back to being a teacher

Chapter 94

"Learn to break chapters, how to break them, how to break them, it's all knowledge!"

"For example, when my plot comes to an end, the protagonist is about to reveal the true identity of the murderer, and even the audience knows who the murderer is, but I don't write, I just play, eh, I will write some more irrelevant words, and finally let the protagonist Scream, you are the murderer!"

"For another example, the protagonist is watching TV in the room, and suddenly his head suddenly rises, with a very frightened expression..."

"At this time, what is the effect of breaking the chapter? Breaking the chapter will arouse the reader's curiosity and make the reader want to know what will happen next!"

"For example..."

Fang Bai talked about several out-of-context applications in succession.

This made Li Guangguang widen his eyes and look at his teacher in disbelief.

"Old...teacher, will you get beaten if you do this?"

"What are you afraid of? They can also follow the network cable to beat you!"

Fang Bai raised his eyebrows at Li Guangguang and said proudly.

Li Shiguang: "..."

"This is the second point, fragments. If fragments are used well, money will be indispensable!"

Fang Bai continued.

"Teacher, is this the second element?"

"It doesn't count!"

"What's the second element?"

"The second element is called anticipation!"

"A sense of anticipation?"

Li Guangguang frowned again.

"What is a sense of anticipation? To put it bluntly, it is the use of the protagonist's golden finger in the novel!" Fang Bai said solemnly.

"Um...what is golden finger?" Li Guangguang scratched his head.

"You don't even know about cheats?" Now it was Fang Bai's turn to be surprised, but he continued, "This cheat is similar to cheating in games!"

"Cheating?" Li Shiguang was taken aback for a moment.

"Of course, if the protagonist doesn't have any cheats, can he still be called the protagonist?"

Fang Bai said matter-of-factly.

"Why is Niu San in "Bullfighting Continent" better than others? Isn't it because he has his own internal and martial arts skills, plus the production of hidden weapons? Aren't these plug-ins?"

"You remember, the protagonist of every novel needs a cheat, but what this cheat is has to be set by the author himself, but be sure not to write it too outrageously. It is best if the cheat is the same as the protagonist, it will be slow. It grows slowly. Only in this way will readers have a sense of expectation..."

"Okay, thank you, teacher!" Li Guangguang wrote all the important points on the paper. He wanted to go back and think about what the teacher said.

“The last thing is, it’s fun!”

“What is cool is that it satisfies readers’ expectations and makes them feel happy, thus making them think your book is good-looking!”

"This also involves a key method of creating cool points, there are three: take first and then give, first die and then live, first suppress and then raise!"

"To make it easier to understand, I first tell the readers that the following plot should not be able to achieve the purpose based on the protagonist's ability. For example, there is a secret realm in a fantasy novel, which is full of difficulties. Then I tell the readers through dialogue that highlights the supporting characters. Reader, basically no one can complete this secret realm!"

Fang's white paper talks clearly and logically.

Don't ask him why he knows this...

Later generations have read so many novels. As the saying goes, if you haven't eaten pork, you haven't seen a pig run?

These routines have been rotten in later generations, and there are even many people who make these commentary videos exclusively...

"So basically no one has finished it, so how can the protagonist still finish it?"

Li Guangguang was a little confused.

"Look, did you just bring it in?"

Fang Bai patted Li Guangguang's shoulder.

"So next we have to trick the protagonist!"

"Why is the protagonist called the protagonist? Isn't it because the author is standing behind him!"

"Next, I will let the protagonist cheat, and then use some special means to pass through the secret realm, and then have the supporting character yell a few words 'It's so scary'!"

"Think about it, wouldn't it be nice to have this?!"

Fang Bai pretended to be serious.

"Hiss..." Li Shiguang couldn't help but take a breath after hearing this.

According to what Teacher Fang said...

A scene emerged in Li Guangguang's mind. A young man in black robe passed through the secret realm in front of countless powerful people. Countless sidekicks below shouted: "This is impossible!" "This person is so terrifying!".

Tsk tsk tsk, wouldn't it be refreshing? !
I feel excited just thinking about it!

"Thank you teacher for the pointer!"

Li Guangguang bowed to Fang Bai respectfully.

"Small things, small things!"

Fang Bai smiled and touched his chin. He was looking forward to it, looking forward to what Li Shiguang would look like!

When the time comes, I will teach Li Guangguang a few words: "30 years from Hedong to 30 years from Hexi, don't bully young people into poverty!" "When the yin and yang reverse, I will dye the sky with demon blood!" "There are 3000 million sword immortals in the sky, even if they see me, they will all Lower your eyebrows!" "I want this day to be able to cover my eyes no more, and I want this land to be able to bury my heart no longer!" When that time comes... I must at least get half of the profit from this novel!
"That's it for today's lesson. You go back and digest it first!"

Fang Bai patted Li Guangguang's shoulder.

"goodbye teacher!"

Li Guangguang leaned over and saluted Fang Bai, then picked up the note that he regarded as a treasure, left the office quietly, and even closed the door for Fang Bai.

Fang Bai waved his hand and then stretched.

After teaching Li Guangguang a lesson, his brain was a little exhausted.

But he still has to prepare materials for parent-teacher conferences.

There is a parent-teacher meeting on Wednesday, and there are still two days left, so he has to make all the PPTs and stuff.

Not long after Li Guangguang left.

Two more little guys slipped into the office.

Fang Bai rubbed his eyes, and then found that there were two more figures in front of him, and he was immediately startled.

"Fuck..."

"When did you two come in?"

Fang Bai exclaimed.

Chen Yue and Zhang Jing smiled a little embarrassedly: "Just now..."

"What's wrong? What's going on?"

Fang Bai asked angrily.

"Just...just...when are you going to find our parents?"

Chen Yue asked hesitantly, and Zhang Jing nodded in agreement.

Fang Bai took a deep breath, and calmed down his frightened mood: "Just look for the parent meeting, isn't the parent meeting going to be held soon, after the parent meeting, I will talk to your parents alone!"

"Oh……"

Chen Yue nodded.

Seeing the impatient expression on Fang Bai's face, Chen Yue and Zhang Jing hesitated to speak.

"Don't worry, the teacher will definitely do what he promised you, but you also know that it is not easy to convince parents. Give the teacher some time!" Fang Bai sighed helplessly. road.

"Well, thank you teacher!"

The two girls thanked Fang Bai in unison.

"What's there to thank you for? Who made me your class teacher!"

Fang Bai waved his hand.

"So this is...deserved?"

Chen Yue stuck out her little tongue and said.

"Hey, can you talk? If you can't talk, talk less... This is what you deserve, this is what you should!" Fang Bai said angrily.

"whee……"

Chen Yue wrinkled her little nose carelessly.

　Today I was almost disturbed by someone again.

　　Sure enough, if there are too many people commenting, it will be easy to get confused.

　　No matter what, I just want to write happily.

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(End of this chapter)