That year the flowers bloomed 1981

Chapter 29 Angry Wen Leyu

Chapter 29 Angry Wen Leyu
Li Ye knew that the little spy at his desk was peeking at his writing, but he had no intention of stopping him.
After all, he still needs to write this novel for a long time, and he can't hide Wen Leyu who is so close at hand.

Besides, why should Xiaonizi, who is very satisfied with this girl, hide it?
It's too confusing and a waste of energy.

With all that energy, it would be better to eliminate the era differences in "Latent" cleanly and meticulously, so as not to cause unnecessary trouble.

This is 81 years before the Internet, and a lot of historical knowledge that is commonplace in later generations should not appear to a 19-year-old boy in a small northern town.

For example, the identity of Yu Zecheng, an important character in the novel.

Yu Zecheng was born in the Qingpu special training class in the 26th year of the Republic of China. He later joined the Rebellion Section of the Chongqing Military Tong Operation Division, and was later transferred to the Chief of the Confidential Section of the Jincheng Secrecy Bureau.

Just the names of these three units are not knowledge points that ordinary people in the 80s should know.

If Li Ye copied all the details from the "Latent" TV series, it would definitely arouse a great desire among readers to read, but at the same time, it would also arouse the suspicion of many people.

How do you know so clearly?

You said you have a grandfather who fought in the war?Your grandpa is a blind old man, but he still understands this?

Therefore, Li Ye must blur this type of knowledge points without affecting the readers' reading experience, which is still a certain challenge.

【Pa~】

[The sound of gunfire aroused Yu Zecheng's vigilance. At this time, Zhang Mingyi, the telecommunications interception officer responsible for replacing him, appeared and was shot in the back.]

Li Ye had already written about the plot of the Gao Dynasty in Chapter 1, and while he was writing rapidly, his elbow was lightly touched by his deskmate Wen Leyu.

A writer hates being disturbed when he is describing the plot coherently, but who would let him be a little mute?You can't be angry!

Li Ye turned to look at Wen Leyu and found that her speaking eyes were full of seriousness.

A note was pushed over and it read: "Is this Yu Zecheng the protagonist of the novel? If so, do you know it will bring you big trouble?"

The little girl's consciousness is quite high.

Li Ye is very happy. A girl really considers you. This kind of sincerity is very rare.

Of course, Li Ye is more aware than Wen Leyu in this regard.

He is a person who has seen the masters of later generations. Not to mention this kind of stance issue, Li Ye will also distinguish in detail certain descriptions in the novel.

For example, Director Dai, who appeared in the first episode of the TV series, has a very strong aura. After all, he is a boss!You must have the spirit of a bastard.

But now if Li Ye describes his personal aura in the novel, then the novel will not be reviewed, and the trouble will not be small.
And when it comes to Zuo Lan's appearance, he must use thick strokes of pen and ink to fully and thoroughly bring out the vitality and positivity of the youth of the new era.

This is in line with the values ​​of the times, and it’s business writing!It’s not easy or shabby to have to balance both making money and art.

Seeing the worry in Wen Leyu's eyes, Li Ye wrote on the paper: "No, justice will definitely defeat evil."

Wen Leyu read Li Ye's handwriting and frowned slightly at him. After a few seconds, she suddenly wrote on the paper: "This Yu Zecheng is the underground D, isn't he?"

Little sister, do you want me to spoil it?

Li Ye wrote on the paper: "The level of reading experience of a novel depends on whether the uncertainty of the plot is strong enough, so I can't tell you the answer."

Wen Leyu blinked his eyes, pouted his mouth, turned his head and stopped looking at Li Ye. He even slipped to the other end of the bench and distanced himself from Li Ye.

She was angry, visibly angry.

The angry little beauty was so interesting. Li Ye secretly sighed: "It's not that I don't have enough concentration, it's actually that the beauty is too alluring."

Li Ye did not deliberately coax Wen Leyu. He believed that a good girl could regulate bad emotions by herself.

Sure enough, after Li Ye didn't turn around to write for a while, an angry Wen Leyu secretly "slipped" back from the other end of the stool.

It's just that she didn't crane her neck to peek at Li Ye's novel, and she kept her little temper and dignity.

Li Ye picked up a few pages of letter paper that he had written, pushed it in front of her, and said, "Help me, please proofread the manuscript for me and make a copy. You will need it when submitting the manuscript."

Wen Leyu was a little caught off guard, but she quickly took it. The smile on her lips showed the happiness in her heart at this moment.

