Douluo villain simulator starts by persecuting Qian Renxue

Chapter 77 Sanjiang’s Remarks + Summary at the End of the Volume
I came to inform you that the station is short. This Sunday at noon, Sanjiang is recommended on the homepage.If nothing else, it will be on the shelves next week.

Thanks to the readers for their support, and to the editor Liu Xing for helping me a lot, this book has achieved unexpected results.

I don’t know what to write in my speech. In short, I am quite excited.

Let me take this opportunity to say something from my heart and review the plot of the first volume.

The original intention of writing this book is actually quite simple.

I want to make up for some of the regrets in the original work, and also want to make some money.

Choosing Douluo fans is actually not a good idea.Because this subject has been written badly, and the streets are full of Douluo fans.

But it seems that most Douluo fandoms revolve around the protagonist upgrading and then beating Tang San violently.

It's actually quite fun to watch the plot of Tang San being tortured, because the protagonist's behavior is indeed not very pleasing, but I wanted to write something different.

I think the most regrettable thing in Douluo Continent is that those female characters who were originally outstanding, such as Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, Ning Rongrong, even Gu Yuena, Bo Saixi, etc., were all very individual in the beginning. It's a pity that they all became tool men in the later period.

There is also Bibi Dong. Although many of her behaviors are very outrageous, I think the original ending was not good. Bibi Dong should not have been a love brain until the moment of death.

Especially since the initial designs of these characters were great and they look great in comics and anime, it’s even more of a pity.

I also don’t want to write the protagonist as a humanoid self-propelled cannon, and the female characters will throw themselves into his arms and become a nymphomaniac when they see him.

Therefore, when I was portraying the protagonist, I always avoided describing him too much in appearance. I wanted to reveal more of his inner things and infect the female characters through his personal charm.

At first I thought that once I had an idea, an outline, and what I wanted to write in each volume, there was no reason why I couldn’t keep writing, and it should go smoothly.

But when I actually started writing, I discovered that the process was actually far more difficult than I imagined.

Online novels are serialized, and writing them down will inevitably lead to many readers forgetting the previous chapters, or not knowing much about future development routes.

However, the dullness of transitional chapters can also cause boredom for readers, so a balance must be grasped.

I have to consider the exciting points of each chapter, the rhythm and coherence of the plot, and the personality of each character and their behavior patterns in different situations.

It’s really hard to cover everything.

After all, I am not one of those old authors. My writing skills are still lacking, and my mental endurance is not that strong.

When encountering doubts in comments, I often want to refute or explain, rather than directly banning or deleting comments.So far, the only comments I have banned are those that are irritating, offensive or rhythmic.Now go to the book review section, there are still a lot of criticisms of me there. (It won’t be like this after it is put on the shelves. I only read the comments from readers with fan value. Consumers are God and the parents of food and clothing. Everything else is the same. And I don’t have that much energy. Negative comments really affect my mentality.)
Looking back at the first volume, I wonder if you have noticed that the real core plot is not the events of the original work, or the plot of the protagonist's upgrade, but Qian Renxue.

I think I did a pretty good job in portraying Qian Renxue.

Regarding the darkened second personality, this is considered a second creation, but it is not without logic.

In the original book, when Qian Renxue was taking the divine examination, it was clearly mentioned that there was always a dark side in her heart.In the anime, this was extended. During the divine test, a black Qian Renxue appeared to fight against her.

In fact, I haven't watched many Douluo anime plots, but I have seen this classic scene many times, and it is indeed very touching.

I made a richer setting for it.

At this point in writing this volume, it has basically come to an end. The plot with Qian Renxue is still left to wrap up, and the first volume "The Sorrow of Angels" is finished.

This volume has some good parts and some problematic parts.

Let’s mainly talk about the problems.

There are some differences between the protagonist's behavior in the simulator and in reality.

The reason is mainly due to rhythm.

Looking back now, the biggest problem is that the progress in the simulation was too fast, and the real-life plot was too slow, and there was no balance and coordination.

In the simulator, some plots can be described through a fast-forward perspective. The plot will be more coherent, tight and tight, and the reading experience will be better.However, some plots were not well prepared, and the final emotional climax was not fully realized. In fact, it could have been handled better but it was not done. It was written in a hurry, which is a pity.

When I return to reality later, first of all, the world view and characters are more fixed, which means that there is much less room for me to express myself in writing. The plot advancement is too slow, which exposes many problems.

When planning the plot, we also need to take into account the current age of the protagonist and the resources behind it. There are also many developments in the relationship between the main characters that need to be explained, which further reduces the room for maneuver and makes the writing "tight".

Not only is the timeline tight, but the rhythm is also tight, making it difficult to find a perfect balance.

I will further optimize the details and correct this problem in the subsequent plots.

Then let’s talk about some of the more controversial plots that have occurred.

Some people may not like the popular slap-in-the-face plot, but not all readers are like this. There can be fewer similar plots, but they cannot be absent.

Simulator texts are different from astronomical texts.The balance between simulation and reality needs to be considered. This is a very real issue.

Some people prefer to watch simulations, while others prefer to watch reality.

