Rebirth: Rewriting Youth

Solicitation of opinions on a single chapter
I felt a bit emo today, and it took me two hours to write more than 1000 words.

I feel like I am not very satisfied with what I have written.

So I decided to take a day off!
In addition:

Asking for some advice from foster parents!
Regarding the characters, plot, etc., do you think my writing is too detailed?Maybe which plots could be written less?Can you guys give me some more advice?grateful!
Many friends have mentioned to me the problem that the writing style is too bland and watery.Regarding this, I have indeed thought about it and tried it, but it seems to be quite difficult to change.Maybe from the beginning, I wanted to write a slightly normal rebirth novel that would be more realistic and reasonable, but I ignored a lot of the sense of satisfaction.

My level is still not good enough, the time itself is relatively tight, and many characters are not designed well enough, nor are they well described.It has been 162 days since this book was written. To be honest, the time span is indeed too long, which is also difficult for readers.My own memory is not very good. I don’t remember many of the previous plots. I had to look forward several times before I remembered what I had written.

Okay, this is some nonsense. Anyone who can read this book here must be the true stepfather.

Really, thank you. Without your support, I would have given up long ago.

To be honest, I am a person who is easily influenced by others, so I have lived in vain for so many years and still achieved nothing.

To be honest, the performance of this book is still half-dead.The beginning of the article was quite hasty. I originally planned to write 2000 words a day as a hobby.So I didn’t save anything, and I really regret it now.
Moreover, more and more people are reading the book, and there are more and more comments, with mixed reviews. I am also a little lost in myself, and sometimes I really don’t know how to write.

Now really, I just want to finish writing this book.Regarding several female characters, according to Li, some readers have already seen the signs that they will break up in the later stage. If everyone feels that they are giving away the female characters, they can abandon the book at this point.But I still want to thank you for your support!

Then the main content of the female characters later will mainly focus on Han and Xu, and individual female characters will also be inserted in the middle.

I will start my own business in the second semester of my freshman year, half of it will be love and half career, and I will mainly write about my career later on.

That's the rough outline.

Hmm. Please give me some suggestions. I still hope to hear your suggestions. Can you be more enthusiastic?
If there is no suggestion, I can only bite the bullet and write it myself. At least finish it.
Thank you all, I'm really sorry, I broke my promise again after two updates, I'm sorry!
Thank you, old friends!please forgive!

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