Li Ye didn't tell him the "answer". She thought that Li Ye didn't believe her as a friend. But now that Li Ye asked her to proofread the manuscript, wasn't she just thinking nonsense?
Proofreading is to find typos and improper wording in the article. This is quite a test of Chinese language skills.Wen Leyu was actually better at Chinese than Li Ye, and Li Ye was better at taking exams, but Wen Leyu's range of research and writing accumulation really surprised Li Ye.

It seems that over the years, not only Teacher Ke has put great effort into Wen Leyu's education, but the little girl is also a good child who loves to learn.

But what Li Ye didn't know was that Wen Leyu, the bully in primary school, quickly fell in love with Li Ye's admiration.

After she took Li Ye's first draft and stationery, she began to proofread and copy it carefully. However, before she could finish copying a page, she forgot about her serious work and fell deeply into the plot of the novel.

[Zhang Mingyi fell to the ground. The gunshot wounds and blood stains on his back were shocking. However, Yu Zechengdu did not look at him again. Instead, he quickly retreated to the blind corner on the right side of the door. He drew his gun and aimed forward with the flat end of his curved arm.
This gun-holding posture can flexibly change the shooting angle, and it is not easy to be shot down by a surprise attack.]

Wen Leyu had never seen this novel novel description technique. She just read the words on paper and imagined a vigilant dog agent in her mind. When faced with sudden danger, she made a Sharp gun tactics.

In 81, there were already pirated martial arts novels from Hong Kong Island on the market.

But whether it is a master like Jin Guliang or more ordinary novel writers, their writing techniques are very different from the high-quality online articles 40 years later.

Jin Guliang's literary skills are unparalleled, and their classic masterpieces can leave readers with endless aftertaste.

High-quality online articles may not have such a profound background, but they are better because of their novel plots and wide-ranging imagination.

High-quality online articles may be looked down upon by authentic martial arts, but if authentic martial arts are placed on an online article website, they will not be adapted to the local environment. (The martial arts channel at a certain point is really cold.)
Wen Leyu read quickly and quickly finished three pages of letter paper. Then she went back and read it again.

After reading it again, she habitually touched Li Ye with her elbow and asked excitedly: "Li Ye, have you ever masturbated? How do you write so skillfully?"

Well, I am very skilled. As long as the teacher I like releases a new episode, he must be skilled in it.

"Ahem, my grandfather once killed dozens of enemies, so I heard some stories from him when I was a child."

Li Ye quickly spoke to cover up, took a deep breath at the same time, and silently recited "color is emptiness, emptiness is color", and finally regained his composure.

This body is so kind and loyal, Xiaochu has a G, it’s hard to even think about it.

Wen Leyu was also a pure girl and did not notice Li Ye's abnormal reaction at all. She even got closer and asked Li Ye: "Will there be any plot like this in the future?"

Li Yedao: "Not necessarily, but there are definitely similar plots."

Since Li Ye wrote this novel and weakened some sensitive information and background, he had to make up for it in other aspects.

So he decided to highlight the tactics and reasoning in the field of special warfare. Later spy war novels emerged one after another, and a lot of common sense reasoning knowledge in them is absolutely amazing in this era.

For example, in the spy novel Big Brother Ivy, there was a plot about catching Japanese spies.

Ning Yan Wang has determined that the other party is a woman and found out that the other party made a public phone call in the grocery store.

But the grocer could not describe the woman's physical features.

King Ning Yan took advantage of women's comparison mentality and asked the proprietress of the grocery store.

Women look at women from a different perspective than men. Men look at XXX, while women look at external features such as clothes, hairstyle, perfume, shoes, etc.

Sure enough, the proprietress gave an accurate description of the woman's clothes, makeup, and hairstyle, and also pointed out that the fabric of the flag the woman wore was very expensive and other features.

So Ning Yan Wang deduced the precise characteristics of the target and found the hidden spy among the VIP customers of the high-end clothing store.

This kind of reasoning plot can arouse applause even among readers 40 years later, let alone 81?
Take a look at the spy movies of today. The hidden radio station in a popsicle box can cause people to gasp in surprise, so it would be strange that readers would not be fascinated by the meticulous reasoning, filling of pitfalls, and out-of-context hooks in later generations.

Wen Leyu was fascinated by Li Ye, and she unknowingly stuck to Li Ye's side.
Watching Li Ye slowly writing the novel word for word, anxious Xiao Nizi wanted to open his mind and read the subsequent plot to the end.

But when Li Ye looked over and asked her questions, Wen Leyu woke up and realized that his work was not finished yet.

"Have you finished copying it? Show it to me!"

"What? I'll copy it right away."

 Thanks to book friend 20170806222249766 for the reward, book friend "Colorblindness Running a Red Light" for the reward, book friend "Pindukou" for the reward, thank you brothers!

  
 
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