In general, I think I prefer to watch simulations more.No way, this book starts with simulation, and the title is also there.But as a Douluo fan novel, it is impossible not to write about the reality line. At most, the proportion will be a little lower, which is also a matter of choice.

Some readers think that the first simulation at the beginning is very exciting and the layout is very good. In fact, this is flattering me.

I did write a different layout outline for each simulation, but that wasn't the main purpose.

I write this kind of plot because I want to reveal the characteristics of each character, make these characters' personalities more distinct, and rationalize their future changes, just like Qian Renxue in the first volume.

Doubts are always inevitable.

This novel has less than 20 words so far, and there are many things that have been talked about.

The first big beat was the ending in the simulation. At that time, I wrote a separate chapter to explain it. This will not be the case in the future. I will leave the questions until the end of the volume.

The second one is about the gambling fight with Tang San.

I still hope that people will not confuse the second set of fan fiction with the original work.

Tang Hao is weak, irresponsible, disrespectful of martial arts, and bullies the weak. I agree with all these.But you can't think of him as a murderer, a madman.No matter how shameless Tang Hao is, he is not an evil soul master.No matter how crazy he was, he would never expose himself and Tang San for such a small thing.

When it comes to the weak, that's how we treat the Wuhundian camp. We won't kill other weak ones, let alone a seven-year-old kid.As for the Zhao Wuji incident in the original work, not to mention that Zhao Wuji and Tang San were not contemporaries. In the end, Tang Hao didn't kill Zhao Wuji, right?

In terms of characterization, I have a rough portrait of all the main characters. If you don't agree, I don't have anything better to do.

This is what fanfiction is like. As a secondary creation, different people must have different understandings of characters and plots, so we can only seek common ground while reserving differences.

Then there is Ning Rongrong’s line. The handling of this aspect is indeed a bit inappropriate, and the protagonist’s initial words are somewhat contradictory.

My original intention was to make the relationship between the two people change from cold to warm, which is also very suitable to be written as Ning Rongrong's emotional line.

My idea at the time was very simple, and I explained it in the article. The protagonist had never spoken to the opposite sex of the same age before. This mentality led to a faux pas. After all, adults look at children differently from their peers.

However, poor handling of the process and insufficient writing power resulted in sensory deviations.

Moreover, the pace of online writing is fast now, and everyone is in a state of catching up on updates. If you don’t read it coherently, your experience will definitely not be as good as expected.

Not to mention whether the logic is smooth, it does affect the reading experience, I'm sorry.

There is also the plot of delivering medicine at the back.

This plot is actually quite transitional in nature, but it had to be written.

This involves the relationships between many characters and the foreshadowing of the rest of the story.

I chose a more compromise method, testing it first, and then borrowing Ye Lingling's hand to speed up the process. In hindsight, I felt a little anxious. Maybe it would be better to let the protagonist get along with a few people in the team for a few days before coming up with ideas.

There is also the protagonist’s real-life behavior pattern. Some people think it is too reckless, while others think it is too stubborn.

It may be that there was not enough preparation or my expression was not clear enough or my writing was too obscure, which caused some readers to misunderstand.

After the protagonist comes out of the mountain, he comes into contact with people he is sure of, such as Ning Fengzhi, who is utilitarian and likes to win over talents, or Dugu Bo, who values ​​​​commitment and loyalty and has fully understood it in the simulation, and people like Lan Dian. He consciously avoided the Tyrannosaurus Sect (which could have been contacted through Yu Tianheng), the Wuhun Temple, or Xue Beng and Xue Qinghe whose temperaments had changed.

As a result, people with both views were probably a little unhappy?

I am a new author, so I can only summarize a lot and work hard to improve in the future.

For some foreshadowings, I will try my best to write them more clearly, instead of blindly pursuing the so-called rhythm.

At the same time, more balanced arrangements will be made in terms of entertainment.Some plots will not be too long, and some plots will not appear a bit rushed.

Ultimately, I still lack experience, and this will change in the second volume.

In the future, try to revise the outline as much as possible and write more exciting articles.

Thanks again to the readers who are willing to continue to support me, and I kowtow to you all!

As for those who don’t like this book, there is no need to waste time on this book.

Reading novels is meant to be relaxing, so why worry about it too much and make yourself unhappy.There are many novels that are good starting points. There are more than a dozen Sanjiang recommended every week, and there are a lot of Douluo fan novels. There are many choices for everyone, so don’t criticize me here.Some people are really unnecessary. If they don't like reading it, they just change it. They keep chasing after you to find faults, swipe the screen to ban you, and then change it to a smaller one. Why bother?

It's okay to give opinions on details. I will also refer to those that make sense. Those who are crimson reading or leading the rhythm really forget it.

And it is impossible for me to change the outline and the main plot line. There are too many authors who have changed it and the result is a direct collapse.

In addition, spoilers ahead of time, in about ten chapters this volume will end, and there will be no misunderstanding between Su Cheng and Qian Renxue.

Volume [-]: Empress Xingluo, core characters: Zhu Zhuqing and Qian Renxue.

(End of this chapter)