Indifferent Ome actually always has bad intentions towards me

Chapter 84
After hearing Su Jinghan's words, Lin Yuan secretly said, "Sure enough."

He knew that Su Jinghan would not use this hand-brewed coffee set, otherwise Su Jinghan would not throw it aside in disgust.

"I'll give it to you." Su Jinghan said.

It was obviously a gift from a novel website, but Su Jinghan didn't seem to care.

"I don't want it." After hearing Su Jinghan's words, Lin Yuan refused directly.

As childhood sweethearts, Lin Yuan knew very well what Su Jinghan was thinking.

On the surface, it comes with a hand-brewed coffee set.In fact, I want him to be a tool man.After letting him learn how to make hand-brewed coffee, he made coffee for her to drink.

"I don't have time to mess with this recently." Lin Yuan said.

Before doing this, Lin Yuan would have most likely accepted it.

But not recently.He didn't have time for this.He had other unfinished business.

"Do you want to work overtime?"

Su Jinghan was slightly surprised by Lin Yuan's refusal.Then he slowly asked.

"No." Lin Yuan shook his head.

Part-time jobs have strict working hour limits.Even if Lin Yuan wants to work overtime, I'm afraid the store manager is unlikely to let him.

"The novel is stuck?"

"No."

There is no Cavan situation in the novel at all.Updated every day and written so fast.

Others just think that they can't keep up with the typing speed.As for Lin Yuan, his typing speed could not keep up with the speed of his thoughts.

That's why Kavin does not exist on Lin Yuan's side.It only happens when you don’t have time to write.

"The game script is stuck?"

After meeting Lin Yuan and denying the first two, Su Jinghan already knew the answer.That's the problem with the game script.

After all, Lin Yuan has been doing these three things recently besides being with him.

"more or less."

The game script is, to put it mildly, stuck.To put it bluntly, it's a bit of a dead end.

Lin Yuan wrote a lot of manuscripts.But not to mention satisfying other people, not even Lin Yuan himself was satisfied.This is very uncomfortable.

"I feel like you're a little anxious."

"It's not that I'm anxious. I just don't want to be held back."

Liangzai is led by a big boss, and he must be making steady progress every day.

But I got stuck on my side.And it's not just stuck for one day, it's been stuck for several days.

He would try to write a lot every day, and he would think a lot when he lay in bed with his eyes closed at night, but without making any progress.

"so."

After hearing what Lin Yuan said, Su Jinghan turned off the TV and looked at Lin Yuan.He stretched out his hand towards Lin Yuan.

"?"

"Send it to me." Su Jinghan said.Seeing that Lin Yuan's face was still a little confused, Su Jinghan continued to explain angrily: "Didn't I take your money last time?"

After Su Jinghan said this, Lin Yuan remembered it.I also understand why he is so poor now.

He transferred all the money spent on renting a house last time to Su Jinghan.

At that time, Su Jinghan said that she wanted to teach him some techniques for writing novels.

Hmm. I just don’t know what the time limit is for teaching...

At that time, Su Jinghan became a riddler, but Lin Yuan didn't understand what it meant.

"Does the script count?"

"Don't want to?"

"No, no, no. Then I must be willing."

A great opportunity was right in front of him, and Lin Yuan naturally couldn't let it go.He just sent the script he had written before to Su Jinghan.

After receiving the script, Su Jinghan lowered her head and read it.Soon after, he frowned.

Probably because I already knew that I couldn't write well, I frowned when I saw Su Jinghan.Lin Yuanfei did not have any uncomfortable emotions.Even a little lucky.

Liang Zai has a big boss to teach him.

It’s not bad here either!
"What are you laughing at?"

Su Jinghan looked up, roughly sensing Lin Yuan's emotions. "Cough. It's nothing." Lin Yuan coughed dryly and shook his head as his emotions were discovered.

I heard Lin Yuan say this.Su Jinghan lowered her head and continued to look.

Soon after, she raised her head, looked at Lin Yuan, and spoke calmly.

"Lin Yuan."

"what?"

"I feel very optimistic. The script is so poorly written. I can still laugh."

"..."

That customary venomous tongue.Lin Yuan has long been used to it.

But this rhetoric doesn’t feel like childhood sweethearts.

More like a female teacher?

I imagined Su Jinghan wearing a teacher's uniform, wearing glasses, and holding a ruler.Surprisingly majestic.

Ok……

"Are you listening?"

Seeing that Lin Yuan was obviously distracted, Su Jinghan increased her voice.

This Lin Yuan actually dared to be distracted.She was talking very seriously.

"Teacher Su, please tell me."

"Master Su"

Su Jinghan was stunned by Lin Yuan's name.

Although she had already added the thin and see-through women's white shirt, black hip-hugging skirt, thin black stockings, red high heels, and teacher glasses to her shopping cart.

But role playing or something.She decided to do it after confirming the relationship.

Now is the time!

What if aunt comes back suddenly?
Just like that, Su Jinghan spoke.

"Seriously."

"Yes."

Worried that Su Jinghan would be angry, she chose not to continue watching, so Lin Yuan showed a serious expression on his face.

"The problem with the script is very simple and direct. The heroine's design is too rigid."

Seeing serious emotions on Lin Yuan's face, Su Jinghan also came back from the interruption, sorted out her thoughts just now, and then spoke.

She read it all.This heroine is not alive at all.The so-called character and personality are not shown through words and actions.Rather, it is done through labeling.

This way, it’s okay to write passerby characters.But if it is used to write a heroine and it is a single heroine, then forget it.

With all due respect to this kind of work, she cannot appreciate it.I don't think many other people appreciate it either.

"That's what other people say."

"The one who invited you to write the game script?"

"Ah."

After answering, Lin Yuan fell into deep thought.

Since Su Jinghan, a senior author, and Ding Liang, a senior reader, both said so.That's for sure.

but
how should I solve this?
"There are two ways to solve the problem." As if she could read minds, Su Jinghan spoke when she saw Lin Yuan's thoughtful expression.

"Which two ways?"

"The first way is more time-consuming. That is to continue polishing. As long as it is polished again and again, it will always be better than now." Su Jinghan said.

Regardless of the fact that some authors have written many books, in fact the contents of so many books are similar.

But why are the results getting better?
Because in the process of writing a book, my writing level is also growing.And as you write more often, you will become more proficient in handling small details.

Lin Yuan can't write the white-haired lolita now.But as long as he keeps writing this role or similar roles, he can still make progress.

It just takes more time, and the progress you make depends entirely on your understanding.

"What about the second one?"

"Change the heroine."

(End of this chapter)