my reality with some autobiography

Chapter 6, danger!push-up raid
"It's a golden chapter. It's very popular. It's really popular now!"

In the process of inspection.

Chen Xuan couldn't help but praise his talent.

Putting aside logical issues, he felt that he gave each character a reasonably reasonable motivation for appearing.

The motive of the triangular-eyed trio choking the protagonist is out of jealousy.

The reason why the four instructors were dissatisfied was out of self-esteem.

The girl with heavy makeup blocked the road out of inferiority complex.

As for the protagonist's motivation, it is a subconscious behavior to save Tang Moxi.

The result was a series of ridicules.

Therefore, the main line fitness in the early stage is reasonably squeezed into the field of vision.

As soon as the readers read it, they will understand what the novel is about, and they will not be left in the dark.

However, there are still many shortcomings.

For example:

1. The smell is too strong.

"Mi Chong is harmless. I'm good at writing Wei Chong, so I just want to start the chapter a bit bold. People who like my kind of writing can understand at a glance that what I write is to their liking."

Chen Xuan thought about it and decided not to change it.

Don't change it and lose your train of thought.

2. There are too many characters.

"Why the hell are there so many 1?"

Chen Xuan counted.

The protagonist, the four instructors, the girl with heavy makeup, the three people with triangular eyes, the obese girl Tang Moxi, the heroine who appeared before the chapter broke, and the protagonist's fans
There are simply too many to count.

For a moment, he had a trance-like delusion.

"How could I make such a stupid mistake? There are so many people, do readers remember who they are?"

Fortunately, after some careful review.

Chen Xuan reluctantly convinced himself, "It should be fine. Most of them are background panels. Strictly speaking, there are only six people: the protagonist, the triangle eyes, the instructor, Tang Moxi, the girl with heavy makeup, and the heroine."

"Although there are still many, everyone has their own characteristics, so just give it a try."

"Emmm instructors can leave the field reasonably when the military training is over."

"It doesn't matter that the heroine who appeared before the break is written about in the rest of the text."

But looking at the remaining characters, Chen Xuan had a headache.

Because if these people don’t appear in the rest of the article.

Then there are so many sarcastic words in Chapter 1, which seems redundant and complicated.

Although readers cannot explain clearly when reading, they will feel that there is a sense of separation between the previous text and the following text.

Just like the villain with triangle eyes.

If only after the little slap in the face in the first three chapters, he wouldn't have appeared.

Readers will feel that it is not smooth when reading, and the sense of harvest is not enough:

That's it?

What about people with triangular eyes?
Damn it, I took off my pants and he disappeared?

Think about it, how many people can resist looking for the protagonist next door?
But Chen Xuan wrote this book just on a whim.

Arrangement, the two roles of triangular eyes and heavy makeup girl.

Just because:
One of his roommates has triangular eyes.

During military training, the girl standing in front of her was a girl with heavy makeup.

Just to enhance the atmosphere, he randomly selected the physical features that impressed him. The two people in reality were almost completely different from what he wrote.

How did this make Chen Xuan so smooth that he always positioned these two characters as villains?
There was no clear plot line in his mind.

and so.

I have to create another word document.

Da da da.
Start the outline and smooth out your ideas!

Main line 1, done in two words, upgrade.

Main plot 2, the female protagonist and the male protagonist are chasing each other.

Well, one is missing, so let’s add two more tentative heroines.

Main plot 3, I haven’t thought about it well.

The protagonist's character, haha, I am.

The protagonist’s cheat settings are set by opening your own panel and copying them.

Hostess setting, emmm, the senior sister in the infirmary in the morning, it is your honor to fall in love with me.

Main supporting roles and characters in the early stage:
The roommate with the triangular eyes is probably named Jiang Yao. He is so quiet and quiet, and I can’t find any villain inspiration in him.

"How about giving him the status of a rich second generation?"

"Anyway, in this kind of story, a rich second-generation villain is indispensable. It would be troublesome to reinvent a new character, so let's just use him."

"As for girls with heavy makeup, I'll check out the rankings on female channels later and copy the settings of some vicious female supporting characters."

"We must have these two people appear repeatedly and be slapped in the face by the protagonist repeatedly. From despising the protagonist for being slapped in the face to being in awe of the protagonist, and even worshiping the protagonist."

"As for Tang Moxi"

Chen Xuan paused, and a trace of hesitation flashed in his heart, whether to use this name for the fat girl.

But on second thought.

This girl is so disgusting. She forced him to borrow 2000 yuan in royalties before graduation and she still hasn't paid him back even after two months.

It made him embarrassed to ask, and he was really in a tight situation if he didn't ask.

"I'm going to write you off as a fat man, and I'm going to make you fat to death!"

"Anyway, you were a fat guy when you were a kid."

...

Soon, the rough outline was completed.

Without saying a word, I slightly modified the background of the characters, immediately packaged the document, and mailed it to the editor of an unknown website who only needed 2000 words and one chapter for submission.

There is no other reason.

Just to receive one:
[Hello author, I have received and read your work. After careful evaluation, we believe that your work has met the contract standards and can be signed.

If you are willing to open a book in XX, please contact me on qq (234567XXXX) in order to communicate with the subsequent signing of the contract...]

Because this will make him feel that he is awesome.

Look, I can pass whatever I write.

So the motivation came to code words.

What?Why not sign a contract?

Did you also give a high price guarantee?
Ha ha.

You will find that you have been coding hard for a month, and when you submit the manuscript and expect the royalties to arrive, you will see: XX has turned on friend verification, and you are not him (her) yet...
So the question is, why does Chen Xuan know so much?

huh huh...

Sure enough, it took less than 2 minutes.

Chen Xuan even suspected that the editor did not read his content at all and received an approved reply.

Hey!
Aren’t these hands itchy?
This life is endless, will the coding stop?
Chen Xuan coded out hundreds of words in Chapter 2 in an instant, and was just about to finish the first three chapters in one go...

"I'm so exhausted, really."

"When I think about the two weeks of military training, I feel depressed."

"Stop complaining and save your energy. I heard that the day after tomorrow is for physical training. It won't be too late for you to complain about being tired."

"I'll go. Is there any physical training?"

"That's not true. Jump frogs, push-ups, and running for several kilometers, each of them can torture people to death."

"Damn, I remembered, military training really does have these things, it's so miserable."

I heard the news that my roommate had returned from military training.

Chen Xuan subconsciously exited the Documents APP, switched to the Moyin short video, and pretended to have been watching it.

But they can't let them find out that he writes online articles, otherwise he will be embarrassed to death.

only…

I guess, can I train physically the day after tomorrow?
Chen Xuan suddenly raised his head and looked at his triangular-eyed roommate who opened the door. His voice was a little trembling, "Jiang Yao, do you know what kind of training you can do in acquired physical training?"

"It seems like push-ups."

Rumble!
It was like a bolt from the blue.

Chen Xuan's entire mind was filled with scenes of his own belly, inseparable from the floor.

humming...

(End of this chapter)