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Chapter 85 Today is very lively~

Chapter 85 Today is very lively~
I have read all the posts in the book review area.Read all the posts that are questioning, impulsive, irrational, supportive, appreciative, and understanding.
I think I should explain that first of all, I thought about this plot before writing it, but I still wrote it.
Su Ming is a 16-year-old boy. Compared with his grandfather, the age difference between them is more than half a lifetime.
There is a saying that young people should not read Three Kingdoms, and old people should not read Water Margin. It means that people of different ages have different ways of doing things.
Grandpa was very wise. He wanted to protect Su Ming, and his thoughts became more rational. With that sentence, he kept the green hills and didn't have to worry about running out of firewood.He knew whether the tribe was in a life-or-death crisis, so why not let Su Ming go? He left in a hurry, because he knew that leaving might be the life and death of the tribe. He left behind Su Ming and a follow-up.
This makes sense, as any elder would do the same.But don't forget how old Grandpa is.
And Su Ming, at the age of 16, it's not that he doesn't understand all this, but the more he understands, the more he wants to go back. He is impulsive, because I think a 16-year-old child, especially in a tribal background, what he desires is not Live alone, but live and die with the tribe!
His power is limited, but sometimes, especially in a tribe, if everyone thinks so and wants to keep the green hills without worrying about having no firewood, then the tribe will have disintegrated before the enemy comes.
When their homeland faced war, some people kept telling themselves to endure it and seek revenge later, and then hid themselves or left their hometown. For example, Wang Lin never returned to the Teng family to seek revenge before Nascent Soul.
But some people are stupid and irrational, but they are cute because their thoughts are not complicated. It’s not that they don’t understand tolerance, but they are unwilling. He wants to protect his home, even if it means his life.Compared with coming back for revenge in the future, what he cares more about is cherishing the present and dying with his homeland. Even if he eventually faces irreversible death, he still has to smile and shout, "Don't leave me alone on the road to hell!"
You may disagree with Su Ming, or you may ridicule me for not being able to write, but please do not criticize or question the no-turns-back expressed in this episode.
As for the lack of foreshadowing, I think it’s just right. The first 20 words are enough.
But I admit that one thing is indeed wrong, that is, in terms of description, some words are used too much in this chapter, which has the opposite effect. The level is limited and needs to be improved.
(End of this chapter)

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