought there might be some connection, so I wrote it down." Ruan Shishi replied weakly.

Lu Liang made an unceremonious comment: "Either add more space, or don't write it at all. It won't work in just one stroke."

"I know, I know, can't I change it? Don't be harsh on me." Ruan Shishi looked a little pitiful.

Lu Liang continued to draw out the scope of modification.

“Here is a diagram of the mechanism by which chlorogenic acid regulates inflammation and antioxidants.”

"New Roman format for English and numbers."

"If you use half-width for this comma, remember to change it to full-width."

"The format of the references is all wrong. You didn't copy and paste it, did you? It's your endnote?"

"In addition, the cited documents should be researched within ten years as much as possible. Journals have requirements for cited documents. 70% of references require research within ten years."

(End of this chapter)